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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

wonderful and awesome loved it i mean absolutely outstanding and marvelous the suspense is killing me now anam please update soon please please please and continue soon and this was so nice  i wonder what uday will do now u rock anam and thanks for the pm

 
Thanks Saira😃  suspense is important insh allah will update soon maybe today or 2mrw... keep reading to find out its ok😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007

Great Update Anam di! It Is Said That Every Love Story Has A Villan & So Do In This! Arjun Is The Villan For ManVeer & JRaj! Hope Everything Will Be Sorted As Soon As Possible! Ty 4 d pm & Update sooonn 

 
Thanks😃 so true villans are important... yh arjun is villan for both couple... keep reading to find out its ok😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asmimelody

superb update di:)thanx di apne jaldi update kia..:)di Manyatha ko Arjun ne kidnap kia hai na..i hate him...di pls jaldi se next part update keejiye pls..

 
Thanks Shivi😃 yh he has... I will do today or 2mrw insh allah😊
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Thanks Shonali😃 I'm glad you enjoyed it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Niha-

OMG all da villains on one side
ugghh this is so annoying
hope uday makes right choice
thx 4 pm

 
 
Thanks Niha bacha😃 yh it is but what can we do villans are also important...  he will do keep reading i might update later or 2mrw.. its ok😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: smiley12

awesome update anami hate arjun awww bloody loser😆do continue soon👍🏼love u 

 
Thanks Ria Bacha😃 so do i🤢... I will do 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IshaLuvUdayAshu

I hope both manyata and jay get save

 
Keep reading to find out😊
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Part 50

 

Uday was in Dilemma he didn't know what to do

 

Just then Rajbirs phone rang

 

Rajbir- Hello Mama haan mein araha hoon aapko leneh haan aap Birmingham mein wait karnah haan new street station mein  haan ok Mama

 

Rajbir Mom- Beta J bhi hamareh saat hai iseh bhi ghar anah tha patha nahiye kya hua hai keh rahiye Manya ko bahut miss kar rahiye hoon aur Manya neh iska phone bhi nahiye utayah

 

Rajbir- Mama aap J ka kyaal raknah mein araha hoon ok

 

Rajbir Mom- jaldi anah

 

He disconnected the phone

 

Rajbir- Uday jaldi seh batoa yeh Arjun ka kya mamlah hai aur kyun yeh J ko chahatha hai aur Manya ki kidnapping…. I'm going Birmingham to get Mom and J

 

Uday explained the whole story how Arjun knows J

 

Now Rajbir was angry

 

Rajbir- I wont leave that Arjun ab tum dheknah mein iska kya haal kartha hoon.. Uday tum chintha maat karoh Manya aur J kuch nahiye hogha hum duno ko bacha lenghe

 

Uday- I have a plan

 

Muted

 

Rajbir- tike hai tum ghar joa Remisha aur Krish akeleh hai mein 2 ghantoh mein ajongha uneh lekeh ok

 

Uday- tike hai

 

Rajbir dropped Uday home and went to Birmingham

 

Remisha- Uday do you want some tea/coffee

 

Uday- No I'm fine did Krishy eat

 

Remisha- a lil bit but hes very scared bari mushkil seh soyeh hai… when will Bro come back I'm so worried

 

Uday- Don't worry Remisha he will come back soon

 

After a few minutes Rajbir, J and Rajbir Mother was back

 

Rajbir Mother- Uday beta tum bhi yahin ho

 

Remisha- haan Mama woh humneh he kaha tha Krishy ko lekeh ajaye aur Manya bhi Raz Bro keh ghar mein gayi hui hai reheneh keh liye… toh humneh Uday aur Krishy ko yahaan bhulah liye

 

Rajbir Mom- Acha kiya.. Uday beta kisi cheez ki zaroorth toh nahiye hai

 

Uday- nahiye Aunty I'm fine thank you

 

Rajbir Mom- acha beta tum loge baatein karoh mujhe bahuth need arahiye hai, Remisha J aur Uday ko guest rooms dhekah denah

 

Remisha- Jee Mama

 

Now we see everyone in J's room talking

 

J- Jiju sa humneh medicine li hai khaanah bhi kayah ab humhe batiye hamaari Jiji kahan hai

 

Uday explained what had happened

 

J started crying

 

J- Arjun hamaari Jiji legaya Jiju sa how did you let that happen omg we need to find Jiji

 

Rajbir- J relax tumahare liye aur baby keh liye stress tike nahiye have some water relax please warnah you will get ill aur jab Manya agayi mujhe bahuth mareghi yeh Uday bach jaygha lekin mujhe latoh seh kaun bachaygha now listen clearly the only reason we told you this is we need your help to execute our plan

 

Uday- haan J I know it's hard for you right now please stress maat loa our plan will be successful… so hamara plan yeh hai keh (Muted)

 

Rajbir- hum saat mein hoghe ok I will follow u guys there I will make sure tumhe kuch nahiye hogha J… phir dekhnah hum Arjun ko kya hasher karteh hai

 

J- Jiju sa, Rajbir hum aap dono keh saat hai hum apni Jiji ko bachaneh keh liyeh kuch bhi kareghe... hum abhi chalteh hai

 

Uday- No J kal subja jayghe at 11am hum vaada karteh hai hamaari behen ko aur hamaari Princess ko kuch nahiye hogha hamare hothe hue I promise

 

J- humhe patha hai Jiju sa I trust you don't worry

 

Uday- ab hum chalteh you get some sleep tomorrow is a big day for us

 

Rajbir didn't move

 

Uday- Rajbir tum wahaan kya kareh ho chaloh goodnight J

 

J- Goodnight Jiju sa

 

Uday- Rajbir chaloh

 

Rajbir- Uday hum chal rehay hai tum joa goodnight J and goodnight baby I love u

 

J- Rajbir yeh tum kya kehrehay ho

 

Rajbir- hum baby seh baat kar rehay tehh na… tumhare bhai Hitler here I was thinking Viraj Bhai is Hitler Uday is same as him

 

Uday shouted from hallway

 

Uday- I heard that ab jaldi seh apneh kamreh mein joa

 

Rajbir- Ja rehay hai Hitler

 

Uday- kya kaha

 

Rajbir- Nothing ja rehay hai Uday Bhai

 

Rajbir went to his room

 

The next day we see Manya in that garage Arjun was talking to her

 

Manyata- Arjun don't laugh I promise you will never get J

 

Arjun- Manyaaata you don't know that Uday he can do anything for you so it's obvious he will give your sister and get you

 

Manyata- He wont he loves J as his own sister he would never do that

 

Arjun- does he I didn't know that (laughs) you just wait and watch he will give me J end of the day J ki asli jagha hamare saat hai hamara bacha hai ausekeh paas… now all I want is to live with J and my bacha that's it simple isliye yeh kidnapping karwai I know she would never come to me like that isliye…. I have nothing to do with you Manyaata just want my J and bacha

 

Manyata- that's never happening J tumhare saat kabhi nahiye jayghi humneh khod auseh kaha tha shaadi karleh tumseh she refused herself…. She wont ever stay with you

 

Arjun slapped her and pulled her hair

 

Arjun- if she doesn't come to me hum tumhe ause Uday keh saat kabhi khush nahiye reheneh denghe I promise you that RAGHUBEER!!!!!!!

 
Raghubeer-  Arjun humneh ause Uday ko phone kiya tha he's not answering the phone

 

Arjun- hum khud phone karteh hai tum isepeh nazar rakho

 

Raghubeer- haamari nazar hamesha he Manyata par hai humhe bahut achi laghti hai humhe (he touched her face)

 

Manyata moved her face other side and kicked Raghubeer

 

Manyata- don't u dare touch me with your dirty hands touch me again and see what I do to you

 

Raghubeer- hum toh chahateh hai tum humhe haat lagoa… Arjun isekeh haat kholedethe hai waise bhi itneh pyaare haat hai aise baandeh ache nahiye lagteh hai

 

Arjun- JUST SHUT UP RAGHUBEER TOUCH HER AGAIN AND SEE WHAT I DO TO YOUR FACE DAFO HOJO YAHAAN SEH SAMJEH JAKEH DEKHO BAHAAR UDAY AIYA YAH NAHIYE GO NOW!!!!!!!

 

Raghubeer went outside

 

Arjun rang Uday

 

Uday- Hum arahaye hai

 

Arjun- Jaldi aao humseh aur sabar nahiye hotha humhe hamaari J aur bache ko dheknah hai

 

Uday- hum paanch minute mein poach rehay

 

After 5 minutes Uday had come

 

Raghubeer- Arjun Uday agaya hai J ko lekar

 

Manyata was shocked 

 

Manyata- KYA!!!!!! Nahiye Uday would never do that

 

Arjun- Raghubeer iska moo band karoh jaldi seh aur iseh andar lehjoa

 

Raghubeer tied her mouth with cloth and took her inside

 

Uday came inside with J

 

Uday- hum agaye Arjun with J yeh dekho J yahaan hai

 

J- Arjun hum agaye hai please hamaari Jiji ko leh aao please hum tumhare agaye haat jhorteh hai

 

Uday- yeh loh tumhaari J humhe Manyata do

 

Arjun- Uday tum itni jaldi manega Manyaata ko toh poorah bharosah tha tum J ko kabhi nahiye donghe she's your so called sister (he laughed) I know you so well I was sure you will come for Manyaata and give me J…. J hum tumhe dhekar bahauth khush hai

 

Uday- pehele haamari Manyata

 

J- Arjun dehdo aise Jiji please

 

Arjun- lathe hai RAGHUBEER!!!!!

 

Raghubeer came with Manyata

 

Arjun- yeh loh Manyaata ajoa J hamare paas

 

J went towards Arjun Manyata wasn't going towards Uday

 

Raghubeer- Manyata kya baat hai tumhe nahiye janah Uday keh saat chaloh hamare pass rehjoa waise bhi tumhare binah hamara dill nahiye laghega

 

Arjun- Uday lejoa akeh aise lagtha bechaari bahuth shock mein hai how can you leave J here

 

Uday came and dragged Manyata from there she wasn't going with him

 

Manyata- choro mujhe I'm not leaving without my sister

 

Uday- seedhe seh chalo hamare saat

 

Manyata- nahiye jayghe never not without my sister Uday how could you tumneh J ko iskeh saat kaise

 

Arjun- Manyaata jaldi seh joa

 

Uday-  (Angrily) Manyaata jaldi seh chaloh hamare saat warnah hum tumhe zabardasti seh lekeh jaighe samji chalo

 

Manyata- nahiye jayghe tumhare saat tum hothe kaun ho mujheseh aise baat karneh waleh ab hum princess seh Manyata hoghe Arjun you were right this Uday can do anything for his matlab you make me sick Yuvraj Udayveer Singh you are disgusting humhe paneh keh liye you gave my sister to him

 

Uday- (Angrily) HAAN I DID WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO? JO CHEEZE HAMAARI HAI WOH HAMAARI HAI TUMNEH HUMHE BAHUTH INTEZZAR KARWAYA HAI AB HUM TUMHE YAHAAN TOH NAHIYE CHORSAKTEH HAI… HUM INDIA SEH SIRF TUMAHARE LIYE YAHAAN AIYE TEH TUMNEH YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH KI PORI IMAGE HE KHARAB KARDI HUM MAJNU BANGAYE TEH LEKIN AB NAAHIYE SHAADI TOH TUMHE HUMSEH KARNI HAI ISLIYE HUM TUMHAARI ISSE BEHEN JISNEH HAMAARI KITNI BEZAATHI KARWAIYE HAI SEEDHE SEEDHE ISEE ARJUN SEH SHAADI KARLETHI TOH YEH TUMHE TOH YAHAAN NAHIYE LATHA. NOW KEEP THIS J HERE ISKI ASLI JAGHA ISSE ARJUN KEH SAAT HAI NOW CHALOH

 

Manyata-NAHIYE JAYGHE

 

Uday was very angry now so he slapped Manyata across the face

 

Manyata- tumneh humhe tapar marah how dare you Uday?

 

Uday- CHALOH HAMARE SAAT (he dragged her outside)

 

She kicked him left his hand and tried to go back inside

 

Uday- MANYATA!!!!!!!!! (he grabbed her hand)

 

Manyata- UDAY CHORO MUJHE

 

Uday- Princess look at me

 

Manyata- ab Princess hoghe tumhare liye you make me sick tumneh humhe tadap bhi marah

 

Uday- I'm sorry Princess karnah parah kaisi rahiye hamaari acting yeh sab hamara aur Rajbir ka plan that tum chintha maat karoh hum aur Rajbir J ko lekeh aiyenghe I promise tum abhi ghar joa ok Remisha gadi mein intezzar kar rahiye hai jo jaldi seh joa

 

Manyata- lekin Uday tum, J

 

Uday- humhe kuch nahiye hogha ok hum J ko lekeh aiyghe promise  joa

 

Manyata went towards the car park and Uday went inside from the window

 

Arjun- J chaloh hum bhi chalteh hai

 

J- Arjun humhe paani chahiye hai

 

Arjun- hum abhi lekeh athe hai

 

Raghubeer- hum lathe hai na

 

J- nahiye hamara Arjun lekeh aiygha

 

Arjun- Hum lathe hai J hum sach ab tumhara saat denah chahateh aur apneh bache keh saat rehenah chahteh hai… Raghubeer tum upar  joa

 

Raghubeer went upstairs

 

Rajbir was hiding upstairs Raghubeer saw him

 

Rajbir punched Raghubeer

 

Uday came from the other room

 

Uday- Rajbir jaldi seh joa J nicheh hai akeli auseh lekeh chaleh joa jaldi hum isse Raghubeer ko dheklenghe joa

 

Rajbir went running downstairs and hugged J

 

Rajbir- J  tum tike toh ho ab chaloh yahaan seh

 

J- hum tike hai Rajbir tum chintha maat karoh hamaare jiju sa hamaari jiji ko legaye im very happy thank god hamaari jiji ko kuch nahiye hua

 

Rajbir- haan ab jaldi seh chaloh

 

Arjun came with water and saw J and Rajbir

 

Arjun- J where r u going?

 

He got his gun out Uday jumped from the staircase and hit Arjun the gun fell out of his hand

 

Uday- RAJBIR JALDI SEH JOA

 

J- hum jiju sa ko aiseh chorkeh nahiye jaighe

 

Rajbir- J hum idhar he hai tum baar joa

 

J- nahiye hum bhi yahin rehenghe

 

Uday- TUM DONO JOA

 

Arjun got up

 

Uday and Arjun were fighting

 

Raghubeer came down he shot Rajbir on the arm

 

J- RAJBIR!!!!

 

Rajbir- J hum tike hai tum joa please

 

Manyata was outside waiting in the car she heard the gunshot and went inside the house

 

Manyata- J, Rajbir

 

Rajbir- Manya iseh lehjoh please I'm fine go!!!!

 

Rajbir hit Raghubeer badly and Uday hit Arjun

 

Raghubeer was unconscious on the floor now Rajbir went to help Uday he hit Arjun badly as well now Arjun was on the floor unconscious.

 

J- Rajbir we need to go hospital chaloh you're hand is bleeding badly (she started crying)

 

Rajbir- humhe kuch nahiye hua I'm fine don't worry J tum toh tike honah

 

J- hum tike hai

 

Rajbir- no crying now not good for the baby

 

Uday- Princess why didn't you go

 

Manyata- Uday I heard the gunshot so I came running

 

Uday- Princess I'm fine J is fine Rajbir hurt his hand we need to go now ab chaloh

 

Eevryone went outside

 

Just then J saw Arjun coming towards them with a gun

 

Arjun- I'm gna kill you Manyaata tumneh humhe hamaari J seh alaag kardiya

 

He was about to shoot

 

Manyata and Uday were busy talking

 

J ran towards them and came infront of Manyata pushed her and got shot

 

J- AHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Rajbir came running

 

Rajbir- J!!!!!!!! J!!!!!

 

Arjun came running

 

Arjun- J tumneh yeh kya kiya J!!!!!!!

 

J- Jijiii

 

Manyata was crying badly

 

Manyata- J yeh tumneh kya kiya

 

J- Jijiii hum aapseh bahuth pyaar karteh hai aur aahhh yeh Arjun aapko marnah chahata tha par dekiye na humhe he goli mardi… tum haamari jiji kuch nahiye bigaar paiye

 

Arjun started crying

 

Arjun- Nahiye hum tumhe nahiye ise Manyaata ko marnah chahateh isneh humhe alaag kiya.. J utho please

 

J went unconscious

 

Precap

 

Rajbir punched Arjun

 

Manyata was crying badly

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Posted: 11 years ago

 aww uday slapped manyta on his faceand i hate this raghubeer 🤢and arjun shot jai with his gun poor jai😭i hate this arjuni want  to see him  in jail  he kill his own child

AWESOME UDATE ANAM 👏👏👏DO CONTINUE SOON👍🏼CANT WAIT FOR NEXT PART LOVE U🤗🤗

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