Last 24 hrs "kr OS" - Page 17

sad sad u mde me cry all the way kria dead...rey dead soul...swayam dead body too...vishaka went away n she hates them all...haye yaar a rlly sad update...

sorry for commenting so late!!..actually was umm stalking this OS 😆and read it before u had send the pm but cud not cmmnt that tym ..well it was osam!! that's all we cud say..really a touchy one ..keep writing more. Thanks for the pm 

Amazing upodate cookie nd aroma.kria took poision.

Oh god  y did she do this.

i was crying reading the update.😭

Nice to see Kria trusting Vish.😊

It was superb duperb one and the wauy Vish reacted agree she had her griveriences...

really really emotional updte ...👏

luved it...⭐️

Hey cookie n aroma amazing story guys

 

(sorry m commenting so late...*kan pakde*maaf kardo*plzzz*)

 

loved it to the core

 

awesomeee writing skills...really gr8

 

loved the way u described her last day's works..

.

(i was really scared to hear that it was her last day..somewhere i knew she's

gonna die in this story...)

 

 

"i gave him a tight slap"

 

oh wowww..i wish aisa sach mein ho d3 mein...

 

loved everything from her entry in college..firing vp,meeting her friends

slapping shivam, dance challenge vodka shots...each n every thing...just

awesomeeely  written

 

"i switch off all light of my house because today i want to stay in  darkness i

noe u guyz noe dat m scared of darkness... "i speak to it  will u b my friend" ...

nd m waiting for response from this darkness ... nd guess what he said yes ...

today m no more scared  from dark ."

 

wonderful lines mahn...totally loved it...super amazing

 

then that letter...omggg superb imagination

 

sh*t i was hell scared what was in that locker...

 

vish is really a true friend...adore their friendship here...

 

it does'nt matters him dat she lives or die''''''''''

 

HOW can HE tell this...she is the LOVE of his life...dint like it!!

 

Seeing the photo they all went numb nt uttering a single word frm their mouths

. rey nd swayum did'nt respond at all they standing there lifeless as if their

souls were snatched away frm them unwantedly '''.

 

(I was really crying reading this part...hell u guys made me cry...but nicely

written...)

 

ten years has passed bt they did not know where is rey

 

omggg...cant even see him like this...

 

 he said- this is my punishment for not believe in love . main apne aap ko

khatam nahi kar sakta is liye i kill my self daily .. nd i think this my punishment

love u always my BATCUTTER

 

😭😭😭*cry*cry*cry*😭😭😭

 

lastly before i forget...Fabulous Title!!

 

U r really amazing writers..

 

thanx for the pm

 

-kinjal

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--

Hey cookie n aroma amazing story guys

 

(sorry m commenting so late...*kan pakde*maaf kardo*plzzz*)

 

loved it to the core

 

awesomeee writing skills...really gr8

 

loved the way u described her last day's works..

.

(i was really scared to hear that it was her last day..somewhere i knew she's

gonna die in this story...)

 

 

"i gave him a tight slap"

 

oh wowww..i wish aisa sach mein ho d3 mein...

 

loved everything from her entry in college..firing vp,meeting her friends

slapping shivam, dance challenge vodka shots...each n every thing...just

awesomeeely  written

 

"i switch off all light of my house because today i want to stay in  darkness i

noe u guyz noe dat m scared of darkness... "i speak to it  will u b my friend" ...

nd m waiting for response from this darkness ... nd guess what he said yes ...

today m no more scared  from dark ."

 

wonderful lines mahn...totally loved it...super amazing

 

then that letter...omggg superb imagination

 

sh*t i was hell scared what was in that locker...

 

vish is really a true friend...adore their friendship here...

 

it does'nt matters him dat she lives or die''''''''''

 

HOW can HE tell this...she is the LOVE of his life...dint like it!!

 

Seeing the photo they all went numb nt uttering a single word frm their mouths

. rey nd swayum did'nt respond at all they standing there lifeless as if their

souls were snatched away frm them unwantedly '''.

 

(I was really crying reading this part...hell u guys made me cry...but nicely

written...)

 

ten years has passed bt they did not know where is rey

 

omggg...cant even see him like this...

 

 he said- this is my punishment for not believe in love . main apne aap ko

khatam nahi kar sakta is liye i kill my self daily .. nd i think this my punishment

love u always my BATCUTTER

 

😭😭😭*cry*cry*cry*😭😭😭

 

lastly before i forget...Fabulous Title!!

 

U r really amazing writers..

 

thanx for the pm

 

-kinjal

It was a touching OS...just another remnder that our life is so filled with so many things which we hardly get a second chance at..& when we realize the time is already up 😊

sob sob sob

hey aroma and cookie ur this os all 3 part hav brought a tear from my eyes it was heartouching update the way u both describe the update the way kria leaved her 24 hrs life was really making me cry while dying also she smile and went it was awesome guys pata nahi tha aroma aur cookie itna senti update bhi lik sakte hai u both r great loved ur update till core u both r amazing

Awww nyc but sad ending...😭😭😭😭

you made my hell state is was crying really badly... 😭