Dil Se Dil Thak on RajeevAamna..Chk pg 150 Imp.. - Page 81

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ambarinaaltaf

suriiiii diii atlast u contd...wopiieee....nw abt ur partt...totalllyy rockinnn ek dum jakkas tha...

luved the way khushi was tauntin raj...and hun it was dammm longyyyyyyyyyyyy partt lolx..i was lyk waitin that whn khushi;z line will finish..n whn hers line finishes..raj ka dialogue aajata..hehehe...

bt seriouslyy mast part tha..bt yaar yeh taniya ka kch karooo..ya tho maar daalo ya kch aisa kar doo which is equal to her death lolx..

yaarr yeh raj aur khushi ke beech ki duriyan hatao na...

btw raj aur taniya joh bhi plan karre woh fail hojana lolx..

n plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz let raj get to knw abt the truth..

u noe wat suri di frm past 2-3 dayz im cmin regularly to FF section lekin saala koi story update he nai karra..i fink only 2 ppl did ryt nw i dunno their name exactly bt will say user name..one is belania..and other is anam_azar kch aise hee...

u noe wat i expected annaya to update bt she too dint doo..and ATLASTT u did!! lolx..btw suri di aap 15 hrs mai ek part likhte ho na then jab 15 hrs mai next part likh doo jst mail me so that ill b the first one to comment lolx..uske baad whnevr u wish post kardena part yahan lolx..no offence to anybodyy...

btw chalo surii di whn u goin to post next partt..yaar eid ko bhola tho eid ke 3 weeks baad pst kiya i fink..ab if i say diwali then diwali ke bhi 3 weeks baad kya..lolxx..

btw forgot to say one thing u write every part soo well that im 10000000000000000000% sure that u can get job of writer in any telly show lolx..



Amby yaar tumhara comment dekh kar tho mera dil garden garden ho gaya.. i seriously lovedddddddddd your comment yaar...😳😳😳 amby fikar not raj aur khushi ko tho kareeb aana hii padega.. aur us tanya ka kya karna hai maine abhi se soch kar rakh liya hai... & believe me it is something really very worse.. & which i'am sure all of you will enjoy.... 😉aur dear 15hrs mein ek part likhthi hoon... tho abhi ek aur likh doon... ab agar main ek aur part likhne baiti tho mere ghar waale mujhe zaroor dhanda maarenge....😆 par don't worry main jald se jald continue karne kii poori koshish karoongi... love ya.... no thanku for such a sweet comment......🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part suri dear!!!!!

Im glad u finallyyy continued!!

Post the next part soon plzzzzzz!!!! 😳


luv,
vandu 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Awesome part suri dear!!!!! Im glad u finallyyy continued!!
Post the next part soon plzzzzzz!!!! 😳
luv, vandu 😉


vandu dear me happy you liked the part..i'll surely try & post the next part soon...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
wow suri di masth part tooo toooo gooood loved it just amazing....hamesha ki tarah fantastic....bravo....bohot mazzza ayah padne meh and very emotional...lmao!!!pooor raj, khushi neh bechareh ka itna bura haaaal kiya keh ussseh tanya ke pass jaaana para lekin tanya neh toh usseh bi burra haaal kiya atleast khushi he kuch toh banaya thaa lekin tanya hehehehe ek ghanta sirf sochne mein...i don't get this raj woh kaise soch sakta hai ke khushi uskeh bagair khaegi the thing is woh khushi ko samajna hinahin chahata like u said jab raj usseh batein sunah raha thaaa and khushi muskura rahi thi toh uss muskurahat ke peeeche woh dard chupaa thaaa we noticed heheheh after reading that portion..tooo gooood dear loved ti continue sooon ... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey!!!
great going....pls continue soon.....its bcumin really interesting.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: aanita12

Hey!!!
great going....pls continue soon.....its bcumin really interesting.... 👏


thanku so much...i'll try & continue soon...😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Honii

wow suri di masth part tooo toooo gooood loved it just amazing....hamesha ki tarah fantastic....bravo....bohot mazzza ayah padne meh and very emotional...lmao!!!pooor raj, khushi neh bechareh ka itna bura haaaal kiya keh ussseh tanya ke pass jaaana para lekin tanya neh toh usseh bi burra haaal kiya atleast khushi he kuch toh banaya thaa lekin tanya hehehehe ek ghanta sirf sochne mein...i don't get this raj woh kaise soch sakta hai ke khushi uskeh bagair khaegi the thing is woh khushi ko samajna hinahin chahata like u said jab raj usseh batein sunah raha thaaa and khushi muskura rahi thi toh uss muskurahat ke peeeche woh dard chupaa thaaa we noticed heheheh after reading that portion..tooo gooood dear loved ti continue sooon ... 👏


hana dear no thanku yaar..you have given such a sweet comment... me completely flattered.....😳 me will surely try & post the next part soon...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
awwww it was tooooooo gud...died of laughing seeing raj ka condition 😆 waise to daya bhi a rahi thi bechare pe..but u no he deserved that for distrusting khushi so easily..yar bt ab bahut ho gaya....sab thik karo plzzzzzzzzzz..chalo post the part soon will be waiting 4 it
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: varallika

awwww it was tooooooo gud...died of laughing seeing raj ka condition 😆 waise to daya bhi a rahi thi bechare pe..but u no he deserved that for distrusting khushi so easily..yar bt ab bahut ho gaya....sab thik karo plzzzzzzzzzz..chalo post the part soon will be waiting 4 it



varu dear no thanku yaar... you know even i think raj kii haalat is really funny..bechara...😆😆😆 but dear fikar not main agle part se thoda thoda karke un dono ko kareeb laane kii koshish karoongi....😉😉😉me will surely try & continue soon....😊😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey...

my first comment!!!!!!!!

I have been reading continuously and its just awesome... this part took my brath away.. I just hope.. Sujal aur us.. stupid tanya ka plan fail hojaye... aur uss gadhe piyush ki sachaai saamne aajaye....

Do continue sooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnn... can't wait... 👏

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