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hello every one..
im back with one more ff..
i know that i don't update regular but i couldn't stop myself from writing.
hope u will like it..
please let me know should i continue or not.
please do comment
prologue-
in mumbai-pune highway-
around 2:30 a.m.,on the deserted road,both side jungle,heavy rainfall like
cats and dogs,lighting strikes,strong wind blowing,not even a single sole
could be seen around.it seems like a nature is angry,full of rage,disastrous.
and in the middle of no where on highway,we see a car driving on road in this worstcondition of weather.inside a car,we see a couple seated,man on wheels and lady on passenger seat.
man-"oh god!! (look up in sky)what happen to this weather ,before a
hour it was alright.(frowning)strange!!!...very strange."
lady-"arnab!!! please concentrate on driving.on one side we r so late on this deserted road and on another side ,this wheather is so bad.please drive properly.i m already very scared.what if accident happens."
arnad(rolling his eyes)-"madhu!! relax!! nothing will happen.we will reach safe. its just bad weather and u know mumbai weather is so unpredictable.u r over-reacting like always"
madhu(angrily shouts and turns to him)-what???what did u said??i m over-reacting??always??
arnab!!!i will..."
arnab(looks at her)-"looks madhu.i m sorry.i didn't mean like that..i just said.."
madhu-"what??what u just said i heard properly.i m not deaf..how can u say that"(and turns from him angrily and looks in front avoiding him)
arnab(looks at her,try to hold her hand with other on wheels)-"look madhu!!i was.."
madhu(horror,shouts)-"arnab!!! looks front!!!ahhh"
arnab looks forward and found a figure standing in middle of road
****BAMP!!!!!!*****
the figure collided with car and rolls over car and fall behind the car on ground.
arnab(looks horried)-"oh shit!!!"
looks at madhu shocked,horrified face and then in
rear-view mirror,founding a figure lying on ground and moves out of car.soon
madhu also come out and both ran to figure.madhu holds arnab hand.
madhu-"is he..d..dead??"
arnab(bends down)-"let me check!!"
arnab turns the person and found a boy on early twenties,fair-white skin,
blood oozing out of his forehead,nose,mouth,cuts at various parts of body,clothes torn,whole body covered with deep cuts,wounds and blood.
arnab check his pulse and breathe a sigh of relief.
arnab(looks back at madhu)-"he is alive!! but has very low pulse rate.he is
injured very bad,oh god how miserable he looks,madhu!!he is not injured only because of accident but also someone has tortured him physically.we have to take him to the hospital."
madhu-"poor boy!! how can someone be so ruthless."
arnab-"lets take him to the car"
madhu nodded and helped arnab to take him at back seat of car.
arnab checked his pocket..
madhu(confused)-"what r u doing??lets take him to hospital.he doesn't have
much time."
arnab-"i know madhu,i m checking for any identity,so that we can inform his family ,by the time u call mr.joshi to be prepared with OT and necessary arrangement.he
need immediate treatment."
madhu dails number and inform their family doctor,mr.joshi about the condition of boy and tells him prepare for treatement.
madhu-"i informed him.have u found something??"
arnab-"yes..his driving lenience...his name is ABHAY RIACHAND.."
please let me know ur views.
note:
it is abhiya story with a different track.
no supernatural stuff.
there will be no character sketch.
some characters from other shows also
index-
prologue- page 1
chapter 1- page 4
chapter 2-page 7
chapter 3-page 10
chapter 4-page 11
chapter 5-page 13
chapter 6-page 15
chapter 7-page 17
im back with one more ff..
i know that i don't update regular but i couldn't stop myself from writing.
hope u will like it..
please let me know should i continue or not.
please do comment
prologue-
in mumbai-pune highway-
around 2:30 a.m.,on the deserted road,both side jungle,heavy rainfall like
cats and dogs,lighting strikes,strong wind blowing,not even a single sole
could be seen around.it seems like a nature is angry,full of rage,disastrous.
and in the middle of no where on highway,we see a car driving on road in this worstcondition of weather.inside a car,we see a couple seated,man on wheels and lady on passenger seat.
man-"oh god!! (look up in sky)what happen to this weather ,before a
hour it was alright.(frowning)strange!!!...very strange."
lady-"arnab!!! please concentrate on driving.on one side we r so late on this deserted road and on another side ,this wheather is so bad.please drive properly.i m already very scared.what if accident happens."
arnad(rolling his eyes)-"madhu!! relax!! nothing will happen.we will reach safe. its just bad weather and u know mumbai weather is so unpredictable.u r over-reacting like always"
madhu(angrily shouts and turns to him)-what???what did u said??i m over-reacting??always??
arnab!!!i will..."
arnab(looks at her)-"looks madhu.i m sorry.i didn't mean like that..i just said.."
madhu-"what??what u just said i heard properly.i m not deaf..how can u say that"(and turns from him angrily and looks in front avoiding him)
arnab(looks at her,try to hold her hand with other on wheels)-"look madhu!!i was.."
madhu(horror,shouts)-"arnab!!! looks front!!!ahhh"
arnab looks forward and found a figure standing in middle of road
****BAMP!!!!!!*****
the figure collided with car and rolls over car and fall behind the car on ground.
arnab(looks horried)-"oh shit!!!"
looks at madhu shocked,horrified face and then in
rear-view mirror,founding a figure lying on ground and moves out of car.soon
madhu also come out and both ran to figure.madhu holds arnab hand.
madhu-"is he..d..dead??"
arnab(bends down)-"let me check!!"
arnab turns the person and found a boy on early twenties,fair-white skin,
blood oozing out of his forehead,nose,mouth,cuts at various parts of body,clothes torn,whole body covered with deep cuts,wounds and blood.
arnab check his pulse and breathe a sigh of relief.
arnab(looks back at madhu)-"he is alive!! but has very low pulse rate.he is
injured very bad,oh god how miserable he looks,madhu!!he is not injured only because of accident but also someone has tortured him physically.we have to take him to the hospital."
madhu-"poor boy!! how can someone be so ruthless."
arnab-"lets take him to the car"
madhu nodded and helped arnab to take him at back seat of car.
arnab checked his pocket..
madhu(confused)-"what r u doing??lets take him to hospital.he doesn't have
much time."
arnab-"i know madhu,i m checking for any identity,so that we can inform his family ,by the time u call mr.joshi to be prepared with OT and necessary arrangement.he
need immediate treatment."
madhu dails number and inform their family doctor,mr.joshi about the condition of boy and tells him prepare for treatement.
madhu-"i informed him.have u found something??"
arnab-"yes..his driving lenience...his name is ABHAY RIACHAND.."
please let me know ur views.
note:
it is abhiya story with a different track.
no supernatural stuff.
there will be no character sketch.
some characters from other shows also
index-
prologue- page 1
chapter 1- page 4
chapter 2-page 7
chapter 3-page 10
chapter 4-page 11
chapter 5-page 13
chapter 6-page 15
chapter 7-page 17
chapter 8-page 20
chapter 9- page 21
my other work-
it is of my favirote serial "pyar ki ye ekk kahani"...a supernatural ,dark love story...
mini ff-falls apart
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2756185
it is of one of my favirote serial"love ne mila di jodi"...a human love story..
ss-my way of redemption
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2960151#56682799
it is of my favirote serial"madhubala-ek ishq ek junoon" a simple human love story.
ff-distiny calls!!!!
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3442076#76374198
chapter 9- page 21
my other work-
it is of my favirote serial "pyar ki ye ekk kahani"...a supernatural ,dark love story...
mini ff-falls apart
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2756185
it is of one of my favirote serial"love ne mila di jodi"...a human love story..
ss-my way of redemption
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2960151#56682799
it is of my favirote serial"madhubala-ek ishq ek junoon" a simple human love story.
ff-distiny calls!!!!
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3442076#76374198
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