A Weird Game of Love (ON HOLD) - Page 11

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Omg so big chapter, thank u for giving us so large chappy.
Now coming to the update, it was brilliantly written and explained.
I loved each and every part of it, and yea here jay's character is very nice.
So, jay loves piya par piya toh bas abhay ke hai, so waiting for abhay's entry.
Hope piya is in no danger and jay finds her soon.
continue asap.

Thank you so much romi. 😳  Yep the update was large so I took one whole day for writing that two parts. 😛
Oh wow you liked that writing and explanation? It was my first attempt in writing third person POV. I never wrote in third person's POV as it is difficult to write for me. Thank you so much romi for liking my writing. 😉
Yep here Jeh is positive character so he is a nice person.
Abhay will make his entry in next chapter. 😳
Where is Piya you will find that in next chapter too. So wait and wait... 😛 😳

Originally posted by: bellaaa

awsome concept
loved it
jeh is nic ehere
but sorry jeh piya toh abhay ki  hai heheh
waiting for abhiya meeting
cont soon

Thank you so much bellaaa. 😳
Yeah Jeh is nice and positive character. 😛
he he he abhiya will meet next chapter. 🥳

Originally posted by: abhiya_kapi

Thank you so much romi. 😳0„2 Yep the update was large so I took one whole day for writing that two parts. 😛
Oh wow you liked that writing and explanation? It was my first attempt in writing third person POV. I never wrote in third person's POV as it is difficult to write for me. Thank you so much romi for liking my writing. 😉
Yep here Jeh is positive character so he is a nice person.
Abhay will make his entry in next chapter. 😳
Where is Piya you will find that in next chapter too. So wait and wait... 😛 😳

Omg u wrote in one day so much I would have taken 1 week or so. Dear u wrote third person pov wonderfully, and yea I really like ur writing style and especially the way u explain each and every miniature details.
Wow abhay in next part, okk will wait for it dear.Edited by Rmuk - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Omg u wrote in one day so much I would have taken 1 week or so. Dear u wrote third person pov wonderfully, and yea I really like ur writing style and especially the way u explain each and every miniature details.
Wow abhay in next part, okk will wait for it dear.

😛 Yep wrote in 1 day. But I'm slow in writing, still I managed to complete 18 pages in 1 day. 😛 Thank you once again romi. 😳
Yep abhay will make his entry in next chapter. 😛

Wowee!! Loved it!!
-Gauri

Originally posted by: pkyekrox

Wowee!! Loved it!!
-Gauri

Thank you Gauri. 😳

Awesome update but tere har FF mai Abhay late entry kyun marta hai?Now I guess ab Pia drunk hai toh Abhay aayegaEdited by cuteshrishti - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Awesome update but tere har FF mai Abhay late entry kyun marta hai?Now I guess ab Pia drunk hai toh Abhay aayega

Hero hain na? Hamesha late hi aata hain. 😆 Meri life main toh abhi tak nahin aaya. 😭  Toh zara socho Piya ke life main fhir bhi jaldi  aaya hain. 😆

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Visu

I love this ff too 

Thank you so much Abiya_Visu. 😳

Awesum update renu
lovd it
so jeh n pia shares a nice bond bt pia didnt undrstand jeh feelings in even 2 years.
i hope abhay save his piyoo
lol