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Hello guys!
I decided to write an OS. It's just a silly try so do forgive the mistakes.
This is my first OS and I'm not great like the rest of the writers in this forum but please do give it a shot!It's just a silly try so do forgive the mistakes.😃
Here goes:
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In Uday's room
Uday sat in his room, staring at blank wall remembering all the moments spent with Manyata.
"Why?"
He wondered why the love of his life always hurt him.
He started to question if Manyata ever thought of him more than a friend.
He began remembering the events that had happened today.
Manyata had left the wedding mandap for that Majnu. JN had tried to marry me. Manyata came back home with tears and betrayed everyone.
"STOP!" Uday said to himself
He tried to stop thinking about Manyata. He ordered a servant to bring him a drink.
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In Manyata's room
"Why Manyata why? Why are you so foolish? Why would you meet Akash on your wedding day?" said Manyata to herself.
Just then she heard laughter. She turned around to see JN laughing her head off.
"So Jiji, how does it feel hurting your family and Uday? I bet you feel so delighted," JN remarked.
"Go away JN. It's all your fault," Manyata cried.
"You can blame me all you want Jiji but it was your stupidness to believe me after all I did to you. Also, I'll leave just like everyone else in your life." JN retorted.
As JN left, Manyata started sobbing.
For 30 minutes she remained in the same position doing the same thing,crying.
Self-pity is really your foe than a friend.
All of a sudden, Manyata came back to her senses.
"You'll have to fix your mistake."
Manyata decided go to Uday's mahal to give an apology.
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In Uday's Mahal
As she reached there, she was astonished by how lavishing the place looked.
She asked a servant where Uday's room was and proceded to go meet Uday.
Right before she opened the door, she wondered if Uday would forgive her. Her heart said yes but her mind said no. She decided to follow her heart.
She opened the door and was heart-broken to see Uday's state; drinking with tears in his eyes.
Uday stood up from his chair and looked at Manyata with cold eyes.
"Are you here to give me more pain?"
As he said that,Manyata ran to him and hugged him so very tightly.
"I'm sorry Uday. I never meant to hurt you. Please Uday forgive me. Give me one more chance."
As Manyata looked up they realized how close they were. Just then Manyata closed the distance between them for forever and locked her lips with his.
Uday desired that and so did Manyata. They were both thirsty for each other.
"You're wrong Uday, I'm here to give you love." Manyata whispered.
And then the lights went off and the only light shining was the fire of love.
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Sorry for the mistakes!
Thanks for reading. 😃
AND, a BIG THANK YOU to all the writers of the forum who write such marvelous pieces.😉
Because of you guys, the readers don't have to read my bad ones.😆
Love,
Piggies😳
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