Originally posted by: leafmaria
It's a new concept, I really like it. π
Don't get offend or anything, but Viren and Maanvi don't feel right to me. They are so different. I usually see the people while I am reading, and when I was reading this chapter, I just could not imagine Viren and Maanvi together. I mean Maanvi is a bubbly girl, and Viren is a serious one.I like how Viren respects Maanvi's wishes, but I have a question, why was he there, is he somehow related to Maanvi?I really can't wait to know how Virat and Jeeviak fit in the story.πPM when you update.
Awesome Concept Buddies Only U Guys Could Come Up
with A Dhamedaar Mysterious Concept
I Love It So Its Viren And Manvi And Have A Child Muskaan WoW Never Expected Viren And Manvi As A Couple But Its Different Really Great
Cant Wait To See How Virat And Jeevika Fit Into This
Update Soon And Do PM Me
Thanksz Ur All Amazing Writers Im Damn Sure Alot Of Fabulous Updates Are To Come
Originally posted by: nishi12345
omggg so viran and manvi got married like this it was a great one loved manvi's words at mandap truely jhansi ki rani... i wud prefer if she slapped tat idiot person whom she was going to marry bt never mind
luking forward for another ausumn updatecont soon dearies...
Good installment Fiza di...
I am proud of Maanvi, the perfect woman...And Viren is no less, accepting a girl who would otherwise have been shunned by the society...Good going guys!
Originally posted by: uzmasable
hey your ff is awesome
it has lot of suspense store in itplzzz pm me alsoand also introduce viraat soonwill virman unite at the end ?
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