os when raya meet after 5 years comp

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Posted: 2012-06-25T02:01:27Z
when ram nd priya meet 4 first time after 5 year by junior goli ...
it has been so many days ram met junior goli nd they became gud friends ... ram don't know that she is her daughter...
ram has gone 2 her bithday party as junr goli invited ...
convo:-
ram : hey! little princess happy birthday... 
jr: thanx uncle..
ram; u ur looking like a doll.. where is ur mummy?
jt: she is inside .. vo arrangement kar rahi hai..
ram: this is 4 u...(he gave a gift 2 her)
priya voice 4rm inside jiya come inside beta i have 2 talk 2 u...
jiya: ha mummy aa rahi hu..ram uncle mai thori der mai aa rahi hu...
ram ko call aata hai aur vo side mai call attend karne chala jata hai then priya comes with cake then go inside to bring knife
(,both of them don't see eachother)jiya goes 2 ram 
jiya: ram uncle mai cake katne wali hu aap yaha aa jayiye
then her friends nd ram come near cake
then priya come with knife nd give it 2 jiya (at that time ram dont notice he was upto somthing else)..but when all start singing 
happy birthday ram sees towards that nd got schocked 2 see priya..
ram:priya tum jinda ho..
priya cake cutwa hi rahi thi ki vo upper dekti hai schocked 2 see ram
priya:ram aap yaha..
jiya: mamma aap ram uncle ko janti ho...
ram:jiya priya tumhari mumma hai
jiya:ha ram uncle
ram:ye sab kya hai priya pehle tumne apne jinda hone wali baat chupai aur ab jiya ki baat...
priya:mai aap ko saab kuch batati hu lekin plz jiya ke samne nahi..
they both goes inside nd jiya start playing with her friends
ram:jiya meri beti hai na priya ... tum khud mujhse dur rahi aur meri beti ko mujhse dur rakha kyo priya?
priya:ram aap mujhe jalat samajh rahe hai mai aapko sachai batati hu..




mai vapas toh aana chahti thi lekin tab mujhe pata chala ki mere car ka jo accident hua tha vo sid ne hi karwaya tha ...
us samaye mujhe pata chala ki mai preg hu aur phir maine soch ki agar mai vapas aaungi toh vo mujhe dubara marne ki kosis karega 
aur is bar baat sirf meri nahi thi hamare baache ki bhi thi...
ram:par tum mujhe toh bata sakte thi mai kuch karta mai hamare bache ke upper ko bhi khatra nahi aane deta...
kya tumhe mujh par itna bhi vishwas nahi tha?
priya:nahi ram aisa nahi hai...mujhe laga ki aap niharikaji ke death ke bad tut gaye hai aur ab ye baat aap nahi bardast kar pate
ram:aur tumse dur rehna bardast kar pata?
priya:14 saal ka jail hua tha aap ye sab kaise seh pate
suddenly jr comes 
jr:mama aap ram uncle se baat karne lagi aap mujhe bhul hi gaye
priya:jr mai tumhe tumhare birthday ka sabse bara surprise dena chati hu..
jr:kya mamma (she got excited)
priya:tumhare papa ... ram uncle hi tumhare papa hai
jr:sach mama (she calls ram papa)
ram full of tears hug her
priya also hug them(a perfect family pic)






another scene ,,,,
party over priya jr ko sula rahi hai suddenly ram comes
jr:papa aap mujhse itna din tak dur kyo the mai aap ko kitna miss karti thi?
ram:vo papa ...
priya intrupts
priya:ab jr so jao bahut raat ho gayi hai kal school bhi jana hai na
jr:ji mummy
suddenly jr went 2 sleep nd start snoring seeing this ram looks towards priya with a smile
priya:aap pe hi gaye hai




another scene in priya room
priya:pata hai maine aap ko pach saal kitna yaad kiya kitna roye par jr ko dekh kar apne aap ko sambhal leti thi...
vo bilkul aap ki tarah hai
ram:pata hai
priya:uske har ek aadat mujhe aap ki yaad dilati thi lekin wahi aadat mujhe aap ki kami mehsoos nahi hone deti thi...jab bhi aap ki yaad aati thi jr ko dekh leti thi
ram:tum to jr ko dekh leti thi lekin mai tumhare dina bilkul akela tha
priya:pata hai ram ...yahi baat soch kar mai kitne bar rone lagti thi ki aap vaha akele mere bina bilkul tut gaye hoge
priya started crying nd ram suddenly hug her...(they hug many times but this was the passanate hug)



another scene
(morning)
priya woke up nd ram still sleeping priya makes jr ready 4 school nd she is eating food in dining table
ram comes
ram 2 jr:tum ready ho gaye school ke liye
jr:ha papa
jr 2 priya:mai aaple nahi khaungi mujhe aloo ka paratha chaiye with extra makhan...
priya:nahi beta aloo ka paratha rooz khana aap ke sehat ke liye acha nahi hai
ram:khane do na bachi hai
priya:par ram it isny healthy
jr:par mamma mai ye ghaas-phuss nahi kha sakti
ram nd priya look at eachother nd start laughing
priya:thik hai lekin sirf aaj kal se apple
she makes same face as ram nd says
jr:ok
 
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Posted: 2012-06-25T03:40:53Z
awesome... keep writing... lovely update... Heart

thank u... Smile
saly
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Posted: 2012-06-25T07:22:04Z
vry nicely written.. Keep posting..
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Posted: 2012-06-25T08:02:21Z
Good one...
Loved it.
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Posted: 2012-06-25T08:42:26Z
Hey really nice update...
Write more os if possible.
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Posted: 2012-06-25T08:43:13Z
Did you post it before this?...anyways i must say it was really nice ...do uteate it soon
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Posted: 2012-06-25T10:10:19Z
ClapClapsooo swettt loved itClapClap
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