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Tanzie this was a heartbreakingly beautiful update dear I have read this update more than 5 times already especially the part with Peehu's farewell letter. You have poured your heart out literally while writing out the whole death sequence and it shows This is what makes you unique here n I am sure many of your other readers will agree with me on this - U r truly in a league of ur own
To start off with, lets take the supernatural part of this update. The beginning was truly spellbinding Mohini chanting her spells and the way u wrote out the whole part where the blood mixes with the sands n takes a form was fantastic U r an ace at this stuff Mohini surely is a shrewd woman The fact that she didn't wanna rule out even the impossible factor here proves that. I am talking abt the fact that none of Abhay's blood relatives are alive but still y take the chance? Then she went onto to see if it could be anyone related to him by blood, be it his warlock brother whose life he had saved or his vampire sister turned by him. But then ultimately she could crack it out. How could she not? She is the most powerful of the original witches I like the way her character has shaped up thus far in this story. It doesn't make sense if u have a sorry excuse of a villain in ur story just to glorify the hero. What makes it more fun is the fact that the villain being more powerful will push the hero to trespass the threshold of his own strength and emerge victorious She is now wondering how come an ordinary human could thwart the most powerful original witch n its obvious she's intrigued by Pia n she's now more than eager to meet her.
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