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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: TVserialfreak

😳😳😳 Awesome update Sister⭐️...thanks a lot for this wonderful gem of an FF...😳😊


thank you so much bhai😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
just few mins...i will update
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PART ' 16

 

Ram starts singing while playing his guitar'

*Mere Bina mein rehne laga hoon
teri hawaon mein behne laga hoon
jaane mein kaise 
tera hua hoon
mujhe to lagta hai main shayad tere dil ki dua hoon haan*

 

He looks at Priya remembering their first meeting where priya yelled at him'

Priya is having the same thoughts in her mind'.

They both smile seeing how much things have changed between them


*tujhko jo paaya ahan
toh jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan
tujhko jo paaya ahan
to jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan*

They both remember how much they have changed '

Ram , a shy silent guy turned out to be totally opposite when Priya was around'


*pehle se zyada 
main jee raha hu
jabse main tere dil se juda hoon
rahon pe teri mein to chala hoon
tu meri manzil hai tere kadmon pe bas rukne laga hoon

tujhko jo paaya ahan
to jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan
tujhko jo paaya ahan
toh jeena aaya*
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan

Their eyes get locked in each other'.


teri nazar me nayi si adaa hai 
naya sa nasha bhhi ghula hai 

Ram remembers the day when they accidently fell on bed with each other'

How Priya's hair were all over his face'

And how he was mesmerized by her..


kayi dino se bandha tha baadal jo 
tere hi baalon me khula hai

they both realise that now their days start with each other and end with each others thoughts'

teri hadon me meri basar hai
ab tujhe bhi
jana kidhar hai 

Ram smiles at Priya'


jahan rahe tu main wo jahan hoon
jise jiye tu main wo sama hoon
teri waja se naya naya hoon
pehle kaha na maine ab ye tumse kehne laga hun..aaa

images of their dance together flash infront of their eyes'.


tujhko jo paaya ahan
to jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan
tujhko jo paaya ahan
to jeena aaya
ab ye lamha theher jaye tham jaye bas jaye hum dono ke darmiyaaan

 

Priya smiles at Ram'..

All the people cheer and applaud for Ram'.

Vik ' koi isharo isharo me apni dil ki bat keh gaya'.

Ram ' huh'what do you mean'

Vik ' nothing dude'.dadi has given you the perfect name "golu"'tu golu hi hai'.

Ram  looks at him confused'

Ram ' kuch bhi bolta hai tu vik'

Vik smacks his forehead'.kaisa dost mila hai mujhe'

The whole week pass with all the friends enjoying and having masti to the fullest'

It's the last day of all the friends in Shimla'

Ram ' today is the last day '.what shall we do ?

Chavi ' bhai I have heard about a temple here'.its said that whatever wish you make there'it gets fullfiled..

Rahul ' ok so I guess we shall go there ??

Neha ' yeap'.

Vik ' okk

Priya ' oookkk

Ram- ok lets go then'.

They all move to the temple'

Vik holds Neha's hand and Rahul holds Chavi's hand'.

Ram looks at Priya'..and Priya looks back at him blankly'.

Neha ' are Ram hold Priya's hand na'..there are lot of stairs here and they are slippery coz of rain'.

Rahul ' yeah neha is right Ram'

Chavi ' yes bahiyya'

Vik ' mein bhi bolu kya??? Ya tu hath pakdega ab ???

Ram holds Priya's hand and they all move upstairs'.

RaYa were steeling glances at each other feeling uncomfortable'

They all offer their prayers and the priest apply tilak on their forehead'

Priest while applying tilak says ' bhagwan tumhari jodi banaye rakhe'

VikHa , Rahul chavi are happy with this blessing'

The priest says the same to RaYa and they are shocked'not knowing how to react'

Priya ' nahi'panditji'.hamari shadi nahi hui hai'aur hum couple nahi hai'

Priest ' to koi bat nahi'.ho jayegi'.aur kaun kehta hai tum ek joda nahi ho'. tumhari jodi to bhagwan ne khud banayi hai'.tumhari jodi Shiv Parvati jaisi hai'..tumhe dekh kar hi pata chalta hai k vidhata ne tumhe ek dusre k liye hi banaya hai'.like lord Shiva's strenght is Godesses Parvati likewise you both are incomplete without each other.

Both are embarrasssed listening this'

VikHa , rahul and chavi are smiling'.

After finishing pooja they all come downstairs'

A little girl comes running towards Ram'.she was a  flower vendor'

Ram ' bhaiyya plz buy these flowers'

Ram buys the flowers and gives the girl little more money'

The girl asks him to kneel down'.he does so'

She kisses him on the cheek'

Girl ' bhaiyya 'I pray you and didi always stay happy together'aap didi ko bahut payr karte ho na'

Ram is stunned not knowing how to react'

 Priya's eyes widen up'

Ram ' nahi'kya'wo

Girl ' I know bhaiyya I can see it in your eyes'and ek baat bolu'kaan yaha lao..

Ram brings his ear closer to her'

The little girl whispers'

Girl  - bhaiyya didi also likes you'.

Ram shocked ' huh'what'

Girl ' yes'I can see it in her eyes'

Before ram could react the girl runs away'she looks back and gives Ram a flying kiss'.

RaYa in their mind ' what is happening today'everyone is calling us a pair'do I really love '.no no '.how is that possible'or is it so'

They brush their thoughts aside'.

They see a banyan tree where couples were tying the holy thread and wishing for each others campanionship to last forever.

Neha drags Vik to the tree and Rahul leads Chavi to the same.

Neha takes the thread and vik holds its other end'.both tie the thread together'.Rahul and Chavi does the same.

Ram and Priya steel glances at each other'.

Vik ' are Ram why don't you tie a thread'

Neha ' ya priya tum bhi '.

Ram ' are how can be'. I mean'we are not'you know na yaar'.

Rahul ' so what cant friends tie a thread together'come on'.pair doesn't mean lovers..friends bhi to ho sakte hai'

ram ' are you guys mad'..there is nothing as such'I know who all tie threads here'

chavi rahul VikHa tries to convince RaYa and finally RaYa give in'

they both take the thread and start tying it'

Ram - *in his mind* bhagwan mujhe nahi pata ki mujhe kya ho raha hai'..par Priya k aas paass hone se mujhe ek ajeeb sa sukoon milta hai'.aisa lagta hai mano zindagi jo thami hui sirf uske hi aane ka intezaar kar rahi ho'.mujhe nahi pata k ye pyar hai ya sirf dosti'.but mein sirf itna janta hu k Priya ko kho dene ka ehsas bhi mujhe dara deta hai'.i am confused'..kya me Priya se pyar karta hu??? Iska jawab mere pas nahi hai par mein sirf itna janta hu k ab Priya ki khushi se hi meri khushi hai'..mein use dukhi nahi dekh sakta'.uski sari wishes puri kar dena'!

Priya - *in her mind* ye kya ho raha hai bhagwan ? kyu Ram ki me itni parwah karne lagi hu? Kyu har pal me uske bare me sochti hu ? kya ye sirf dosti hai ya kuch aur ? agar Ram mujhse rooth jaye to aisa lagta hai mano meri khushi mujhse ruth gayi hai'aisa pehle to kabhi nahi hua'.to ab ye kya ho raha hai'kyu jane anjane Ram mere zundagi ka ek anmol hissa ban gaya hai ? kyuuu'.

They both finish tying the thread and open their eyes'.look at each other and vive a faint smile.

all of them head back to Mumbai after their fun week at Shimla. They were going back with memories that they will teasure all their lives.

PRECAP ' Chavi - i dont want to marry you Rahul plz leave me.

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Edited by SanRaj.RaYa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
too good ..


loved it.. 

plz do update  soon 

thanku 
Edited by luvbalh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
read all the parts at one go...its totaly diff frm all other fanfic i ve read and its good and refreshing...hope u update the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Anju dear bang on .again a rcking update ..thank you very much for the pm ..
looking forward  to their love blossom..
pre cap is sad ...
plz jaldi update karo
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update.what gonna be happen with chavi.waiting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey anjali ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

gud to see that you have started writing FF on RaYa i know they cute... yet not read all parts just first 3 parts so will comment after reading all parts one by one... 

part 1:-

nice intro & starts for the story... i can see ur nature's some essence in Priya... but not completely... Ram is same as what he is in show which i liked his quality the most...Neha & Vik r always the most adorable couple for me  after RaYa in show so its nice to see them here to...
& abt the other cast it would be gud if u give them pictures so we can imagine how they looks  a like... 😳

part 2:-

nice start for RaYa so Ram have crush on Priya & Naina had secrete crush on Ram well she is the nice girl from heart... n Priya & Nania best fiends come best enemy  now just hoping this won't turn in love triangle story just of RaYa only... 

part 3:-
sad to hear abt Naina & Priya's friendship story... poor girls have just misunderstanding only... hope this clear out btw both of them... n they becomes best friend again... Wow Ram is falling for Priya nice to hear that now lets see what happen next...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvbalh

oh  no chavi  rahul   break up it it  like a   sacrifice..


loved this  part raya   = shiv paarvati.. ..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Niccceee update...thanx for the update.