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Posted: 11 years ago
guys i m so sorry for the delay...my laptop has crashed...i have given it for getting repaired...i will upate tomorrow night for sure. plz bear with it
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 6
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Neha was crossing the canteen when she hears conversation between Vikram and his friend.
she would have hardly bothered about what they were talking about but the guy was talking nasty stuff about Neha...and her legs just freezes there...she stood at a distance...from them listening to their convo...
Ansh (vik's frnd) - yaar...tu janta hai wo neha ko...
Vik - haan...why...
A - yaar she is so hot...since i have seen her i cant stop dreaming about her and me...you know...alone in a room and...
before ansh could complete his crap..
vik grabs his collar and forcibly makes him stand..
ansh was shocked and so was neha...
ansh- whats wrong man...
vik- dare u speak anything about neha...apni gandi zaban se usks nam bhi mat lena...
ansh- have you lost it ...whats wrong...and u ...? u r telling me i m filhty? dude have u ever had a look at ur own self...ur no less than a casanova...and here u are trying to act as a saint...
what will u do huh ?
neha isnt ur private property huh...uspar chnace marne ka haq sirf tujhe hi nahi hai...samjha...
before he could utter something else...someone taps on his shoulder...
he turns to see who it is...
he receives a tight slap right on his face...
the whole canteen crowd was dumbstruck with the act...
neha -this was for talking crap about me...
she slaps him hard again...
neha- this is for what u said to vikram...u knw wat...vik might be a playboy...but he surely knows his boundaries and he maintains the dignity of a girl...unlike u...so better u nvr evr even in urdreams think that you are someone superior to vik...
ur a worthless creature...u get it...better u get lost frm here...
ansh leaves from there looking here and there coz evryone did notice the slaps he got...embarrassed...he leves from there... 
neha looks at vik ...vik was too shocked to even say anything...
neha knew wat was going in his mind...
neha - by the way it was nice to see satan turning into saint...*wid a wicked smile*
vik - u wnt stop mocking at me ever huh ?*smiling*
neha- no y...y should i...but on the contrary...i was thinking y dont we become frnz...so that i can carry on taunting u without any hesitation...
what say...will u be my frnd ? and i wont take no as an answer...*smiling*
vik- sighs...hayeee...itne pyar se puchogi to kaun mana r payega...
and they both smile...this was the start their new friendship.

Next scene :
Ram was looking for priya...he had not see her since morning...and he was becoming restless...
Ram - are...yar...where is this priya...god...ye ladki bhi na...then he realises that he was getting too impatient...
Ram - *to himself* ram why are you...damn...why are you getting so impatient...pehle to kabhi aisa feel nahi kiya tune...tu shayad pagal ho raha hai...
He brushes off his thoughts and reaches the cultural activity room...
The crowd there was hooting and shouting in unison...
Crowd- priya..priya..priya...priya...comeon...u can do it...
Ram smacks his head...saying...ye lakdi bina toofan khada kiya nahi reh sakti...
There was priya sitting in middle of the room with all the college ppl aournd her cheering her..
Priya was there giving a guy tough competetion in arm wrestling... Ram shekes his head ...
Ram - god kabhi to...atleast kabhi to try and make this girl behave like normal girls..
The crowd aplauds and cheers when the guy loses and priya wins...
Priya laughs...and poses like wrestker showing her bisceps...she then laughs...
Priya - so...is there anyone else...who wanna have a one on one competition with me...
Someone pushes ram forward...
The whole crowd hoots...
Crowd - ooohhh...so we have one more contender...
Priya- oh ram...so u wanna challenege me...ohhh plz aao ...
Ram is all shocked...cursing his stars...
Precap - priya dresses ram's wounds.

Sorry guys if you find it boring.thanx for reading though.
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Someone pushes ram forward...
The whole crowd hoots...
Crowd - ooohhh...so we have one more contender...
Priya- oh ram...so u wanna challenege me...ohhh plz aao ...
Ram is all shocked...cursing his stars...
Precap - priya dresses ram's wounds.

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yayyy  me first ...😛

wow sooo good...continue fast dear...its getting too exciting for words...😛
precap toh mast hai
...😳😳
Edited by sss283 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thankx for d update...
itz  awwsome...
plzzz update soon...
 aftr readin d precap m eagerly waitin for ur nxt update...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohhh starting new friendships ..hmm good ..waiting for the next
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Posted: 11 years ago
wah kya update he @ ram priya se takar to bilkul bhi nai lega and vik @ neha part was awesum precap to sone pe suhaga he 
continue ASP BTW what shud i call u👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my!! kya twist hai!! really fav update, buy y so short? :-(
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Posted: 11 years ago
you call me anjali ! @evanbaxter...am really sorry...am just busy in my hostel mess...i had thought to write a long raya scene in this update bt couldnt do so coz of my same old prob.
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Posted: 11 years ago
everyone thanx for liking it though.:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow sooo good
precap y priya dressing whats going on
nahe as alway
but love it