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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunitha_Swayam

Haww...Deepz tune post kiya aur bataya bhi nahi 😲


I didn't know that you read it!
So sorry. Don't worry I'll add you to my PM list right away.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: KT_4eva


I didn't know that you read it!
So sorry. Don't worry I'll add you to my PM list right away.

oh cool...great...thnx...i do read dear...but yeah good job...loved it 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunitha_Swayam

oh cool...great...thnx...i do read dear...but yeah good job...loved it 👍🏼


Thank's Suni! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
tu toh bahut hi achchi bachchi ban rahi hai yahan...chal tujhe scraps pe dekh lungi haan 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: KT_4eva


Tere hi comment ka intezar tha kamini. 😆 I'm scared of the dark too! 😆I love temple run as well! 😉I hope you get to see Jeevika's reaction! Well I hope everything will be alright! 😲
😆 Thank you thank you! 😉Chal maaf kar diya .. Tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi! 🤣


I jst luv u two!! You guys make my day! I know I dnt make tinas way... Well thts someone elses job *cough*😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: virika-deewani

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I jst luv u two!! You guys make my day! I know I dnt make tinas way... Well thts someone elses job *cough*😆


We love you too! 🤗
I know makes her day! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊 your story is nice when u update plese pm me

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PART 10 -

Jeevika's room - 7:30 A.M -

Jeevika and Viren were still sleeping and suddenly Viren's phone rang.
Viren ( in a sleepy voice ) - Hello!
Virat - You're still sleeping? It's 7:30 and you aren't home yet. What's wrong with you?
Viren - WHAT? 7:30?
Virat - Yes. And it's gonna be breakfast time in just 30 mins. Come home quick.
Viren - Yes I'm coming.

Viren got up and saw that Jeevika's still sleeping he didn't wanna disturb her. They were still holding hands.And Viren felt that Jeevika's hand was really hot. He touched her forehead and saw. She was down with fever. He had no idea what to do.He had to reach home in 30 mins and he didn't wanna leave her like this.But he had to leave.So he decided to send her a message on her phone.He left the house and was on his way to Vadera mansion. It was 7:45 Viren had not reached Vadera mansion. Virat called him up.
Virat - Where the hell are you?
Viren - I've reached and I'm coming from the back door.
Virat - Okay. Be careful.
Viren - And come to my room now. I'll be there in 2 mins.
Virat - Okay.

In Viren's room -
Viren gave his phone to Virat and asked him to send a message to Jeevika. As he was saying so he was busy taking his clothes from the wardrobe. After dictating he went to take a quick shower. And Virat went down after sending the text.

The message - Hey Jeevika. I'm sorry I had to leave in a hurry as I had to reach home by 8. And I didn't want to wake you up and I know that you have fever and dare you get up from your bed.I'll be there by 9 with a doctor so dare you move.

Viren was there at the dining table at sharp 8.
Viren - I'm so sorry! I know I'm late actually I came home late last night and slept late so got up late.
Swamini - But why were you late?
Viren - Actually Bua Jeevika and me had gone to a restaurant to have dinner and on the way back the car broke down so.
Swamini - Okay.

After breakfast Viren called up the doctor and asked him reach Jeevika's house as soon as possible when Viren was about to leave Vanshika stopped him.
Vanshika - Viren.
Viren - Yes ma?
Vanshika - Why did you lie at the dining table?
Viren didn't know what to say.
Viren - Ma.. How did you know that I lied?
Vanshika - Just tell me beta.
Viren - Woh actually the car didn't break down I had to stay back at Jeevika's place.. She insisted so I couldn't say no. And I had to lie.. You know Bua right?
Vanshika - That's okay.
Viren - Thanks ma! I need to rush now..
Vanshika - what happened?
Viren - Actually Jeevika is down with fever and she's alone.
Vanshika - Okay. Hope she gets well soon!
After Viren left Virat who had overheard the convo came to Vanshika.
Virat - Mom don't you think...?
Vanshika - I know what are you thinking .. I'm thinking the same. But Viren will take some tome to realize it.

Jeevika's room - 8:40 A.M :
Jeevika got up and was feeling weak. Also her head was aching badly. She checked her phone and saw the message she had received from Viren. She read the message and a smile crept on her face .. She liked his caring nature.
She replied saying : Aw! You're so sweet! And can't I go to the washroom also? :P
Viren : Stop buttering now. :P Well, Duh!
Jeevika : Don't flatter yourself!
Viren : I ain't!
When Jeevika came out of the washroom she heard the door bell ringing and at the same time her phone was ringing. She answered the call.
Viren - Arre why aren't you opening the door?
Jeevika - I was in the washroom and don't you have patience? You are ringing the door bell and calling me up continuously. Gosh!
Viren - Then too you're not opening the door.
Jeevika - Ugh!!! Virennn!
She cuts the call and goes down to open the door. And then they go to her room so that she can take rest. While at the college Manvi was waiting for Jeevika to come and just then Virat entered.
Manvi - Oye chep! You know where is Jeeevika? And Viren nai aaya aaj?
Virat - Arre don't you know? Jeevika is down with fever.. And Viren's at her place.
Manvi - What? She didn't even bother to tell me.
Virat - You didn't bother to ask her either.
Manvi - Wait let me call her.
Manvi was trying to find her mobile in the handbag but couldn't find it.
Manvi - I guess I left my phone in the house. Idea! Come lets go to her house Virat.
In the car .:
Manvi - Waise Virat how does Viren know that Jeev's is ill?
Virat - He stayed back at Jeevika's place yesterday night.
Manvi - Seriously?
Virat - Yes I don't know the whole matter either.
Manvi - You at least know something I know nothing!
Virat - Jealous much?
Manvi - Oh please! Jealous of you? Get a life!
Virat - Haha! Anger is at your nose top always! It's so much fun irritating you.
Manvi - Fun ke liye aur koi nai mila?
Virat - Naa! Bandariya se zyada fun kaun ho sakta hai?
Manvi - You called me bandariya? You chep! Have you looked at yourself in the mirror ?
Virat - Yes I look too handsome.. I know I know!
Manvi - Handsome? MY FOOT! You look like a Donkey!
Virat - Oh hello! Donkey kisse bulaya?
Manvi - Tumhe! Are you deaf?
They keep fighting till they reach Jeevika's house. Manvi rings the door bell. Ramu kaka comes and opens the door.
Manvi - Kaka Jeevika kahan hai?
Kaka - Woh apne kamre main hai beta.Doctor saheb aae hai.
Manvi - Acha main upar jaati hun.
Manvi rushes up and so does Virat.
Doctor - She just has normal fever and cold. nothing to worry about.Here is the prescription. Just take these medicines. The doctors hands the prescription to Viren and leaves. Viren goes to drop the doctor and asks Ramu kaka to get the medicine from the pharmacy.
Manvi - Jeev's you didn't even bother to tell me that you have fever..How rude!
Jeevika - But I had send you a message.
Manvi - Uh-oh! I left my phone in the house.
Virat - (Under his breath) - Nautankiii!
Manvi - Virattt!
Viren - Manvi and Virat no fighting please!
Manvi - Fine! But how come you suddenly have fever?
Viren - Suddenly kuch nai hua.
Viren tells her what happened last night. And how they got wet and stuff.
Manvi - she is really stubborn. Never listens to anyone.
Viren - Well I've experienced that!
Virat - Seems like you and Jeevika have gelled up quite well?
Jeevika - We certainly have. Yesterday was a great start to our friendship. We had loads of fun!
Viren - Yes it was amazing fun yesterday!
Manvi - Toh now I'm second in your list huh?
Jeevika - Nooo way! No matter what happens you'll always be first on my list!
Manvi - I love you Jeev's!
Jeevika - I love yo too Manu!
They both hug each other, Then they keep chatting,pulling each others leg and laughing like retards. then it's lunch time..
Manvi - Im feeling damn hungry.
Virat - When don't you feel hungry?
Viren - I'm feeling hungry too!
Jeevika - Lets order pizza.
Manvi - Great idea! Let's have dominos.
Virat - I'll have cheese burst pizza.
Viren - Me too.
Manvi - I'll have double cheese pizza.
Jeevika - I'll have a cheese pizza.
Virat orders the pizza's and they have a great time together. Later in the afternoon Jeevika took a medicine and went to sleep. Viren also needed a nap so he went to the guest room and slept. While Virat and Manvi were siting in the living room.
Manvi - Virat I'll ask you something?
Virat - Yea sure!
Manvi - Does Viren like Jeev's?
Virat - Yea I think he does. He hasn't realised it though it will take him time to do so.
Manvi - Aw! Perfect jiju!
Virat - He ought to be perfect after all he's my brother! 😎
Manbi - You're flattering yourself too much.
Virat - I don't need to.
Manvi - Waise what made you think that Viren likes Jeev's?
Virat - I ask you the same thing.
Manvi - I asked first.
Virat - You're such a kiddo.
Manvi- I AM NOT A KIDDO!
Virat - Why on earth are yo screaming for that? I ain't deaf.
Manvi - Oh! I thought you were.
Virat - You and your dumb thoughts!
Manvi - Whatever!
They keep fighting,arguing and talking on different topics!
AT 5:00 P.M - Virat and Manvi were in the living room. Manvi was watching tv while Virat was playing with his phone. Viren woke u[ and checked the time then he went and freshened up and went to Jeev's room. He saw her sleeping and he realized that she had to take her medicines. He was trying to wake her up but she wasn't ready to get up.. After trying hard she got up.
Jeevika - What is it ya? Medicines were not running away.. I hate you!
Viren - I love you too! Now go and freshen up and then have your medicine.
Jeevika stuck out her tongue and Viren laughed at her childishness. After she had her medicine Viren asked her how she felt?
Jeevika - I'm feeling better. Chalo lets go and have some coffee. You'll make us coffee right?
Viren - Why not!
They had coffee and chit chatted for a while. Later Viren and Virat had to leave so they bid bye and left

At Vadera Mansion - Dinning table :
They all were having dinner and Vanshika asked Viren how Jeevika was feeling..
Viren - Much better.
Dadaji - Jeevika kaun hai?
Viren - Woh meri friend hai.. Mere hi class main padhti hai.. In fact woh aapse milna chahti hai.
Dadaji - Arre toh kal usse shaam ko bula lo. Aur usse kehna ki dinner yahin kar le.
Viren - Ji! Aur main Manvi ko bhi invite karta hun.
Dadaji - Bilkul.

After dinner Viren called Jeevika.
Viren - Hello!
Jeevika - Hii! What's up?
Viren - Nothing much! How you feeling?
Jeevika - Much better.
Viren - You still have fever?
Jeevika - No only cold. And thanks a lot!
Viren - For what?
Jeevika - For being there with me and taking care of me.
Viren - Oh! That's alright!
Jeevika - So?
Viren - Manvi left?
Jeevika - Yea after mom came she left.
Viren - Oh cool! By the way.. Manvi and you are invited to my house for dinner tomorrow.
Jeevika - Oh okay?
Viren - Actually I told dadaji that you wanted to meet him so he asked me to invite you for dinner tomorrow.
Jeevika - Okay. We'll be there by 9 then.
Viren - No way!
Jeevika - What's wrong?
Viren - In my house dinner is at sharp 8. And by the way madam.. tomorrow after college you'll are coming with us to our house.
Jeevika - Oh okay! But sharp 8? Strict huh?
Viren - Yess!
Jeevika - Oh so am I suppose to wear Indian?
Viren - Hahaha! No no.. Wear anything you want. It's just that my dadaji is really punctual.
Jeevika - Oh! So what happens if you're 5 mins late for dinner? No dinner huh?
Viren - Yeaa!
Jeevika - You're kidding right?
Viren - No I'm not!
Jeevika - That's pathetic ya!
Viren - It doesn't really matter. If we don't feel like eating or we are late we order it from the restaurant.
Jeevika - Hahaha! Wicked!
Viren - I know right!
Jeevika - Okay Viren I'll meet ya tomorrow. Got to go and have dinner. Byee!
Viren - Byee! Take care!

Edited by KT_4eva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...👏
Waiting to read on dadaji's opinion on jeevika and cant wait for Viren and Jeevika's realization...
Loving this story..😊
Thanks for the PM...Continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update deepz!!
Loved it!!!
Continue soon
And thnx for the pm

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