DIL THOH PAGAL HAI ch 27 end pg 85 july 24 - Page 58

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Posted: 11 years ago
@janavi  :thanks a lot yaar...since everyone wished them to be friends i changed a little in story...

@aasma:thanks  a lot man...there love story started at fisrt day itselfman...

@heer: thanks a lot yaar...men will look harder outside..inside they will be soft inside...with this we can win them easyly...

@if-rida: thanks a lot rida...thought of some romance...if u get anyideas u can suggest...

@ktym:thanks a lot yaar...may i know ur name friend...

@sneha:thanks a lot IA...now give me some ideas for scenes...

@ramani:thanks a lot ramani..confessing part i thought of two ways..according to all ur comments i thoughjt of changing it...

@jaisy:thanks a lot yaar...all were saying someone will come ..so i changed it...see from all uyr comments i can change to unexpected...makes me think...so only i asks for comments...mistakes also can be changed...

@maneesha:thanks a lot maneesha...

@yasharanrox:thanks a lot yaar...may i know ur name friend...



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Posted: 11 years ago
hey friends...



ch  :  22

later that night they did not sleep..there eyes alone closed...

they said in the afternoon they will be friends..then after lunch khanak

went and played with kids..he was busy in lappy...

during dinner they did not talk elders were talking about health

now they r sleeping as a friend...they dont know when they slept...

nextday morning shaan has important meeting with his dads office...

so he went out early..and madhavi strickly ordered

khanak to take leave next day and take rest...

so khanak to agreed..and kids were in home...so she spent her toime with them..

later in the evening madhavi and dadi went to temple..

khusbhoo and mitra chatting in mitras room...

kids and swetha and khanak r watching tv in the hall...

khanak was wearing a saree...

sanjana:chachi...its boring..lets play something...

sanjay:'uhhh wat to play...

swetha:hide and seek...

khanak:ummm...

shaan entered correctly at that time...came and sat in the hall..

sanjana:chachu...u can also come and play na...

shaan:no dear..i am tired...

swetha:please bhaiya...come...

shaan:when did u became a kid...

swetha:i was also bored so only bhaiya...bhabhi also coming...

shaan looked at khanak...she smiled at him... a small smile...

shaan:uhh..ok...(smiled at khanak)

swetha:who is going to find...

sanjana:lets put rock paper and scissors..first me and chachi...

khanak and sanjana started ...sanjana became safe...

sanjana:now chachu and chachi...

shaan and khanak started ..they both kept same thing everytime...

they both smiled ...when started again shaan winked at khanak...

khanak:ah...stood still placing rock...

shaan kept paper...

shaan:wow i am safe ...

khanak glared at him...with rest they continued and finally sanjay 

has to come and find them...sanjay closed his eyes and started to count...

all the others ranned to hide..shaan and khanak opened madhavis room

and they bumped at eachother...

khanak:i came first...u go and hide some other place...

shaan:no..i came first u go to some other place...

khanak:come on SC...

shaan:no osc...

sanjay:i am going to come...

shanak:oh shit...

they both entered the room and there was a big cubboard no trays inside..

was near the entrance...they both opened it at the same time...

they glared at eachother...there was nothing inside...

they heard sanjay sound so they both got in the cubboard and closed it...

but the person who entered was harilal he came and locked the cubboard...

they thought sanjay and they kept quiet...

after there is no noise ...they smiled at eachother...

then they became silent because they r standing near by...the place is 

correct for them to stand..there arms r brushing...

khanak felt uneasy...so she tried to open the door...but she cannot...

she became panicked...she looked at shaan who looked at her...

khanak:shantanu...its not opening...

shaan:wat...he tried to open...but he cannot open...

shaan:shit someone locked us...

khanak:someone there ...she started to knock the door...

but know one could here it...because room door is also closed...

khanak:please someone open the door...

shaan:khanak dont worry i am there na...(smile)

she just looked no starred at him...

shaan tried with his arms but there fate...cubboard slided and 

it is partially slide on the wall and shaan slided oneside

and khanak was resting on him...her hands on his chest and his 

hands on her waist..,they were close in standing slide position...

khanak tried to move away but cubboard is slide to wall..

she cannot move..so she was resting on shaan...

shaan:its okay khanak lets wait for someone okay..

khanak:umm...

her cheeks started to turn red...there hearts were dancing in joy..

they dont know y but they felt happy...

khanak:ahhh...(she hugged shaan very tightly...)

shaan:wat happened...wat happened khanak...

khanak:ahhh...cockroach...(still tightened her hold on shaan...)

her cheeks brushing shaans cheeks...her hands around his neck...

he hugged her very tight ensureing her she is safe...

khanak has closed her eyes tight in fear...

shaans hand gently caressed her back and it was pulling her more 

close to him...he gently nuzzled her neck..she felt his hot breath on her neck..

and shoulder...her hand on his neck holded his collor of his shirt more tightly...

there cheeks were brushing..no touching others...

his one hand coming down towards her waist..

his hand on waist gently pressed her waist...her hand on his hair grpped it tight..

his face gently moved now there noses r touching...there eyes r closed...

there heart is beating fastly...they can feel others breath on their face..

there lips inches away...his hand was gently caressing her waist and

it started to move downwards towards her ...

his cell phone rang...his lips hit hers...there lips touched...

they opened there eyes wide opened in shock...khanak tried to

move away..but the cubboard is slided to wall she cannot...

they both were starring at eachother...



ok friends next update will be on tuesday...tomorrow guest r coming so i will be busy..monday i will try to write if i finished writing quick i will post on monday..r it will be on tuesday..i hope so...did u guys get my pm...if anyone wants please let me know it...
and finally leave ur opinions so that i will change little in my update so that it will be unexpected ...

regards
nikita...





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Posted: 11 years ago
hum tum ek cupboard mein bandh hai..
harilal ki wajah se..
LOL!!!! loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81

hum tum ek cupboard mein bandh hai..
harilal ki wajah se..
LOL!!!! loved it...


thanks ramani..u r early today...
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Posted: 11 years ago
short but sweet update niki...
my name is mounika...
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Posted: 11 years ago
the update was fun😊
the hide and seek game is actually for romance so if u want to romance play hide and seek hahaha LOL!!! in tv serials also they show us like that na
the cupboard romance was nice shan's cell got network in the cupboard aisa hi hota jab network chahiye tab nahi milta jab nahi chahiye tab milta hai aur wrong time pe mobile bajta hai uff
omg we hv to wait till tuesday for next update tch cant wait to know wat happens next
but will wait for u😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb niki
hmm hide and seek ... luka chuppi main hi pyar ho jaega
wow so much of romance in cupboard
i juz wish wen sum1 opens they are not in intimacy... they both feel so embarrassed
n i really wish that they dont feel awkward ... abhi abhi to dosti hui hai
seems like k they will be best of frndz and an eternal couple soon
update jaldi se
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
sucha sweet update loved it, cant wait for the ither other update xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago

hayeee shanak r locked in cupboard...😳😳

smewht dey bth r happy wid each other company...😆😆 n dey r romancing too...😊

who will unlock deir door...hw embarrassed dey will be...😆 dey will tease dm mre...

waitng niki ...😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
 Superb Nikki 
 cupboard me band lolzzz
 credit goes to Harilal kya timing hai boss lolzzz
   romance in cupboard 😉 
 shaan please yaar tumara phone zara silent par rakha koro
 kabab me hadii lolzzz
 loved the update Nikki