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salsaly

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome as always... rams surprise.. love it... ❤️

di... here is pink comment for u... 🤗

thanks a lot... big hugs for u... 🤗🤗

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157365

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Posted: 11 years ago

that is so sweeet like raya

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taashu11

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome just loved it

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bhakti

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Posted: 11 years ago

As usual super ,lovely update. Please continue soon.

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Krutika

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow that was a cute update... jaldi se update karna plzzz... wanna know k Ram Neha ko kya bulata tha... 😊

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sahana747

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Posted: 11 years ago

Here is royal blue for you.Khayalon mein khayalon mein kho gaye .Now only we can dream of such Raya moments.RK twittered it had to get worse to become better.Haaaww🤢 Samir Soni of Parichay said now EK is more interested in films only.So no use wasting our time and energy on steamrolling her.

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sahana747

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Posted: 11 years ago

😉😃

Originally posted by: PunyaS
Veena,

FAB update! I love the way you write conversations. No bhaari-bharkam dialogues.. simple narration in simple way. And the touch of humour is absolutely entertaining.

Love each update.

Thanks for writing!

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I second you Punya😃.Veena is fabulous with great sense of humor😉, rare commodity.

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veena singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sahana747
😉😃 I second you Punya😃.Veena is fabulous with great sense of humor😉, rare commodity.

aww that sooo sweet of both of u...its totally my plsr...i am not a writer bt yet i hv sm feelings which i put in my story...😊

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veena singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

scene 9...

krishuji...ruk jao priya...

Dono ekdusre ko dekhne lagte h...

Priya...kya hua ma????.humse kuchh glti ho gyi kya????

Krishuji...nhi ab to gltiyo ko sudharne ka waqt aa gya h...beta tere grih pravesh me main to thi nhi to aaj tu ek nayi zindgi k sath itni mushkilo k bad ghr ayi h to pure reetiriwaz se aayegi na...

Phir priya ka grihpravesh hota h aur is bar bht behtr hota h qki isbar dono k beech pyar hota h..ram apna hath aage badhata h aur priya muskurate hue tham leti h..phir dono ek sath ghr k andr aate h..ha lekin priya ma ko dekh k itni excited rhti h ki thodi der k liye to pati ko bhi bhul gyi...hadh h...

Priya...ma chaliye na kamre me mujhe aapse bht sari bate krni h

Krishuji...ha ha kyun nhi...chalo

Dono chale jate h aur ram whi khada rhta h pehle to use lagta h ki btao bhala kaisi ma biwi h meri mujhe chhod k aur khud bate krne chali gyi lekin phir jb wo undono ko eksath itna khush dekhta h to wo bhi khush ho jata h...

Kamre me...

Priya...ma...ma...kya btau kaise batau mujhe to samajh hi nhi aa rha h kaha se shuru karu...bht kuchh kehna h aapse pr ab sabd hi nhi mil rhe h

Krishuji...m janti hu priya...tumhe bhale hi sabd nhi mil rhe h pr tumhari aankhe sb bta rhi h mujhe...ki tum ram se kitna pyar krti ho aur use pakr kitni khush ho

Priya...ha ma m apke bete se bht pyar krti hu..mne unhe pa liya to aisa laga jindgi ko paa liya jindgi jeene k mayne mil gye...aur ab to aap bhi aa gyi...ab sb achha hi hoga

Ram door pe khada hoke sb sun rha hota h phir wo apne kmre me chala jata h...priya bhi jb jee bhr k krishuji se bate kr leti h tb use ram ki yaad aati h

Priya...are me bate krne k chakkr me main to bhul hi gyi ki apko apne bete se bhi to milna hoga aur ram bhi to tadap rhe honge aapse milne k liye...

Krishuji...hehehe...ram mujhse mil chuka h priya...ha lekin use abhi tumhari jarurat h jao uske pas aur uska hmesha aise hi khyal rkhna...tumlog bhi thoda aram krlo phir sham ko milte h...kafi thk gye hoge na..

Priya wha se apne kamre me aati h to dekhti h ram khidki k pas khada rhta h..priya peechhe se aage usse lipat jati h...

Priya...ram kya hua ???kya soch rhe h???

Ram...kuchh nhi bs aise hi..niharika ma k bare me unhone aisa kyun kiya...aaj sb mere pas h mujhe pyar krne wale ...ma ..tum...pr wo nhi h to mujhe achha nhi lag rha h

Priya...are wo bhi to yhi h na bs ab is bare me mt sochiye sb theek ho jayega hum sabko sudhar denge...pehle to ap mujhe ye btaiye ki aap neha ko kya keh k bulate the...

Ram...mudhta h aur chillata..oye tum phir se shuru ho gyi ...

Priya...ha ho gyi aur jb tk aap nhi btayenge tb tk shuru hi rahungi...

Ram...ok iska mtlb tum nhi manogi theek h..litsen on ur own risk...m neha ko...DARLING kehta tha...

Priya...achha..

Ram ko bada ashchary hota h ki itna mere peechhe padi thi janne k liye aur ab bta diya to kuchh react nhi kr rhi h...aise kaise...kuchh to gadbad h boss...ye ladki aur bina bole rh jaye...abhi mujhe vikram ki bat yad aa rhi h ki agr biwi kisi bat pe react na kare to mtlb kuchh locha h...ye ladki bhi na bolti h to bhi pareshan krti h nhi bolti h to bhi pareshan krti h...ram sochta rhta h tabhi priya wha se jane lagti h...

Ram...kya hua???..bura laga kya???

Priya...nhi to bura kyun lagega

Ram..to ja kyun rhi ho???

Priya...wo thoda thak gyi hu to aram krne ka mn kr rha h

Aur priya bed pe jake let jati h

Ram..are ye koi sone ka time h

Priya...kyun kahin likha h ki nhi so sakti hu

Ram...nhi pr din me to tum nhi soti ho kbhi

Priya...to jo kabhi nhi krti hu wo aj kr nhi sakti hu kya

Ab to ram ko yakeen ho jata h ki boss bura to solid laga h bs dikha rhi h mujhe ...beta ram b ready ..ab tujhe apni eklauti biwi ko manane k liye kuchh jatan karne padenge ...

Ram..pr priya mera bat krne ka mn ho rha h

Priya...hadh h ..mera nhi h mujhe sone dijiye...

Ram...sone dijiye???? Subah m bhi yhi kh rha tha to tumne suna...

Priya...ram please mujhe koi bat nhi krni h

Ram..lekin mujhe to krni h

Priya...kya jbrdsti h mera mn nhi mn h to..jau kya m yha se...

Ram...achha meri ma dhamaki dne ki jarurat nhi h ...so jao tum aram se m wait krta hu tumhare uthne ka...

Pr priya ko koi neenni winni to a nhi rhi h to soye kaise...phir wo uth k baith jati h

Ram..kya hua ab baith kyun gyi???

Priya...kuchh nhi aise hi

Ram...achha ghumne chalogi

Priya...nhi ...abhi ghum k hi to aaye h

Ram...achha..video game khelogi

Priya ram ko ghurti h...

Ram...achha thek h theek h..kuchh khaogi

Priya...ram kyun irritate kr rhe h

Ram...achha...dekho bahar mausm mst ho rha h

Priya phir kuchh nhi bolti h bs whi ghurne wala look deti rhti h

Ram...achha kuchh nhi karogi...bate bhi nhi

Priya...nhi

Ram...ghumna bhi nhi h

Priya ...nhi

Ram...gussa krna h ya nhi

Priya...nhi

Ram...ok ..pyar krna h ya nhi

Priya...bilkul nhi

Ram...bilkul nhi???...kyun???

Priya...ap nhi manenge to m ja rhi hu

Ram priya ko pakad leta h ...jaogi kaise m jane dunga tb na...ok fine m samjh gya tumhe bura laga

Priya...kya???

Ram...whi jo mne kaha

Priya...kya kaha

Ram..bano mt...darling wali bat

Priya...mujhe kyun bura lagega aapko jisko jo bulana h bulaiye

Ram...achha ..ruko abhi neha ko phone krta hu

Priya...kyun???

Ram..tumhi ne to kaha ki jisko jo bulana h bulaiye to neha ko darling bulane k liye use phone krna padega na...

Ram jitni bar darling bula rha tha priya ka gussa badhta ja rha tha pr wo kuchh keh nhi rhi thi...

Ram...hello neha darling kaisi ho???

Samne se neha..ram kya hua achanak aise kyu bate kr rhe ho

Ram...are darling kyun tok rhi ho meri bat to suno

Neha...ram r u ok

Ram...ha darling m bilkul theek hu

Priya ka gussa ab uske chehre pe nazar aa rha h aur ram use dekh bhi pa rha h aur use bht maza bhi aa rha h

Neha...ram...kya laga rakha h ye

Ram...darling m soch rha tha aaj humlog dinner pe chale...

Neha..fatty ...tum pagal ho gye ho

Ram...are darling tum ho hi aisi

Isse pehle ki ram kuchh bolta priya ram ka muh band kr deti h aur uski ankho se aansu chhalak jate h...ram phone kat deta h aur kehta h

Ram...priya kya hua??? Are m majak kr rha tha tum itni serious kyun ho rhi ho

Priya...qki m majak me bhi ye nhi sun sakti hu...ha nhi bardasht hota h mujhse apka kisi s aise bat krna nhi bardasht hota h jb koi mere samne aapko chhuta h apse pyar se bate krta h apkse cnslt dikhata h...aap sirf mere h ye sb cheeze bs mera haq h aur m nhi dekh sakti ki koi mere haq pe haq jataye...

Ram hasne lagta h aur use gale laga leta h

Ram...aisa kuchh nhi h koi tumhara haq kabhi nhi chhinne wala h aur m hamesha tumhara hu aur tumhara hi rahunga..aur ha ek aur bat..meri bs ek hi darling h aur wo tum ho...neha ko to m bs mazak me bol deta tha pr ab kabhi nhi bolunga...kya tum bhi chhote bachhe jaise rone lagti ho...cmn bnd karo rona pta h na m inhe tokrate nhi kr skta...dono muskurane lagte h aur waise hi gale lage khade rhte h tabhi door pe knock hota h...as usual is ghr ka sabse bada hadda...bansi kaka a jate h

Bansi...sir mam apko neeche dadi ne bulaya h...

To b continue...

Precap..neeche niharika sid k sath rhti h aur baki ghrwale bhi...

Ram...ye jail se bahar kaise aaya ise kaun leke aaya h???..main abhi police ko bulata hu...

Edited by veena23 - 11 years ago

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anizor

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Posted: 11 years ago

awsome update veena. thanks

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