First FF -Zindagi na milegi dobara Pt17 Pg 59 updt

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Posted: 2012-06-01T12:18:44Z
Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2 - Page 3
Part 3 - Page 6
Part 4 - Page 7
Part 5&6 - Page 9
Part 7 - Page 16
Part 8 - Page 19
Part 9 - Page 25
Part 10 -Page 30
Part 11 - Page 33
Part 12 - Page 37
Part 13 - Page 40
Part 14 - Page 44
Part 15 - Page 51
Part 16 - Page 55
Part 17 - Page 59

This is my first attempt at SS! So you can stone me to death if you hate it but I needed to let it all out to start afresh on Monday. This is how it goes following the last scene. Forgive the typos and hindi grammatical errors. Hope it makes sense. It is becoming long. will come back for part 2

P(In her thoughts) : Haan Mr Kapoor. Iam really really sorry. I never wanted to hurt you so much. But I didn't have a choice. This was the only option left. I love you and you will always come back when you know why I took this path. Mujhe yakeen hai " Pyaar ki jeet hogi".

The next day Ram comes back to see Priya ready for the day. She was looking gorgeous in pink and busy drying her beautiful hair.

Ram : Ab humare beech main kuch nahi bacha hai toh, let's go back to the Kapoor mansion. Atleast I will be closer to people who seem to care for me.

Priya's eyes swelled up on hearing how much she has hurt her loving husband. This was going to be the last moment of them being together. The good times flashbacked and she couldnt' hold on to her tears. But she needed to be strong, more than ever. After all, it was not time to step back but to push the buttons.

Priya : Thank you Mr Kapoor. You have finally understood my wishes. Aap ne maan rakha hai.. Uskeliye.. bahut bahut dhayawaad. Atleast I can become free from all this and lead my own life. Meri apni zindagi ko apni tareekhe se main jee sakti hoon.

Ram : Ofcourse Priya.. But thank you toh mujhe kehna chahiye. Finally tu ne meri aankhen khol dhi. Jab se meri Maa ,kis pe maine sabse zyaada andha viswaas rakha tah, duniya main sab se zyaada pyaaar kar ta tah, uno ne bina kuch kahe mujhe chod ke chali gayi thi. Mujhe kya, uno ne mere papa ke saath , rishta khatam kardi thi.. Jab meri papa ko unki sabse zyaada zarooraat thi, unone ek baar bhi nahi socha tah. Uss din maine soch liya tah ki main ab kisi rishte pe barosa nahi karoonga.

Jab papa ne unki akhri khwaish bataye the, mujhe Niharika ji aur unki parivaar ko apna bana na pada. Atleast mere liye kehne keliye ek parivaar thi. Kitne koshish ke baad bhi, mujhe kabhi un se apna pan nahi mila. Choti aur Rishabh aur Dadi mujhe bahut pyaar karte hain. Woh main jaanta bhi hoon. In sab ko maine apni destiny soch kar, zindagi jeena seekh liya tah. Bina expectations ka, bina pyaar ka, akele pan. Meri apni si zindagi jis main sirf main aur meri choti choti khwaish ein kisko maine apni cupboard main chupa ke rakha tah.

Phir tum meri zindagi main aayi thi. Pehle itna ajeeb laga aur thoda sa accha bhi. Kyunki tum meri jaise thi. Apni parivaar keliye kurbaani dena aur shaadi ko compromise soch ke follow karna.. Phir pata nahi yeh sab kaise hua. Tum meri zindagi ka hissa ban gayi thi. Tu ne meri asli maa se mili aur uss din maine decide kar liya tah ki main tum se alag ho jaonga. Niharika maa ne tayari bhi kar li thi par mujhe pata nahi kya hogaya tah. Tum hari reports sun ne ke baad, main ne ek ek pal kaise guzara tah.. woh sirf main jaanta hoon. Uss saath din main, tum hare liye maine bhagwaan se bhi haath jodli ya tha ki mera zindagi waapas chahiye.</font>

Priya - Mr Kapoor. Ab humari life ka rewind karke kya milne wala hai.. Mujhe pata hai ki aap ne mere liye bahut kuch kiye hai aur mahsoon bhi karte hain. Ab yeh sab kehne sunne keliye kuch nahi baaki rehgaya..</font>

Ram : Jitna tum ko bolna tah.. tum ne boldiya Priya. Aur ab yeh mera baari hai.. yeh sab main tum hain wapas paane keliye nahi keh raha hoon. I don't want to carry a regret in my life. Meri maa mujhe chod ke gayi thi.. I have been carrying a baggage.. I don't want to repeat that mistake with you.</font>

huii jinase tavaqqo Khastagii kii daad paane kii
vo hamase bhii ziyaadaa Khastaa-e-teG-e-sitam nikale

To be continued..

Edited by fosla - 2012-06-25T10:04:30Z
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Posted: 2012-06-01T12:20:58Z
Awww Cry Hug
Rocked it Angie!! Fabulous!! 
Even though I dont completely agree with you hahaha.  

P.S. post part 2 soon! 
Edited by azk92 - 2012-06-01T12:26:16Z
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Posted: 2012-06-01T12:26:20Z
omg! Thankx Angie Di. Best surprise for me by any of if-balh forum members.
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Posted: 2012-06-01T12:35:06Z
Awww... Angie u rock. And u nailed perfect words from Ram. Love u. Continue ASAP.
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Posted: 2012-06-01T12:38:26Z
great job angie.. and gett going fast.. Part 2 better be dhulai or main tumhe nahi chodne wali
nandini
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Posted: 2012-06-01T12:38:50Z
Clap

great job Angie! 
BTW... you complain that Priya talks too much, par lagta hai aapka bas chalta tho Ram would be talking too much all the time! ROFL


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Posted: 2012-06-01T13:13:10Z
allthe best 4 ur 1st os love this
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Posted: 2012-06-01T13:36:57Z
Originally posted by azk92


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<font color="#cc0033" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Rocked it Angie!! Fabulous!!</font>
<font color="#cc0033" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Even though I dont completely agree with you hahaha. </font>
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<font color="#cc0033" face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">P.S. post part 2 soon!</font>

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Amby

Time for my revenge to make you cry girl. Wait;)

Iam sure you will agree when whis ends! Now I
Have a doubt! If I make it in three parts, can this still be a
OS? Confused
Edited by fosla - 2012-06-02T23:47:58Z
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