Originally posted by: maris08A slight modification of this poem from Ram's point of view..
Killing me brutallyKilling me brutally with your wordsHurting me beyond words compare.Deeper I try to unravel your secretHarder your resolve to open up.Mouthing those nonsense casuallyFailing to understand me seriously.Killing me brutally by your actionsScaring and singeing me deep within.Shattering me each and every daySeperating from me further away.Contrasting was your heart and mindAghast and anguished yet so blind.Killing me brutually with your loveBury and burn me in hell, so true..~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~PS: The last scene saw Ram,shattered and in disbelief. This is my way of describing his feelings at that juncture..Asusual please leave your comments..
Mona thanks..for the poem as well as for your compliment !Originally posted by: monamie111
wow!! awesome awesome awesome poems Maris!! 👏 👏...u r so talented!! 😳
Thanks Angie.. Finally you took time form your busy schedule to comment on my poem. Unnoda take yennakku rombha thevaiya irundhadhu..😆Originally posted by: foslaMaris
Killing me softly... Wow!! I just remembered the song and your lines are
Fitting to the T!
Yet to read your page 5 update! Loved the 1st part so much that I couldn't
Resist!
Angie all that eagerness of how those 2 days Raya will spend was shattered and destructed due to Priya mouthing those infamous lines..Originally posted by: foslaShattering me each and every day
Seperating from me further away.
Contrasting was your heart and mind
Aghast and anguished yet so blind.
Killing me brutually with your love
Bury and burn me in hell, so true..
These were my Fav part of the poem and every word is so true to the
Situation!
I remember the lines :
Nothing compares
No worries or cares
Regrets and mistakes
They are memories made.
Who would have known how bittersweet this would taste?
Sometimes it lasts in love but sometimes it hurts instead."
Originally posted by: maris08<font color="#6600cc">Angie all that eagerness of how those 2 days Raya will spend was shattered and destructed due to Priya mouthing those infamous lines..</font>
<font color="#6600cc">Hence my own angst and anguish turned into these lines, which is my fav too..</font></strong><font color="#333399">Nothing compares
No worries or cares
Regrets and mistakes
They are memories made.
Who would have known how bittersweet this would taste?</font><font color="#6600cc">Adele's "someone like you" is from the woman's point of view about her lover..Similar kind of pain and bittersweet memories, that Ram will now undergo..</font><strong><font color="#6600cc">Thanks ma for your comments..</font>
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