"KILLING ME.. "--A poem.(plz chck pg 5).

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Posted: 2012-05-30T20:39:24Z

Seeing the precap, kindled my poetical brain(I think I do  have oneWinkLOL).. Here are a few lines scribbled about Priya's feelings and emotions..

 
 

 
 
Killing me softly.
 
 Killing me softly with your eyes
Reading my face with your look.
 
Deeper I hide my emotions
Easier you unveil the secrets.
 
Spilling your love all over
Unable to reciprocate like a river.
 
Killing me softly with your words
Piercing my heart with your pain.
 
Caressing me gently is our love
Aching my heart to hurt you.
 
Stronger the resolve I made
Longer the suffering for us.
 
 
Killing me softly with your love
Chilling me with dread, so true.
 
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 PS; Please leave your comments. They are like booster doses for me..Big smile
Edited by maris08 - 2012-05-31T20:01:24Z
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Posted: 2012-05-30T20:47:00Z
BEAUTIFUL!!!
Love it! 
It so perfectly fits the situation and her emotions!!
You are amazing! 
Hug
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Posted: 2012-05-30T20:48:56Z
very nice maris. loved it
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Posted: 2012-05-30T20:50:03Z
Very nice maris, lovely.. Clap
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Posted: 2012-05-30T21:07:35Z
Awesome didiClapClap...really suits the situation to a T...thanks for posting Embarrassed
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Posted: 2012-05-30T21:15:05Z
very well written keep it upSmile
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Posted: 2012-05-30T21:50:05Z
superb di... well written... loved it... tfs..  :-)
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Posted: 2012-05-30T21:56:30Z
U seem to be kidding by saying u don't have a poetic brain. This poem is fabulous. I loved the way how Ram says whats bothering me is not my mom's health but Priya's feelings. Best line and u brought out the consequences of that in a very gorgeous way dear.
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