..nams.. thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
somewer in the topics of this forum in one of the coments ( by arsh_sp ) i read laxmiji kidnap kia hoga arnav ki .. so taking that into consideration i thout il ryt up a OS on it ??πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

i dont know how is it plss do review.. i don hv much frenz here to send out pms... sorry..
hope u all will enjoy this πŸ˜†

REVENGE


'tumei nhi maloom mei aise aake baat nhi kar skti..' laxmi wispered to Om prakash in the lawn who was pretending to water the plants..

'ssshhh!! ek problem hai laxmi ji..' om prakash said trembeling..

'shoot!!' laxmi said munching something..

'wo wo arnav ji ne khushi ji ko call kardi hai'

'KYAAA' laxmi fainted..

om prakash took laxmi in his arms and was about to run inside the house..

but smitten by laxmi's beauty OP kept staring at her..

LOOK LOOK HAWA HAWA..

laxmi opened her one eye.. 'u idiot!!!! drop me down NOWWW'

laxmi scremed!

OP shuddered and dropped laxmi down.. 'OOOUUUCCCHH'

hari prakash came running hear his beloved laxmi cry..!

'Kya hua laxmi ji' HP said careessing her head..

'U DUFFER OM PRAKASH UR USELESS!!! KOI KAAM TEEK SE NHI HOTA TUJSE' looking into hari prakash 'Hari baby ur my sweetheart na..?? pls do something !! THIS OP HAS SPOILT THE PLAN' laxmi said shedding a drop of tear from her eye..

'WHAT U CALLED ME HARI BABY ???' HP was shocked and started blushing..

laxmi blinked shyly.. OP started crying breaking into the floor..

'IM SORRY IM SORRY laxmi ji..' OP pleaded banging his head on her legs..

laxmi kicked OP 'GET LOST U MORON !! its a BREAK UP' laxmi declared hugging HP.. HP was really in 10th heaven..

'OH LAXMI JI I LOVE U...'

laxmi blushed 'hari baby aise private baatein DUFFER ke saamne nhi kehthe!!'

HP shyly looked away.. devastated OP kept staring at both..

'dekho na Hari baby kaise guur raha hai!! humei nazar lag jayegi.. take me inside '

'sure laxmi ji' hari prakash took laxmi in his arms.. laxmi shyly bowed her head .. HP smirked at OP and went in..

***

'isse pehle gar wale arnav ko doondle we shud do something hari baby..!'

'anythn for u laxmi..'

'okay listen to me, go to arnav and snatch his fone okay ??? and then hit him punch him.. okay ???'

'what ??' thinking about the plan hari prakash tremebled.. snatch fone from arnav ji ?? OH MY OH MY MY arnav wud better snatch the heart out of me !!!! HP cried..

'mere liyee puleasssee..' laxmi blinked 5 times shyly.. HP agreed..!

laxmi gave him the adress and HP still shivering as though the temperature is -5 degree.. entered the old guest house.. OP secretely followed dem..

' bb bb by tt t the w w w way ll la laxmi jj jjjii ho hoow how did uu kk ki kidn kidnap aar aar aar aar..'

'arnav ji ???' laxmi asked wid attitude

'yess!'

'u c u both are not only bakras i have' laxmi said munching..

'What did u say ??'

'umm nothing i asked OP to give supari to few goons and they kidnapped arnav..'

'ohhh..' HP almost fainted seeing arnav and laxmi hid behind the wall.. arnav had fought wid goons making them bleed lik dey are dead..

'WHO gave u supari??' arnav kept asking half dead goons.. least did they know that a goat can do such things !!

laxmi ran back home and safely rested her head down on naani's lap..

'kya hua laxmi ji ??' naani kept soothing but laxmi was downed in her thoughts..

'ab mera revenge pura hua!! ek teer mei teen shikaar' laxmi thought 'firstly that angry young man arnav singh raizada who once had me locked in the dark room whole day just because i sniffed his plants ! huh kushi says right LAAD GOVERNER! huh..! and den that OP who alwz stops me from roaming around the house!! he doesnt feed me well too!!! and then that HP huh!! he once forgot to take me for a walk!!'

'naani ji arnav wapas aaagye' kushi kept jumping around and singing and dancing..

'awww my siso kushi.. im so happie meri is kidnap ki wajah se he confessed FINALLY!!! warna pata nhi aur kitna janam leta ek confess karne mei! now u too confess siso!! fir mei jiju se kabhi nafrat nhi karoongi POROMISE!!!' laxmi said grinning..

poor HP and OP came home half bitten by police

'naani ji humara galti nhi hai wo laxmi..' both HP n OP tried to point out laxmi..

'SHUT UP!!!! humari laxmi ke naam b mat lijiyega aap!! police pls take them away!' naani commanded..

police took OP n HP away laxmi turned her head around wid full attitude..

kushi hugged arnav in excitemnt.. and then involuntarily kissed him and said ' i love u too '

whole family was surprised!!!

shyam frowned .. nani left laxmi and hugged kushi and arnav who wer emabarrased..

laxmi looked at shyam.. who was thinking to use those signed papers.. but when he went to his room and checked the papers were missing..

laxmi smiled and thought ' papers are swimming in the swimming pool take a chill pill shyaam' laxmi said as she sat royally on the deewaan cot..

shyaam turned and askd 'did u say something laxmi ???'

laxmi munched and went away

'whts wrong wid u shyaam how can a goat talk ??' he thought to himself before he made a devdaas expression πŸ˜†


did u all like it ???? plss do review 😳


Created

Last reply

Replies

45

Views

6264

Users

38

Likes

90

Frequent Posters

Zehnaseeb. thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#2

res

unres...

OMG... someone lemme breath first...

Laxmi... what made u think that way... ok it should be the funniest OS of the week.. trust me...

just awesome...

keep writing more on ArHi... loved it...πŸ˜ƒ

Edited by Asha_ArSha - 12 years ago
--drama_queen-- thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#3

OMG THIS IS SOSOSOS HILARIOUS 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

i nearly diet laughing at this OS...
this is the funniest OS of this week...
OMG you should definetly continue this OS...
nd Finaly laxmi did something good πŸ˜†
i wish he could do things like this in the show πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by darksydeangel - 12 years ago
..nams.. thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: darksydeangel

OMG THIS IS SOSOSOS HILARIOUS 🀣

i nearly diet laughing at this OS...
this is the funniest OS of this week...
OMG you should definetly continue this OS...
nd Finaly laxmi did something good πŸ˜†
i wish he could do things like this in the show πŸ˜ƒ



awww thnkxx dear...

i tooo enjoyed writting this πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ€£

hahahaha i wish too πŸ˜‰
..MorningStar.. thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
LAXMI...u r a total ROCKSTAR!!!!...i love this...so creative...
Infinities thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
I was in a disgusting mood and when I read ur OS I am laughing like HELL 🀣🀣🀣🀣
Laxmi played a cupid role here hahahahahah AWESOME 🀣
AWESOME innovation Nams πŸ˜ƒ
Do write some more on ArHi !!!
KreyaArshiLover thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Namy dear you are hilarious. Ha ha ha rofl. Gosh Lakahmi's revange
..Rish.. thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
hAHAHAHHAHA... It was hilarious Namy !!!! 
Write more on ArNav and Khushi...spread your magic here !!! <3 

preeti_kreya thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Supea like naamy too good.. Laksmi g ki jai ho.. Hahahaha lovly OS.
moon_cupcake thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Its damn hilarious nams🀣🀣🀣...loved the cupid laxmi ji...