~~"teri meri prem kahani...baya na ho paygi"~~pg18

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Posted: 2012-05-16T03:07:58Z

hmmm..after seeing todays episode once again i fall in love with my jan sakshi...are yaar she is jst amaging...ufff...waise ye to mera hamesha ka kaam h pyar to m waise hi isse bht krti hu aur ye pyar hr scene k sath badhta hi jata h...khair mujhe yha mera pyar discuss nhi krna h...hihihi ... Kuchh kam krna h...

 

Actully aaj ka episode dekhne k baad jo track aane wala h as niharika said to priya fr missbhving frnt of mr.kapoor..then i hv a idea to write a romantic story along with missbehv...hihihi...mera mtlb h ki missbhv to dusro ko lagega na pr jise dikhan h (mr.kapoor) ..unhe to pyar hi lagega...lol...mujhe na kuchh jbrdst romantic scene dekhne h is situation me jo ki na chahte hue create hote hain kisi k bhi sath...to mne socha ki ekta to dikhayengi nhi chahe jitna bhi sr peet lo sr hi phootega...ekta ka dil patthr jo h...ufff...to m hi ek story me apne imagination wale scene daal k kahani bna deti hu...wo ek shayari h na...

"khush hone k liye to khayale ghalib hi kafi h"

 

To humne bhi yhi kiya aur ye thread create kr diya apne mn ka balh dekhne k liye...hihihi...so frnds kya lagta h try karu...its work????

 

 

So here i am going to start...

 

Scene 1...

As we know priya aa to gyi h kapoor mention me pr abhi tk raam priya ka amna samna nhi hua h to mne socha ki ye amna samna ekta style me as usual type ka ho usse pehle m jra diffrent type se kra deti hu...so here it is..

 

Scene 1...

 

Priya sbko nipta samjha k apne kamre me aati h apni as usual style me darwaze ko dono hatho se kholte hue jo ki mujhe bht pasand h...waise to wo janti h ki mr.kapoor nhi h yha lekin phir bhi dil kambakht use kaun samjhaye aur nhi to us dil ka sath ankhe bhi deti h aur us andhere kamre me bhi mr.kapoor ko dhundhti h jo ki wha nhi milte h...priya kamre ke haal ko dekhkr mr.kapoor k dil k haal ko achhi trh samjh jati h ki kitni udasi aur mayusi me rhe honge mr.kapoor...khair priya andr aati h sabse pehle curtains ko hatati h aur roshni ko kamre me bulati h waise to roshni priya k sath hi kamre me aa chuki hoti h ..phir priya bistr ko dekhti h aaj pehli baar use apne kamre ka bistr bina sameta hua milta h jo ki kabhi nhi hota tha...priya bistr theek krne lagti h ...bistr theek krte krte uski nazar photoframe pr padti h jo ki bistr pr pada hota h priya use hath me leti h aur mr.kapoor ko dekhne lagti h...waise to wo unse naraz h pr pyar bhi to bht krti h to km se km apna pyar photo ko to dikha hi sakti h...

 

Udhar office me mr.kapoor ka mn nhi lag rha h jane ko to office chale gye pr ab wha unse rha nhi ja rha h...wo bs priya k hi bare me sochta rhta h...ki pta nhi priya aa gyi hogi ya nhi...pta nhi kaisi lag rhi hogi,m pure 3 din baad dekhunga use ...aisa lag rha h jaise kb se nhi dekha h use,lekin jb wo mere samne ayegi to kya kahung,kaan pakad k sorry bol dunga..lekin wo to meri koi baat hi nhi sun rhi h, kuchh gift le leta hu whi de dunga...lekin uske liye bhi to uska mere samne rukna aur mujhe sunna jaruri h na, pehle mujhe iske liye kuchh krna padega...kya karu kya karu...idia...yesss...jate hi use kas k gale laga lunga aur jb tk meri baat nhi sunegi use jane hi nhi dunga...lol...raam itna excited ho jata h ki turnt uthta h aur ghr k liye nikal jata h...

 

Udhar priya abhi us photoframe se photo ki trh chipki hui h (ufff..ek hi bande ki pic kitni der tk dekh sakta h koi hadh h...isiliye khte h pyar krne wale pagal hote h..bht ho gya frame wrna mr.kapoor bahar nikal aayenge)

 

Tabse raam aa jata h aur peechhe se aake haath badhata h priya uska haath dekh k dr jati h aur dono jor se chilla dete h...

 

Ram...i m sorry i am sorry m drana nhi chahta tha m to bs surprise kr rha tha...

 

Aur raam bina time wst kiye priya ko gale laga leta h priya use pakadti to nhi h pr chhudane ki koshis bhi nhi krti are bhai itne din baad pati k gale lag rhi h itna pyar to bnta h yaar..waise to ye dono sirf 3 din k bichhde hue the pr mil aise rhe h jaise...

"kabke bichhde hue hum

Aaj kahan aake mile

Jaise sawan se kahin

Pyasi ghata chha k mile"

 

Raampriya ko aisa lagta h jaise unhe koi nhi dekh rha h aur bs wo ekdusre me khoye hue h pr aisa nhi wha unhe dekhne wale bht log h jinka ehsas unhe nhi h ...are bhai abhi abhi to priya ne crtns hata diye the to wha se wo jo asman me chand h wo apni chandni k sath kamre me jhank rha h aur apna pyar unpe brsa rha h,wo jo bahar se hawa gujr rhi thi wo bhi inhe dekh k whi ruk gyi h,aur to aur pure kamre ki ek ek cheez inke is pyar ki gawah ban rhi h aur in sbke sath free me hum bhi iska maza le rhe h...lol...lekin ab hmari kismat itni bhi achhi h nhi to priya ko apni pyari sasuma ki baat yaad aa jati h raam k dil me nfrt paida krne wali to wo raam ko jhtk deti h aur hmara sara maza kirkira kr deti h ullu ladki bs yhi to dekhne ko milta h wo bhi thoda lamba nhi khinch sakti ho hadh h...raam chaunk jata h aur kehta h

 

Raam...kya hua? Aur phir se gale lagne ki koshis krta h

 

Priya...ruk jaiye mr.kapoor m sabse pehle apki gltfhmi dur kar du aap aisa bilkul mt sochiyega ki m yha aap k liye aayi hu

 

Raam...mtlb???...tum abhi bhi naraz ho???

 

Priya...ji ha m apse bht naraz hu aur ye narazgi itni asani se dur nhi hone wali h...m bs yha mzburi me aa ghi hu

 

Raam...majburi??? Kaisi majburi ...aur priya tum aisa kyun kr rhi ho mere sath mne mangi to maafi tumse ye bhi kaha ki m apni glti manta hu...phir bhi tum kyun aise bhv kr rhi ho

 

Priya..dekhiye aisa h ki m bhi pehle hi kh chunki hu ki ab sorry bolne se kuchh theek nhi hone wala h aur nahi apke ehsas krne se kuchh hone wala h

 

Raam...to kya jarurat thi ane ki jaise jee rha tha m jeene deti ...

 

Priya...mujhe bhi koi shaukh nhi tha wapas aane ka pr m apki trh nhi hu na aapko to mere ghrwalo ki koi kadr h nhi ,mere ma baap apke liye to mayne rkhte nhi h pr m apke ghrwalo ki izzat bhi krti hu aur unki baat bhi manti hu isiliye apki ma k kehne pe aa gyi m yha bs isse jyada aur kuchh nhi...aur ab mujhe is bare me koi baat bhi nhi krni h mujhe neend aa rhi h bht thak gyi hu to sone ja rhi hu...gudnight

 

Raam...pr priya meri baat to suno

 

Pr priya change krne chali jati h raam phir se dukhi ho jata h...lekin himmat nhi harta h wo mn hi mn apne aap se promise krta h ki wo priya ko mna k hi rhega...

 

Thodi der bad

 

Priya change krk aati h apna blanket leke...raam bistr pe leta rhta h priya blanket couch pe rkh kr bed k yha aati h to raam thoda khisk jata h ki priya aram se soye pr priya pillow uthane lagti h...ram pillow pakad leta h

 

Priya...kya h??

 

Raam...whi to m bhi kh rha hu ki ye sb kya h??

 

Priya...m sone ja rhi hu to pillow chahiye...chhodiye

 

Raam...ja rhi hu mtlb?? Yhi to sona h to ja kahan rhi ho

 

Priya...yha nhi son h m couch pe soungi

 

Raam...kyun??? -..tumne hi to kaha tha ki cauch pe koi nhi soyega phir

 

Priya...kehne ka kya h kehne ko to aaj kl bht kuchh kha jata h uske hisab se chalne lage to phir to jeena mushkil ho jayega...chhodiye

 

Raam...nhi chhodunga

 

Priya...m kh rhi hu chhodiye

 

Raam...aur m keh rha hu nhi chhodunga

 

Priya...theek h mt chhodiye m bina pillow k so jaungi

 

Priya cauch pe jake late jati h jaise hi blancket odhne jati h raam use bhi aake pakad leta h

 

Priya..kya h??? -.ab ye bhi chahiye..le jaiye m iske bina bhi so lungi

 

Raam...nhi ye nhi chahiye...please priya tum bistr pe so jao ...promise m kuchh nhi karunga ...please priya

 

Priya...mr.kapoor aap kya chahte h ki m is kamre se bhi chali jau

 

Ram...nhi please...achha m ja rha hu tum so jao

 

Raam chhote se bachhe jaisa muh bna k bistr pe aake late jata h ...is waqt priya ko uspe bht pyar aa rha hota h pr bechari pyar bhi nhi kr sakti is mummyji k chakkr me...hadh h...thodi der bad priya dekhti h ki raam dusri trf muh krk leta h to dheere se aake bistr me ghus k aur chehre pe haath rkh k so jati h...raam ko pta chal jata h ki priya bistr pr aa gyi h...wo turnt se mudhta h aur priya ko niharne lagta h aur muskurata h uske chehre pe bht pyari masumiyat aur bht sara sukun rhta h ankho me bht pyar...priya bhi uski karwat ko mehsus krti h aur use bhi mr.kapoor k chehre ki raunk ka ehsaas h pr wo ise apni ankho se dekhna chahti h lekin kaise dekhe khid hi to itne nakhre dikhaye h...phir wo mr.kapoor ki trf chehra krk achhe se sone ka natak krne lagti h..aur mr.kapoor use dekhte hi jate h..ek baar to hath bhi badhate h chhune k liye lekin phir yaad aa jata h ki kahi phir bhadk k wapas cauch pe na chali jaye to hata lete h..udhr priya mn hi mn soch rhi h ki kitna dekhenge mr.kapoor aaj inko neend bhi nhi aa rhi h are mujhe bhi to dekhna h kab shuru honge inke kharrate...thodi der baad mr.kapoor kharrate lene lagte h aur priya turnt apni ankhe khol k unhe dekhne lagti h...wo bilkul waise hi lag rhe the jaise wo soch rhi thi masum sa bachha jiske chehre pe bht sari khushi aur sukun ho apni sabse pyari cheez pane k baad...lol..

 

To be continue...

Edited by veena23 - 2012-06-04T14:14:50Z
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Posted: 2012-05-16T03:10:56Z
me first. will comment later
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Posted: 2012-05-16T03:12:14Z
res... i'm so exited that u have updated... will comment later... thanks di... love u !!!
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Posted: 2012-05-16T03:21:09Z
Wow,its super veena di
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Posted: 2012-05-16T03:22:41Z
Veena ji, hum ko yahan par ek aur march 12th wala episode chahiye. likho na!
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Posted: 2012-05-16T03:27:33Z
 hmm veena  need to  say anything ur  good as always ..

a request  plz  change the text  colour  ..am  getting  irritated to the  colour 
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Posted: 2012-05-16T03:33:10Z
wow its just awesomeClap lClapoved it
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Posted: 2012-05-16T03:44:59Z
Kya yaar Veena..  pls aisa mat karo hamaare saath.. Aap itne achchhe updates dogi to serial mein man kaise lagega hamaara, bolo?LOL

Hamesha ki tarah too good tha ji.. Clap
Edited by PunyaS - 2012-05-16T03:45:14Z
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