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Filmyshilmy

@dennisdmenace

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#251

great writing. absolutely in love with d 4th part. 👏

i want each and every word of Khushi to be used by d CVs in d coming episode.

kudos to u for such an amazing portrayal of d characters. ⭐️⭐️⭐️thats d way Khushi should behave after being wronged in every possible way.

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#252

Smita:
Beautiful as always...your writing has something. It's always a great read. Please continue soon...can't wait to see how Arnav woos Khushi...I have a feeling it will be a awesome ride!

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#253

superb ss..
i luved these lines

He sighed. "I need to control my anger, make a few changes to my life. And you...you need to be away from me... I don't want to let you go. Not now, not ever. I want to carry you away to RM, to our room NOW. But I won't. I have hurt you too much. I will wait, till you believe in my love for you.

"And know that where ever you go, whatever you do, you will carry me in your heart. Only me."

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#254

Sacchi bataun? I was looking forward to another part after the third post 🤣

you are darn good Smita!

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#255

👏👏thanks...great job...fantastic.awesome...very great job...amzing...please update sooon...thanks for the long update...👏👏

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bikerider

@bikerider

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#256

wow nice one thanks for 3 parts and pm

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sooryalekshmi

@sooryalekshmi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#257

LOVED IT.

I FELT VERY BAD WHEN KHUSHI TALKED ABOUT LEAVING DELHI AND HER DECISION ABOUT NOT LETTING HER FOOT IN RM AGAIN.

BUT I LOVED ARNAV'S REPLY IN PART 5.

LOVE YOU ARNAV.

WAITING 4 KHUSHI'S DECISION. UPDATE SOON.

THANKS 4 THE PM

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#258

luved it

awesome updates

looking forward to seeing wat khushi has to say. hope its a yes

thx a lot for the pm

khushi wow she told of arnav really nicely.

continue soon

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@...Rapunzel...

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#259

wooow superbbb👏👏👏 n thanx 4 the pm n update soon

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namedx

@namedx

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#260

LOVED all three parts!!! Definitely left me wanting more!! I can really see the scene play out, Khushi's rightful anger, his expressive pain, the love and warmth of both families - uff!! What writing! Kudos for your efforts and I look forward to reading the next part! x

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