SS:Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna.. Chk pg.34 vry imp note. - Page 2

oh thats shocking, can see Niharika using Priya in the kidnapping

I'm shocked 🤢 ... Nih is very cheap

nice story.. keep updating plz
Edited by evanbaxter7058 - 12 years ago

awesome,interesting...keep post soon...

interesting... this is not bad at all... continue soon... thanks 4 the pm !!!

Gd mrng guys... Thnx vry much fr the appreciation and support.. I am cntinuing with the thrd part of ss.

N : ha mein ne uske baare me pata karne ke liye ek pvt. Detective ko appoint kiya tha.. Usne mujhe bataya ki nuts ke kidnaping me priya bhi karthik ke saath mili hui he..

Ram ws dumbstrk by ths.. He cd nvr thnk of priya doing such thngs..
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Part 3

R : wt r u saying ma? Priya cn nevr do such thngs..

N : why'd i lie to u ram? That too regarding my belovd beti? I've told u wt i hd to tel..

R : bt maa...

N : am telling u the truth baby.. Accept it.. And get that middle clas girl out of ur zindagi..

R : wt ?? I cn nver do that.. She is my wife.. I cnt leave hr.

N : nw i undrstand.. That u dnt lv ur family any more.. That cheap girl has becm prior than ur choti..

Ram ws left thnking by the statemnt.. THere ws a war going on btwn the two sides of his heart..
He loves his choti very much.. She ws like her daughtr.. Hw cd he leave that persn who hv caused her harm so much.. On the othr sd it was priya.. His love.. His lyf.. The only one who care for hm ...
He was undr grt presure..
Achanak se niharika jaakar ek document ke saath aayi..
N : ram baby, ye lo divorce papers...

Edited by Lavi_961 - 12 years ago

wat?? niharika pagal hogayee hai... pls i hope ram priya ko divorce na de... their relation ship cannot end here... continue asap... thanks 4 the update & pm !!!

Part 3 contd...

Recap:
niharika gives divorce papers to ram..

Update
ram didnt reply anythng..
Niharika left.
Ram keeps luking at the divorce papers nt knwing wt to do with it.
Here, in km, priya is sleeping uncomfortably on the couch with ram's photo close to he chest..

*Morning*
priya wakes up and gets fresh.. Bansi kaka cms with tea and brkfst.
Bk: gd mrng madam.
P: gd mrng. Mr.kapoor aye?
Bk : haan maam.. Woh aaj subah hi aaye..
P : aa gaye tho woh kahan he?
Bk : maam wo guest room me hein..
P : ok bk, aap jaa sakte hein..
Priya goes to talk to him.
Reaches the guest room, finds ram shouting at smeone in the phn..
R : wht the h*** are u guys doing? Choti ka ab tak kuch pata nahi chala he.. Aur vo karthik kule aam ghum raha he.. I wnt hm to b behnd the bars asap..
And bangs the phn..

ram priya ko alag mat karvaanaa... continue asap... thanks !!!

Very nice post...I will not criticize your writing...I will appreciate your sincere attempt to write...good effort...keep it up...even though your writing is short, you are able to convey what you want to convey...that's a real plus in ur writing...thanks and continue  A S A P...👏

Next part please. Lekin itni chiti chiti updates? Bade wala bana do na?