|The Raghav Diaries| Entry One, pg4 - Page 3 | Dil se di dua... Saubhagyavati Bhava?

Soaps1

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Meg need i say its beautiful 😍

Loved these parts particularly

For all those people who think I have a hero complex, I definitely didn't beat my chest and scream out like a Tarzan swinging from the rooftops. I waited patiently, confident that she would either roll her eyes in disgust or turn her face away lest my eyes strike her with lightning. Instead she looked back into my eyes, her fear replaced by a strange emptiness.

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Now there is just calm, a partial hollow inside me. The perspiration makes me feel like I'm wearing a shroud, but I'm used to the discomfort. I can taste salt on my lips and I wonder whether I'm sweating or crying. I definitely feel exhausted enough to shed a few tears, but my eyes are surprisingly dry. I try to inhale and exhale, but I continue to feel breathless. It's always been this way for me-holding onto whatever life I have inside me. It's only when I'm facing danger that I learn to let go.

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betty123

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hiii megzz...

Awesum dear... 👏👏👏...i felt dat I m actually peeping in Raghavs heart...beautifully written...

I hav read d earlier parts also n I simply luved it...

Do pm me wen u update...😃Edited by betty123 - 12 years ago

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Megha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Soaps1
Meg need i say its beautiful 😍

Loved these parts particularly

For all those people who think I have a hero complex, I definitely didn't beat my chest and scream out like a Tarzan swinging from the rooftops. I waited patiently, confident that she would either roll her eyes in disgust or turn her face away lest my eyes strike her with lightning. Instead she looked back into my eyes, her fear replaced by a strange emptiness.

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Now there is just calm, a partial hollow inside me. The perspiration makes me feel like I'm wearing a shroud, but I'm used to the discomfort. I can taste salt on my lips and I wonder whether I'm sweating or crying. I definitely feel exhausted enough to shed a few tears, but my eyes are surprisingly dry. I try to inhale and exhale, but I continue to feel breathless. It's always been this way for me-holding onto whatever life I have inside me. It's only when I'm facing danger that I learn to let go.

Thanks.😊 I'm taking a lot of creative liberty with Raghav..kahin aisa na ho he is completely different from what I'm writing him to be.😆 but I really enjoyed writing the 'Tarzan' part, I actually imagined myself to be Raghav thinking about that stupid police inspector.😆

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Fatima

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Needless to say...It was brilliant. 👍🏼

And I loved how you ended it:

"Now there is just calm, a partial hollow inside me. The perspiration makes me feel like I'm wearing a shroud, but I'm used to the discomfort. I can taste salt on my lips and I wonder whether I'm sweating or crying. I definitely feel exhausted enough to shed a few tears, but my eyes are surprisingly dry. I try to inhale and exhale, but I continue to feel breathless. It's always been this way for me-holding onto whatever life I have inside me. It's only when I'm facing danger that I learn to let go.

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! Looking forward to more. 😃

And thanks so much for the PM.

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