Barsaat-Angad,Garv,Kripa,Kumud - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
hey omg great first part!!! taht was tooo good...contineu soon i loved it.....ur such a great writer..i loved all ur fanfics before this just as much
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
that was awesome!
i really like the pairings u have made!
they r awesome!
cont soon!
nice start.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-2..Garv:I'm going 2 teach u about the strong luv of Othello & Desdimona.Othello was so much in luv with desdimona that he was very possessive abt her.Kripa,what do u say abt it?
Kripa thinks:what wil I say abt that boring person's luv?
K:If Othello loves desdimona very much,very nice
Angad's eyes r on K.Garv notices that:Angad,r u here?
A:ya.        G:then giv ur view
A:luv is always beautiful.i admire the ppl who luv
Kumud:Sir,I've an objection.I cant digest othello's luv.His possessiveness does'nt prove that he loves her deeply.True luv is trust,possessiveness has no place in it
G:Amazing!this is the way,u shud share ur views.kumud is the only person who gave serious opinion.she thinks deeply abt it while all others take it silly.well done kumud
Kumud:thanku sir
A tells himself:ya,kumud is the only studious person.is that the only reason why garv sir is so fond of her?
Kripa who hears it:I don't think so.i think sumthing is there btw them
A smiles.

After the class,they r going 2 diff sides.G looks at K.K looks at A.A looks at Kripa.
IT rains. Kumud:wow!rain!
K dances in the rain.G smiles.Angad also dances in the rain.
A:kripa,why don't u cum & dance with me?
K:dance with u?never!
A says in his mind:kripa,1 day,u'l dance with me
K thinks:If prithvi is not there,the rain is not romantic.then why shud I dance in rain?
Angad dreams of dancing with kripa in rain while kumud dreams of dancing with A.Garv dreams of dancing with kumud in rain.Kripaa dreams of dancing with prithvi. song:barsaat…{barsat}

During interval students r talking abt next day's prom nite preparations.
Angad:kripa,what r u planning 2 wear 4 prom nite?
K:I'vent decided
A:make quick decisions.who'l b ur partner?
K:partner is necessary
A:but on prom nite,every1 wil find one
K:so what?I don't care.its so boring
K goes out.A thinks:why kripa is like this?I've 2 struggle a lot 2 win her heart
Kumud:who is ur partner angad?
A:lets see 2morrow,actually til now I'vent got any1
K thinks:I'm always ready 4 that

Angad goes out.he sees garv. A:Sir..
G:ya angad      A:what r u planning 2 wear 4 the promnite?
G laughs:prom nite is 4 students,not 4 teachers like me
A:cum on sir.all the teachers enjoy it.then why do u hesitate.i'm sure that u r the hottest among the teachers.kumud wil b impressed
G:what?     A:I no ur softcorner 2wards kumud,sumthing romantic?
G is shy:no,I'm fond of her as she's the best student of class
A:Oh really?sir,unlike other teachers u r like our friend.that's why I'm free with u.i can read ur mind.however u try 2 hide,ur feelings 4 kumud wil cum out
A goes.G smiles
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
GREAT PART YAAR! u have to cont soon! its so cute how garv likes kumud!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-3
Prithvi & kripa in the car.P is driving.K's eyes r on P.
P:why r u looking at me like this?
K is shy:how cum u no that?u were driving
P:ya,I'm driving.but my eyes r also on u
Both laugh.
K:I missed u very much wen there was rain.all the lovers of college were dancing 2gether
P smiles & holds her arm:tho there is no rain now,we can dance as rain is not needed 4 lovers 2 dance
K:what?
P stops the car.P-K cum out
P takes her in his arms
K:prithvi,u r naughty
P:how can't I b naughty with my naughty gf
Both laugh.They sing & dance with a sweet romantic touch.song:ye jo dil hai..{barsaat}
Then they get inside the car.P:how was it?
K:it was cool.i realy enjoyed it
P smiles.    K:2morrow is our prom nite
P:wow!   K:but I don't want 2 go
P:why?how can u miss such a thrilling nite?
K:u r not there,then why shud I?I'l b chosen 2 hav another stupid partner
P:cum on kripa.don't b silly.partner 4 1 day is ok.he's not going 2 b ur partner 4ever.I'l b ur life partner
K smiles.

Angad thinks lying on the bed:kripa,2morrow I'l b ur partner.i'l b ur partner 4 the whole life

Next day,Angad wears white shirt,black ant & overcoat.
A looks at the mirror:u luk hot gorgeous.kripa wil b impressed
HE hears a voice from behind:I'm already impressed
He turns back & is surprised 2 see K there with a smile.She has worn a tight glittering white frock.K cums closer 2 him & her fingers go thru his face.A is excited.A closes his eyes.then opens.K is vanished.
A:where is kripa?she has gone.oh!it was only my illusion
A feels embarrassed.

then he goes 2 garv's house.G is not ready yet
A:u did'nt get ready?
G:actually I'm confused what 2 wear
A:but I'm not confused.i no what suits u

G is dressing inside the room.A is waiting outside.G cums out.
A:wow!I just cant believe this.u r much hotter than we students
G smiles:Angad,ur complement is too much
A:no sir.i'm absolutely right.otherwise also,girls r crazy abt u.u cant count the no:of the female students who r mad abt u.how many luv letters u've got from u.u r really hot.that's why,girls r not missing ur class.i wish I get ur glamour.then my luv wil also b fulfilled
G:ur luv?kripa?
A is speechless. G:I no that.during class,u never listen,but always observe kripa
A smiles:why shud I hide from a friendly sir like u?u r right.anyways,2day all the girls wil fall 4 u again neglecting young hotties like us
G smiles: but the girl whom I luv …
A:so finally u admitted that u r in luv
G is shy. A:ur luv wil b fulfilled soon.i've felt that kumud likes u very much.but it'l take sum time 4 her 2 admit it as she is always dreaming abt her studies
G smiles
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
awesome parts!
i wonder if kumud will actually start to like garv!
i dont mind her with angad but she also looks nice with garv!
cant wait for the next part!
cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-4..Angad-Garv go 4 prom nite.All the girls r excited 2 see them:2 hotties!wow!Angad & garv sir..Garv sir looks so young & cute
A smiles & looks at every girl:hi
G:angad,u want 2 hav masti wen I'm with u
A:oh!I'm sorry,I did'nt think abt ur clean image.this is the problem with going 4 parties with teachers.we've 2 b decent
G:Angad!enuf ok
A smiles.

All r simply dancing.A also dances.G looks at them.
A:cum sir
G:no,I dunno dancing
A:u've cum 4 prom nite & is telling that u dunno dance?I'l teach u dance
A pushes G into the dance floor.G is shocked:what is this angad?
A catches G's hand & makes him dance.They both laugh.
A:now how do u feel?
G:ok,not bad
A:not bad?let kumud dance with u,then it'l b nice
G smiles.

Kripa cums in a tight white glittering frock & matching ornaments.A:wow!
A goes near her:u luk very nice.u luk like a princess
K did'nt care. A:I new that u'l wear white dress
K:oh really?how?
A:I can read ur mind
K:rubbish
K goes.A is dull:oh,wen wil her heart melt?

Kumud enters the hall in a red shining sari.Many red roses r there in her sari.
Garv is happy.A looks at G & winks.G smiles.Kripa cums near Kumud:hi kumud
A looks at kripa.he wants 2 make her jealous.so tells kumud:kumud,u luk really sexy in this sari.A sizzling mermid
Ku smiles:thanku
K:kumud,don't listen 2 him.he'l make u mad with senseless complements
A:hey,not senseless.i really meant that kumud is pretty
K:yes,kumud is very pretty.every1 nos that.u don't hav 2 tell that
A:ok ok

Angad tells garv:girls r really tough.its so difficult 2 manage them
G laughs.A goes 2 kripa:I'l b ur partner.shall we dance?
K:never
A:but u need a partner
K:I've a partner
A is shocked:who?
K goes & holds Garv's hand:Garv sir is my partner
Both Garv & Angad r shocked
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
πŸ˜† garv kripa! πŸ˜†
awww great part! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
hey m new here...
u really good at this..
awesome story... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
yes!
garv-kripa and kumud-angad!
that would rock!
cont soon!
loved the part!