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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: preity_d

nice light hearted chapter and loved their dresses ðŸ˜ƒ

  THNK U...GLAD U LYKD THEIR OUTFITS,,😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvVirManNiShal

Awesome update
Too cute loved how VirIka teased VirMan and VirMan too teased VirIka aww
Update soon and pm me
Thanksz x

  THNK U..WILLSURELY UPDATE SOON N PM U..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update!!..
Please pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shabana20

Lovely update!!..

Please pm me..
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Thnk u so much,,,will surely PM u wen i'll update...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
 u gona cont or not gal?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Hello-hi-by-by

 u gona cont or not gal?

 i lov uor ff man


Thnk u so much 4 loving it...sorry actually i lost the file dats y it took so long..but m updating 2day..sorry once again...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello lovely peoplezzz.😊..m back wid part 7...thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments, and m so sorry 4 da late update, actually it was ready, but da file got deleted or sumthin, sorry once again...neways...I hope u'll lykk dis update as well,,,ENJOY..

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 7...


~Recap~

Guest started to come, the Vadhera's and Chaudhary's were welcoming them, while JeeMan and Vadhera Boys were getting ready.

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~Main Hall~

Everyone were busy welcoming the guest for Our VirMan's Roka.

Vanshika Maa: (to Beeji) Beeji, itni der ho gayi hai, Viraat aur Viren abhi tak neeche nahi aaye.

Beeji: Aa jaye gein Vanshika Ji, aap fikar mat kijiye. Dono Bhai taiyar ho rahe hogein.
Vanshika Maa: (smiles) Ji.

Just as Beeji turned around, she saw Viraat and Viren descending the stairs with a huge smile on their face.

Beeji: (smiles) Woh dekhiye Vanshika Ji, aa gaye aapke dono Bete.

Viren and Viraat walked towards their Maa, who was looking at them lovingly, smiled with tears in her eyes.

Viren: Maa? Kya hua?
Vanshika Maa: Kuch nahi, bas tum dono ko dekh kar, tumhare Papa ki yaad aa gayi.
Viraat: (hugs her) Mom, Papa nahi hai toh kya hua, (breaks the hug) aapke dono Bete toh hai na aapke paas, (hands on her cheeks/smiles) Aur hamesha rahe gein.
Viren: Haan Maa, hum aapke paas hamesha rahe gein, ek pal ke liye bhi aapse dur nahi rahe gein.
Vanshika Maa: (laughs a little with tears streaming down her cheeks) Bas karo tum dono, agar meri dono Bahuon ne yeh sunliya toh kya socheingi.
Viraat: Yahi socheingi, ki (hugs her sideways) unke Pati apni Maa se kitna pyaar karte hai.
Viren: (hugs her from the other side) Haan, aur proud bhi feel kareingi yeh soch kar ki unke Pati kitne ache hai.

Beeji smiled watching the scene before her, tears formed in her eyes as she remembered Maanvi and Jeevika's Father, her Son, who would never come back.

Vanshika Maa: Acha, (places her palm on their cheeks) aaj badha pyaar aa raha hai Maa pe.
Viraat: Woh toh hamesha aata hai...
Viren: Par aaj zaaya(express) karne ka mann kar raha hai.

Vanshika Maa breaks the hug and stands infront of Vadhera Boyz.

Vanshika Maa: Tum dono bhi na, (looking at Beeji) Dekha Beeji, mere dono Beton ko.
Beeji: Haan Vanshika Ji, aap bahut khushnasib ho, aapko do bahut pyaar karne wale Bete miley hai, jo aapko kabhi chodh kar nahi jaye gein.

Beeji couldn't control her feeling, she couldn't control her tears, unknowingly her hand moved up to her cheeks to wipe away the tears that were streaming down her face. She didn't know why she was missing her Son so much today, she did miss him every single second of her life, but today it was beyond limit, she couldn't control her emotion at all. Viraat and Viren saw Beeji in tears, they understood that she must be missing JeeMan's Dad. They walked towards Beeji and hugged her sideways.

Viren: Toh kya hum aapke Bete nahi hai Beeji?
Beeji: Nahi Beta,,aisi baat nahi hai...
Viraat: Aisi baat nahi hai toh kaisi baat hai? Beeji, hum bhi aapke Bete hai, jaise humare liye Maa hain, waise hi aap hai. Aap jab bhi kisi musibat mein hongi, humko hamesha apne paas payeingi Beeji.
Beeji: (smiles through her tears) Zarur meri Betiyon ne puniya(good deeds) ka kaam kiya hoga, isiliye toh unhe tum dono jaise jeevan saathi miley hain, aur mujhe tum dono jaise Bete. Bahut khush nasib hai hum, jo hume tum dono jaise Bete aur Itna acha pariwaar mila.
Vanshika Maa: Khush nasib toh hum hain Beeji, jo hume Jeevika aur Maanvi jaisi Bahuein mili, hum grav se keh sakhte hai ki Vadhera Khandan ki Badi Bahu khara Sona hai aur Choti Bahu ek anmol Heera. Jisse sab koi chahta hai, par paata sirf wahi hai jinke nasib mein hota hai.

Vadhera Boyz smiled at each other, feeling proud of their choice. Vanshika Maa and Beeji turned around as they heard Dadaji's voice.

Dadaji: Bahu, Jeevika aur Maanvi taiyaar nahi hui abhi tak?
Vanshika Maa: Woh main abhi dekhti hun Bauji.
Dadaji: Tum rehne do Bahu, main Kadambari Bahu se keh deta hun, tum yahan mehmaan ki khatirdari karo.
Vanshika Maa: (smiles) Ji.

Dadaji walked towards Kadambari Chachi and Pinky Chachi, who were having conversation with some guest.

Dadaji: Bahu, Pinky Beta, tum dono jaa kar Maanvi aur Jeevika ko bula lao.
Kadambari Chachi: Ji Bauji, hum abhi laate hai.

Kadambari Chachi and Pinky Chachi made their way towards Maanvi's room to call JeeMan.

~Maanvi's Room~

Maanvi was pacing around her room, nervously, while Jeevika was sitting on the bed looking at her baby sister pacing back and forth, which actually irritated her.

Jeevika: Bas kar Mannu, kuch nahi hoga, itni nervous kyun ho rahi hai tu?

Maanvi: (turns to face Jeevika) Kyun ho rahi hun? Di, aaj mera roka hai, sabki nazar mujh par hogi, nervous nahi hongi toh aur kya hongi.
Jeevika: (stands beside Maanvi/hands around Maanvi's shoulder) Nervous mat ho Mannu, main hun na tere saath.
Maanvi: Aap toh aise keh rahi ho jaise aap kabhi nervous nahi huyi apne Roke mein.
Jeevika: Huyi thi, par tu thi na mere saath toh mera sab dar dur bhag gaya tha, aur aaj main hun tere saath toh tera dar bhi bhag jaye ga.
Maanvi: (innocently) Pakka na?
Jeevika: (smiles) Pakka.

As Maanvi smiled and hugged Jeevika, Kadamberi Chachi and Pinky Chachi entered the room with a huge smile on their faces.

Kadambari Chachi: Yeh dekho, wahan bahar do Bhai besabri se apni Patni aur Hone Wali Patni ka intezaar kar rahe hai, aur yeh dono Behne toh aapas mein hi busy hain.

Maanvi and Jeevika broke apart from the hug and turn to face Kadambari Chachi and Pinky Chachi.

Jeevika: Chachi, woh Mannu bahut nervous ho rahi hai isiliye.
Pinky Chachi: Kyun Maanvi Putar, tu ghabra kyun rahi hai? Hum sab hai na tere saath, aur aaj toh meri bachi bilkul ek Pari lag rahi hai, (putting small black spot behind her ears) kisi ki nazar na lage meri bacchi ko.
Kadambari Chachi: Sach mein Maanvi, aaj tum bahut soni lag rahi ho, Viraat toh aaj gaya.

All three of them giggled, while Maanvi was lost in her own world.

Maanvi: (to herself) Woh toh sach mein gaya Chachi, mujhse shadi karne chala hai, woh bhi mujhe blackmail kar ke, gin gin ke badla lungi main uss Chep se.
Jeevika: (shaking Maanvi) Mannu, kahan kho gayi? Neeche nahi chalna hai kya?
Maanvi: (back to her sense) Huh,,haan Di, chalo.

Maanvi walked out of her room, with Jeevika on her left side, Pinky Chachi on her right and Kadambari Chachi behind. They walked towards the stairs and stopped as Maanvi held Jeevika's hand tightly.

Maanvi: Di,,kitne saare log hai, mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai.

Jeevika: Mannu, main hun na, dar mat. Chal.

Jeevika dragged Maanvi towards the stairs and starts descending the stairs.

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~Main Hall~


Viraat was getting impatient every passing seconds.

Viraat: Bhai, yeh Bhabhi abhi tak aayi kyun nahi?
Viren: (smriks) Bhabhi ya Bhabhi ki Behna?
Viraat: (blushes) Bhai..

Viren saw Jeevika and Maanvi descending the stairs followed by Kadambari Chachi and Pinky Chachi. He was lost in his wife's beauty, who was wearing a beautiful maroonish red and teal shade viscose georgette lehenga saree, her hair left open with soft curls, with matching maang tikka on her forehead, earrings, bangles and necklace around her neck.

Jeevika's dress: http://www.cbazaar.com/party-wear-saree/chic-lehenga-sarees/red-viscose-georgette-embroidered-lehenga-saree-p-sakagr1455.html

Viraat was looking at Viren confusedly, who was completely lost, he tapped his shoulder which made him come back to his sense.

Viraat: Bhai?
Viren: Huh?
Viraat: Aap kahan kho gaye?
Viren: Umm,,,woh...Jeevika...
Viraat: (smiles) Kya Bhabhi? Kahan? (looking around)
Viren: Tere piche.

Viraat turned around and he saw Maanvi descending the stairs, who was looking down nervously. She was just looking like an angel who had landed right from the heavan, just for him. Her hair were left open with soft curls at the end, matching maang tikka on her forehead, earrings, bangles, beautiful necklace around her neck adoring her even more, and her dupatta which was neatly drape over her shoulder. Maanvi finally came towards Viraat and stood beside him, his eyes still not leaving her face.

Viren: (tapping on Viraat's shoulder) Viraat, mere Bhai, aise kya dekh raha hai?
Viraat: (coming back to his senses) Huh..kuch..kuch bhi toh nahi Bhai.
Kadambari Chachi: Sharma mat Viraat, teri hi Patni bane wali hai.
Viraat: (blushes) Nahi Chachi woh..
Jeevika: Arey arey Devarji bas kijiye sharmana, warna log samjhe gein ki dulhan aap hain. Pyaar mein aksar aisa hi hota hai.

Everyone laughed at Jeevika's comment, Maanvi looked at Viraat angerily while Viraat just blushed and looked down.

Maanvi: (to herself) Chep kahin ka, kitna natak karta hai, sharma toh aise raha hai jaise mere pyaar mein pagal hai. Isse toh award milna chahiye.

While everyone was busy with others, Maanvi nudge Viraat on his arms and gave him an angry young women look.

Viraat: Kya hai?
Maanvi: Mujhe nahi tumhe kya hai?
Viraat: Ab maine kya kar diya, main toh chup chap yahan baitha hun yaar.
Maanvi: Nautanki band karo, tumhare yeh natak mujh par nahi chalne wale.
Viraat: Ab maine kaunsi nautanki ki hai?
Maanvi: Itne sharmane ki kya zarurat thi? Sharma toh aise rahe the jaise nayi naveli dulhan aur mujhse behadh pyaar karte ho. Pagal ho kya? Sabko sabit kya karna chahte ho?
Viraat: Oye chup kar. Main kuch sabit nahi karna chahta, par acting toh karni padegi na, humari shadi ho rahi hai aur sabko lagta hai ki hum dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai isiliye shadi kar rahe hain.
Maanvi: Haan par..
Viraat: (cuts her off) Kuch par var nahi. Agar tum chahti ho ki iss ghar mein khushiyon ke badle dukh aaye toh thik hai mat karo natak, bata do sabko ki tum mujhse shadi kyun kar rahi ho.
Maanvi: Nahi nahi nahi...main,,main natak karungi...
Viraat: (smiles) Good.
Maanvi: Par tum yaad rakhna main tumse shadi sirf isiliye kar rahi hun taki iss pariwaar aur meri Di ki zindagi mein koi dukh na aaye, isse zyada aur kuch nahi samjhe.
Viraat: (smiles sweetly) Haanji Maanvi ji, samjh gaya.

Viraat and Maanvi turned around when they heard Dadaji's voice.

Dadaji: Hume ab rasmein shuru kar dena chahiye.

Jeevika: JI Dadaji.

Jeevika and Pinky Chachi walked towards VirMan with aarti ki thali in their hands. Pinky Chachi did Viraat's tikka, aarti, and gave him shagun as Jeevika did the same with Maanvi.

Pinky Chachi: (smiles) Viraat putar, aaj se meri Bacchi Maanvi tumhari huyi.
Jeevika: (smiles) Aur mera Devar tera hua Mannu. (hands on Maanvi's cheeks) Mannu, aaj teri zindagi kisi aur ke saath judh gayi hai, jaa apni nayi zindagi ki shuruwat badho ke ashirwaad le kar shuru kar.

Maanvi and Viraat stood up, took all the elders blessing and walked towards VirIka. They leaned forward to touch their feet when VirIka stopped them.

VirIka: Arey,..humara pair kyun?
Maanvi: Di, Jiju, aap bhi toh humare liye Mama Papa ki tarah ho na. Kya aap apne bacchon ko apna ashirwaad nahi doge?
Viraat: Hume aap dono ke ashirwaad ki bhi zarurat hai Bhai, Bhabhi.
Viren: Humara ashirwaad tum dono ke saath hamesha rahe ga, iske liye tum dono ko humare pair chune ki koi zarurat nahi hai.
Jeevika: Haan, tum dono ki jagha humare dil mein hai, pairon mein hai.

All four of them hugged each other tightly.

Dadaji: Arey Bhai, yahan bas aise hi chalta rahega ki thoda nach gaana hoga huh?
Badi Beeji: Arey kaisa rukha sukha Roka hai tera Chudail, isse acha toh mera Roka tha.
Maanvi: Acha Badi Beeji, aisa kya hua tha aapke roke mein.
Badi Beeji: Kya kya dhamaal huya tha, maine aur tere Bade Dadu ne kya thumke lagaye the.
Viren: Badi Beeji, aapke roke ki tarah toh nahi par dhamaal toh hum bhi karegein Kyun Viraat?
Viraat: Bilkul Bhai.
Badi Beeji: Haan Haan main bhi toh dekhun.
Viren:  Thik hai Badi Beeji, aap bas dekhte jaaiye.
Viraat: Good Luck Bhai.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wpZDMQYOfZQ
(this is the song which they'll b dancing on...plz ignore the first part of the song)

Viren dragged Jeevika along with him, and starts dancing on the music. He was standing on Jeevika's left, holding her hand in his, both moving on the beat of the music.

Viren: (pulled her hand slightly) Oye kudiye, oye kudiye, tere tann se phisal na jaaye...(ran towards her right side) Oye kudiye, oye kudiye, tere tann se phisal na jaaye, (holding her dupatta) tera lal dupatta (waving the dupatta) malmal ka, tera lal dupatta malmal ka.

Everyone smiled watching VirIka dancing.

Jeevika: (held Viren's hand) Oye mundiya, (pulled him with force towards herself) oye mundiya, (hand on his chest) seene se nikal na jaaye, (pushes him away) Oye mundiya, (turn towards everyone else) oye mundiya, (hand on her chest) seene se nikal na jaaye, (arms over her head/hips swinging from left to right) armaan tere dil paagal ka, armaan tere dil paagal ka.
Viraat: (walking around VirIka and then Maanvi) Aashiq majnu aawara tha, sabki nazron ka maara tha, kya chain se udta (hands spread out) phirta tha, (stood next to Maanvi) kitna khushaal kawaara tha, (hits his shoulder with hers, twice) oye goriye, oye goriye, tune (acting like an flying bird) udhte panchhi ko...
Dadaji, Madhan Chachu, Inder Chachu, Viren, Dabbu, & Shlok: (pointing towards Maanvi) Oye goriye, oye goriye, tune udhte panchhi ko.
Viraat: (hand on his heart/limping) Dil ke pinjre mein (acting as if locking something with a key) band kiya, dil ke pinjre mein band kiya...
Dadaji, Madhan Chachu, Inder Chachu, Viren, Dabbu, & Shlok: (doing same gesture as Viraat) Dil ke pinjre mein band kiya, dil ke pinjre mein band kiya...

Kadambari Chachi and Pinkcy Chachi pushed Maanvi towards Viraat, gesturing her to sing and dance.

Maanvi: (hits her elbow on his stomach) Aa hosh mein aa nadaan zara, (hand across her chest/looking at Viraat) tu maan mera ehsaan zara, (stands close to him/looking into his eyes) chal dekh meri in aankhon mein, (turns her face away from him) meri chaahat ko pehchaan zara, (turns back to face him/ hits slightly on his head, twice) Oye pagle, oye pagle, kaise tujhko samjhaun...??
Jeevika, Beeji, Badi Beeji, Vanshika Maa, Kadambari Chachi, & Pinky Chachi: (pointing towards Viraat) Oye pagle, oye pagle, kaise tujhko samjhaun..??
Maanvi: (moving her hips while limping) Kyun maine (pointing Viraat) isse pasand kiya, kyun maine isse pasand kiya...???
Jeevika, Beeji, Badi Beeji, Vanshika Maa, Kadambari Chachi, & Pinky Chachi: (smiles) Kyun maine isse pasand kiya, kyun maine isse pasand kiya...??

Viren walked towards Viraat and place his hand on his shoulder, along with Inder Chachu and Madhan Chachu.

Viren: (hands on Viraat's shoulder) Mere bhai seedha saadha hai.

Viraat: (hits on the back of Maanvi's head) Ye ladki chheil chhabeeli hai, (looking her face closely) hai rang roop toh theek thaak (hits on the side of her head) bheje se thodi dheeli hai..

Maanvi's eyes widden and her mouth shaped into an O.

Viren: (walked near Maanvi) Oye baliye, oye baliye. (pretending to be confused) mere yaar jamegi kaise...??
Dadaji
, Madhan Chachu, Inder Chachu, Dabbu, & Shlok: (pretending to be confused/asking each other) Oye baliye, oye baliye, mere yaar jamegi kaise...???

Viren: Gilli dande ki jodi hai, gilli dande ki jodi hai...(dn't really knw wat's gilli dande...therefore imagine him doing the same steps as Salman Khan is doin in dis song)
Dadaji, Madhan Chachu, Inder Chachu, Dabbu, & Shlok: (same gesture as Viren/Salman) Gilli dande ki jodi hai, gilli dande ki jodi hai...

Jeevika and Viraat danced together and Viren and Maanvi dance together. While they were dancing, Viraat's intentionlly walked towards Maanvi and  hitted his shoulder with hers, which made her lose her balance for a second. She slighty pushed him away from her.

Maanvi: Maano mera kehna logon (smiles cutely) meri sudarta se (makes wired faces at Viraat) jalta hain (walk towards Viraat and Viren/points at Viraat) sach kehti hun mujhko toh yeh (wraps her hand around Viren's arm) bhai ka chamcha lagta hai (places her hand on Viraat's chest and pushes him back, twice) oye chhaliye, oye chhaliye, (showing him her palm, as if showing him an mirror) zara dekhle tu aaina...
Jeevika, Beeji, Badi Beeji, Vanshika Maa, Kadambari Chachi, & Pinky Chachi: (holding Viraat's cheeks, ears, hands)Oye chhaliye, oye chhaliye, zara dekhle tu aaina..
Maanvi: (limping backwards/index finger pointing Viraat, swinging back and foward) Tere mann mein koi chor hai, tere mann mein koi chor hai...
Jeevika, Beeji, Badi Beeji, Vanshika Maa, Kadambari Chachi, & Pinky Chachi: (doing same gesture as Maanvi, except Badi Beeji) Tere mann mein koi chori hai, tere mann mein koi chori hai...
Jeevika dragged Maanvi in the middle, while Viren pulled Viraat in the middle. VirMan looked at each other and starts dancing, as if they are in a dancing compitition against each other. And as always they end up fighting while dancing.

Dadaji: (came between VirMan) Chhodo na yun takraar karo, (placing Maanvi's hand on Viraat's) khushiyon ki ghadi hai pyaar karo, (hands on the back of their head) ek duje se na uljhoge, mere saamne tum izhaar karo...
Inder Chachu: (walked towards VirMan/stands in between them/lookimg at Maanvi) Oye heeriye, oye heeriye (hand on Viraat's cheek) yeh toh bhola bhaala hai...
Dadaji, Madhan Chachu, Inder Chachu, Viren, Dabbu, & Shlok: (walked towards Maanvi) Oye heeriye, oye heeriye (looking at Viraat) yeh toh bhola bhaala hai...
Madhan Chachu: Mat maan bura (hand on Viraat's back) iss raanjhe ka, mat maan bura is raanjhe ka...
Dadaji, Madhan Chachu, Inder Chachu, Viren, Dabbu, & Shlok: Mat maan bura is raanjhe ka, mat maan bura is raanjhe ka...
Viraat: (holds Maanvi's hand/pulled her towards himself) Oye kudiye, oye kudiye (arm wrapped around her waist) tere tann se phisal na jaaye (holds her dupatta with his other hand and waving it) tera lal dupatta malmal ka, tera lal dupatta malmal ka...
Maanvi: (holds his sherwani's dupatta and pulls him close to her) Oye mundiya, oye mundiya seene se nikal na jaaye, (hand on his chest while limping) armaan tere dil paagal ka armaan tere dil paagal ka
Everyone: (dancing in a cirlce) Tera lal dupatta malmal ka, tera lal dupatta malmal ka, tera lal dupatta malmal ka, tera lal dupatta malmal ka, tera lal dupatta malmal ka, tera lal dupatta malmal ka...

VirMan walked towards their seat while all the other guest went to have their dinner. Viraat saw Maanvi, who was looking around the hall, quitely.

Viraat: Kya hua Dedh Futiya? Aaj itni chup chap?
Maanvi: Tumse matlab?
Viraat: Arey kaise nahi hoga matlab, hone wala Pati hun tumhara, mujhse nahi matlab hoga toh fir kisse hoga?
Maanvi: (annoyedly) Dimag mat kharab karo Chep.
Viraat: Oh ho ho,,,toh ab main tumhara dimaag kharab karta hun?
Maanvi: Sirf abhi se nahi, jab se miley ho tab se.
Viraat: Acha? Pehle toh bada Partner Partner kehti phirti thi. Ab kya ho gaya?
Maanvi: Galti thi meri, matti mari gayi thi jo tumhe na pehchan sakhi.
Viraat: Oh hello, tumhe pata hai tum kis ke baare mein baat kar rahi ho?
Maanvi: Ek Chep ke. Iss se zyada description ki zarurat hai kya tumhe Viraat?
Viraat: (sarcastically) Ha Ha Ha...very funny.
Maanvi: Funny Tha? (pretending to think) Maine koi joke sunaya hai kya..??? (smiles) Ohhh apne aap par has rahe ho?
Viraat: Bahut maza aa raha hai na?
Maanvi: (smiles) Kyun tumhe nahi aa raha?
Viraat: Nahi, mujhe pagalon ki baaton se maza nahi aata, woh toh kuch bhi bakte rehte hai?
Maanvi: (fuming with anger) Tumne mujhe pagal kaha?
Viraat: Lo, maine toh kuch kaha hi nahi, tumne khud apne aapko samajh liya.
Maanvi: Kehne ka matlab toh wahi tha na Chep?

Viraat: Tumhe kaise pata ki main tumhe hi keh raha hun? (smriks) Tum Pagal Ho Kya?
Maanvi: Haan hun na main pagal. Ek aisi pagal jo shadi ke baad apne Pati ka khoon pee leti hai.
Viraat: Bechara, jo bhi hoga I really pity him yaar.
Maanvi: Him nahi You, tumhara khoon pee jaungi main Viraat.
Viraat: Acha pee lena, par pehle yeh misunderstanding to clear kar do ki tum (smriks)...Pagal ho ya Vampire?
Maanvi: Tumhare liye toh main kuch bhi bann sakhti hun Chep.
Viraat: Acha? (holds her hand/smiles) How Romantic.
Maanvi: (releases her hand away from his grip) Romantic aur tumhare saath? Chii, meri juti bhi na kare romance tumhare saath.
Viraat: Haan, kyun ki woh kaam toh uski owner ka hai na. (winks)
Maanvi: (irritatedly) Arghhh...I Hate You...
Viraat: Arey...why you hate me, when I...

Just as Viraat was going to complete his sentence, VirIka came towards.

Jeevika: Mannu, Viraat, sab guest chale gaye hai, ab hum bhi khana khane jaa rahe hai, chalo.
Maanvi: (to herself) Main aisa nahi kar sakhti, Viraat ki zindagi nahi barbaad kar sakhti, mujhe Di se baat karni padegi.
Jeevika: Chale?
Maanvi: Di, mujhe aapse baat karni hai.
Jeevika: Haan thik hai Mannu, pehle khana kha le, fir hum aram se baat karte hai.
Maanvi: Nahi Di, mujhe aapse abhi baat karni hai.

Viraat looked at Maanvi confusedly and worriedly.

Viraat: Um, Maanvi, pehle khana kha lete hai na, Bhabhi ko bhi toh bhuk lagi hogi.
Viren: Haan Maanvi, pehle kuch khalo, baatein baad mein kar lena.
Kadambari Chachi: (walking towards VirIka & VirMan) Arey Viraat, Viren, Jeevika, Maanvi, tum sab abhi bhi yahin ho, chalo khana taiyar hai.
Viren: Haan Chachi, hum bas aa hi rahe hai.

While Viren and Viraat were busy talking to Kadambari Chachi, Maanvi dragged Jeevika away from them.

Jeevika: Mannu, Kya hua?
Maanvi: Di mujhe aapse baat karni hai.
Jeevika: Haan Ma
nnu, pehle khana toh khalo, baad mein hum...
Maanvi: Nahi Di, mujhe abhi isi waqt baat karni hai please.
Jeevika: Thik hai, bol kya baat hai?
Maanvi: Di Woh...

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Viraat stopped Viren from walking away, when Kadambari Chachi walked away from there.

Viren: Kya?
Viraat: Bhai, Maanvi Bhabhi se baat karna chahti thi, kahin woh humare rishte ke bare mein toh nahi..
Viren: Viraat, relax, aisa kuch nahi hoga. Maanvi agar Jeevika ko bataye gi toh usse apni cancer ke bare mein bhi batana hoga.
Viraat: Bhai, main Maanvi ko khona nahi chahta.
Viren: Kuch nahi hoga Viraat, trust me.
Viraat: (smiles) Ok Bhai.
Viren: Chal khana khane chalte hai.

Both walked towards the dinning table.

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Jeevika: Jaldi bol Mannu, sab humara intezaar kar rahe hai.
Maanvi: Di, Di mujhe...Di yeh Shadi...
Jeevika: Yeh shadi kya Mannu?
Maanvi: Di, mujhe...
Jeevika: Tujhe kya?

Maanvi closed her eyes tightly, while Jeevika felt her vision getting blurry, her head spinning. She quickly held onto Maanvi to stop herself from losing her balance.

Jeevika: Mannu..
Maanvi: (opens her eyes) Di...

Maanvi saw Jeevika's hand on her head, while the other was on her shoulder, her eyes closed. Maanvi quickly wrapped her arms around Jeevika's shoulder, preventing her from falling on the floor.

Maanvi: (sits on the floor, Jeevika's head on her lap) Di, Di kya hua? Di aankhein kholo na. Di. (screams while crying) Viraat, Jiju, Dii...

Everyone ran towards JeeMan and saw Maanvi crying while caressing Jeevika's head, who was lying lifelessly on the floor, her head placed on Maanvi's lap.



Dat's it 4 2day...m so sorry 4 da late update...plz do comment n hit the lyk button,,,Juz a request, if u want pm's to b sent, plz plz plz add me,,,would b a gr8 help 4 me...thnk u...
Edited by Artii159 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved virat. he loves her so much yet he acts normal in front of her.Love him  so much. It was a lovely update and the song choice was also great .Loved the update as a whole so much.Happy to be here and to comment without a pm. Thanks for the pm u r going to send. .😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update dear... Loved the song sequence ðŸ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...!!!!!