Hey...firstly...really sorry couldnt comment on the first chapter...my net was not working...i read the both the parts together and im posting a comment for both of them...
Chap 1:hmmm...great start...loved to read about ASR...hehe...nav...great nickname...;)...love the bond between Arnav and Aman...its really sweet how one vents put hos anger and the other soothes the anger...ooohh...glad to see arnav curious to see khushi...it was a very interesting read...:)Chap 2:...Awww...Aman and Khushi's relation was sooo cute...loved the small flashback...that makes arnav-khushi relation even more interesting...waitng to read more...also...whose children are Rhea and Ranbir??
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