New FF:TERI MERI PREM KAHANI-part-52(complete)

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                                Yadein rahe jate hei...
The last rain is just ready to departure from the station, at that moment a young boy coming very hurriedly from the over-bridge, The train is then already started moving so the boy running with the train. At that time one man give his hand to the boy and he hold the hand and jumping to the compartment.The man asked the boy angrily-----
-kar kya rahe ho? pagol ho kya? aise koi train pakadta hei?
-sorry sir.
-tum ladke bhi na itni jaldi kya hei tumhe? theek hei tumhara sit number kya hei?
-14A
-Are ei to hamara saath hei.
The man take the boy to their compartment; their were two girls and four boys sitting in there and practicing some music, all the boya and girls stopped as they saw the unknown boy. The man tell the boy-----
-wo hei tumhara sit
-Thank you.
One girl of the group asked him----
-tum kaha ja rahe ho?
-Dehradun
-hum Mumbai ja rahe hei; actually kya hei ki aj Mumbai mei ek bahut bada buisnessman ka bete ki shaadi hei to unhone hume gana gane ke liye hire kiya hei to actually we are a song band. Can I ask you a question?
-ha
-tum kaha se a rahe ho? matlab tumhe dekh kar lag raha hei ki tum bahut thake hue ho, isliye. . .
-jail se
-kya?
All them were shocked.so they stopped interaction with him. After some time the boy said the girl-----
-mujhe tumhara guitar de sakte ho?
-kyun? the girl asked with wonder.
One boy of their team said the girl----
-de do.
The girl gave the guitar to the boy, the boy started playing the guitar. A beautiful tune with so much melody and melancholy which made them surprised. The boy closed his eyes, a glimpse of a face appears infront of his eyes, ek phool si chehera, uski khoobsurat muskaan, uski swapno se bhari ankhe, the boy opened his eyes; a droplets of tears fell from his eye.The boy stopped playing guitar. The girl asked-----
-kya hua tha? tumhe dekh kar to nehi lagta ki tum koi gunah kar sakte ho, phir tum jail kyun gaye the?Itne acche guitar bajate ho tum, bolona kya hua tha tumhara saath?
-galad! sab galad , meri taqder meri zindegi sab kuch jhut hei sab.mein gunhegaar hu , ek bahot bada criminal hu, kisike sapne, ashayein, aur pyar ko mein mar dala ,kisi pyar karnewale ki ankho mei jab nafraat bhar jata hei , tab wo nazre anjaan ho jata hei,uski ankho mei bhi mei  wahi dekha tha, wahi nafraat aur wahi darr jo ek criminal ke liye hi dikhta hei.

-kiski ankho mei? kaun hei wo?

-meri zindegi.
The boy started his story.

                                     kriti

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Posted: 12 years ago
please do not post them separately... do post them all in a single thread :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
great start...rely emotional...




plsss continueee



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hey pls pm me wen u update.. it's a nice story..
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Great start pls do pm ur next updates
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great start - pls post this part 1 in the thread wherein u had introduced the characters - pls make all the updates in a single thread with an index so that it will be easy for us to re-read it
 
Guys, since the writer is a new comer, I thought of making an index:
 
Part 1 - Yaadein Rahe Jate Hai - Page 1
Part 2 - Kahi to Hoga Woh - Page 1
Part 3 - Koi Armaan Hei Jo Khaas & Part 4 - Dil ke paas ... Milenge Koi - Page 2 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2919161?pn=2
Part 5 - Meeti Si Mushkil - Page 3 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2919161?pn=3
PArt 6 - Is Dil Ke Paas Aa...IS Dil ke Raas te & Part 7- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2919161?pn=5
Part 8 - Jas baat kya ...Halaat Kya - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2919161?pn=6
Part 9 - Shamil Hei Tu Rooh Mei ...Tu hi meri zindagi -  & PArt 10 - Jaha Hei Teri Baahein...Mera Sahil WAhi - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2919161?pn=7
Part 11 - Tum Jo aaye zindagi mein - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2919161?pn=8 
Part 12 - Teri Diwani... - PAge 9 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2919161?pn=9
Part 13 - Naata Samjhe Na... Ye Dil Mera - Page 10 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2919161?pn=10
Part 14 - Pal Pal Mein Poori ...Sadhiyan Bitayen - Page 11 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2919161?pn=11
Part 15 - Iss Pyaar Ko Mein...kya naam dooon & PArt 16 - Dil Kya Kare . . . Terie Bina
- Page 13 -  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2919161?pn=13
 Part 17 - Ajeeb Dastaan Hei Ye... - Page 14 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2919161?pn=14
 
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'KAHI TO HOGA WOH'
'Good morning dadi'----Shefali came with a big smile in her face. Today is a very important day for Arohi. Dadi asked----
-Morning Shefali!tum akeli tumhari dost kaha hei?
-pata nehi dadi!  Arohi kaha chali gayi, ehi to thi lagta hei ki upar chali gayi.
-mein samaj gayi, aj itni badi din hei uski zindegi ki wo aaj job join kar rahi hei, isliye shayed purani yadein...aj agar uski ma-baap hota...
-dadi mein dekh kar ati hu
  Shefali was ran and came to Arohi's room. There was no one. Shefali was surprised.
-kaha chali gayi! ye ladki bhi na.
 Shefali came to the roof. this place is one of the favorite place of Arohi. Whenever she feels sad she came to the roof. Shefali came and started searching.
   "papa apko pata hei aj kya hei, aj apki beti naukri join kar rahi hei, ha kaam bahot chota hei, lekin aap hi to kehte the ki profession passion ho na ho lekin passion profession banhi jata hei. aur apko to pata hei ki mujhe books padna kitni pasand hei.aapko yaad hei papa. meri 8 saal ki birthday mei aap mujhe ek book gift diye the, mein abhi tak wo kitab sambhal kar rakhi hei, kash mein aap dono ko bhi...mein bahot buri hu papa, isiliye aap dono mujhe chod kar chale gaye na...
 her voice is chocking, she is weeping.
Shefali was stood behind her and heard everything. Now she came and tell Arohi---
-tu eha akeli kya kar rahi hei?
-aaj papa aur mom ki bahot yaad a rahi hei.
-dekh is baat ke liye na mujhe rona chahiye tujhe nehi
-kyun?
-kam se kam tu apni ma-baap ko dekhi hei, kuch yadein ek tasbeer hei unlogon ki teri paas aur mein to aap ma-baap ko dekhai nehi. unlucky to mein hu
-tu phir se shuru ho gayi Shefali hum koi nehi hei teri?
-tum dono hi to meri sab kuch.
-tu mujhe kabhi rone nehi degi na?
-wo to sochni padegi. ab neeche chal.kya hei ki jab mei sentimental ho jati hu tab mujhe bahot bhookh lagti hei arohi.neeche chal na.
-ok chal.
They came to the dinning hall, dadi said---
-arohi breakfast karlo aj tumhari joining hei.
After breakfast ; they were ready to outing.dadi said----
-dekho mein hamesha chahati thi ki tum bahot acchi ek inssan bano lekin ek baat yaad rakhna umar ki aage nehi, umar ki saath badna chahiye. itni aage mat baad jao ki zindegi ki maja na le sako.
-kabhi kabhi halat insaan ko badal deta hei , chalti hu.
shefali said---
-mein sambhal lungi dadi tension mat lo.
They were walking in the road. Arohi said---
-tujhe pata hei kal mei ohi dhun phirse swapno mei suni
-phir se, dekh arohi aisi kuch bhi nehi hei, are suni hogi whats the big deal
-tu samaj nehi rahi hei, ek aisi dhun jise mei incompletely janti hu, iski matlab kya hei?
-iski matlab hei ki koi hei jise ye dhunki aage ki part bhi pata hei
-aur kaun hei woh?
-woh mujhe nehi pata
-dekh, ye real-life hei, koi movie to hei nehi, ki ek prince charming ayega, ek dhun sunaega aur mujhe pyaar karne lagega...
-oi dramebaazi band kar
-mei nahi tu kar rahi hei dramebaazi.
-tu jo bhi bol Arohi mujhe poora yaken hei ki koi to hei kahi to hei aur woh tujhe jarur milenge
-ho gaya chaal
Arohi feels irritated an go away. 
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good update kriti - that was a pretty quick one -
good to see that u are continuing in the same thread - good start - seems to be a very interesting story - pls continue
 
 
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Nice story! Do cont and pm plzz
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"Koi Armaan Hei Jo Khaas"
Today is a happy day for Raiprakash Family. Today the younger son of their family and 'sabka ladla' is coming from London after completing his M.B.A studies. Since the morning whole house is celebrating.Suddenly a servant come and tell Sumitra(Arjun's mom)---
-Choti memsaheb, Arjun baba a gaya
 Sumitra is preparing some chocolate muffins in the kitchen which is one of the favorite dish of Arjun. She said----
-aa gaye? bahar hei? chalo chalo!
 She came out of the kitchen, the servant call out & the family members come.Sumitra ran towards the door, where one boy standing with a smiley face, Renuka said----
-Arjun, tu itna bada ho gaya, mujhe to biswas nehi ho raha, wo chota sa baccha jo hamesha meri saath meri pallu pakad kar gumta tha wo itna bada ho gaya.
-Sumitra use andhar to ane do!---said Vikramaditya Raiprakash who is Arjun's dad. Sumitra said----
-aao Arjun.
Arjun came, bend and touch his mother's feet and father's feet in obeisance. Arjun's bua came and said---
-Arjun, aa gaye beta, Sumitra kya ho gaya tumhe, use baitne do, kuch khane do, itna lamba safar karke aya hei.
-ha kya loge beta?
-nehi mom, kuch nehi actually mei soch raha tha ki mein ja kar fresh ho leta hoon aur. . .
He faces interruption, as his father said----
-ha tum jakar fresh ho lo, and ready ho jao
-kyun? kaha jana hei?
-mere saath, mera office.
Sumitra and all are surprised.She said---
-abhi to aya hei thoda der rest to kar lene dijiye!
-rest karne ke liye poori zindegi hei aur ab kam nehi karega to kab karega isiliye to mei use London bheja tha.tum jao Arjun, i want to see you just after 15 minutes, it's my order.
Arjun go away with a pale face.because he want to go a music concert which is happen today. Bua said----
-Vikram ye sab karne ka kya jarurat tha, aj wo aya hei
-mujhe iss bare mei koi bat nehi karni.Sumitra Abhinav kaha hei? Aj subha se mei ek baar bhi use dekha nehi.
-ha mujhe bhi nehi pata wo kaha hei
After sometime Arjun come and sit for breakfast. Vikram said----
-kya baat hei? tum itna pareshaan kyun ho?
-dad wo mei . . . aj apke saath. . . office nehi ja sakta.
-kya?kya kaha tumne?
-ha dad aaj thoda kam hei
-kya mei jaan sakta hoon ki kya hei tumhara wo kaam jiske liye tum mujhe mana kar rahe ho?
-aaj ek music concert hei wahi. . .
-shut up Arjun, tum pagal ho gaye ho, mera beta 'Raiprakash Industries' ka honewala M.D mumbai mei ek ghatiya music concert sunne jayega?
-dad mujge singer banna hei, M.D nehi!
-what rubbish, tum kya bol rahe ho, tum singer banoge?
-ha dad aapko pata hei mei swapno mei bhi ek dhun shunta hoon. . . .
-tumhe psychiatrist ki jarurat hei Arjun tum kahi nehi ja rahe ho mera saath office chalo.
In that moment Abhinav a.k.a Abhi come and said----
-mein jaunga aapke saath office.
Vikram is very happy he said----
-Abhinav! aa gaye mera beta dekho Arjun kuch sikho is se beta to ise kehte hei jo baap ke saath kandha melakar chalne ki himmat rakhta hei.use nehi jo apne zimmedari se bhagta hei.
Abhi see Arjun and said---
-Are Arjun kab aya tu? sorry yaar thoda kam se gaya tha
-i understand.
Vikram said---
-chalo beta der ho raha hei mei bahar tumhara intezar kar raha hoon aur Arjun jao tumhara 'very important' music concert mei enjoy!
Vikram left the room Abhi said---
-music concert? tu waha woh Bandrawala concert mei to nehi ja raha hei?so cheap Arjun! apne status to mat bhulo! kya yaar. . .
He left, then Sumitra and Bua come near to him and said----
-jao beta un dono ki baat ka bura mat mano aur aapna dil chota mat karo
-mujhe pata hei mom mei kabhi accha beta nehi ban sakta.
-Arjun kamre mei jao mei coffee veg rehi hu.
Arjun left.        

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 12 years ago