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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Thanks once again to ur deemagi keedas for continuing khujli to you... lovely update...

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veena singh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

so frnds i am here once again with khujli ...uff nujhe lagta h meri khujli sun sun k sabko khujli ho jayegi...😆

khair hamari kahani yani ki meri aur mere deemag k keedo ki...khtm hui thi niharika pr jo ki inki separation ki puri taiyari kr k baithi h to aaj usne ye kaam bhi shuru kr diya jaisa ki aaplogo ne dekha ki kist trh raampriya k beech misundrstanding create krne ki koshish ki ja rhi h...to hm is topic ko hi aage badhate h...here it is.

raampriya in room

raam...tum aram karom ata hu

priya...mujhe kuchh baat krni thi aapse

raam...baad m baat krte h abhi mujhe kuchh kaam h

aur raam chala jata h tabhi priya ka phone bjta h aur use uski family k arrest hone k baare m pta chalta h...aage ka scene to aaplogo ko pta hi h ...right now we hv to move on hospital scene...

in hospital...

niharika ki bato se frstrate hokr raam chala jata h tabhi priya aati h aur raam k baare m puchhti h to niharika use bhido baate suna deti h...to priya bhi wha se chali jati h aur 3 idiots apni gltfhmi pr bewkufo ki trh has rhe hote h

udhar raam ghar pahonch jata h aur apne room m frstration me tehlrha hota h...tabhi priya aati h aur raam k samne aake khadi ho jati h

kahani yha se shuru hoti h

scene 10...

raam... kyun mere samne aa ke khadi ho gyi ho jao ab tumhe kuchh nhi krna h

priya... raam aap aise kyun baate kr rhe h

raam...kyun ab m aise bate bhi nhi kr sakta ,ab mujhe wo bhi tumse hi seekhna padega ki kaise baate krni h

priya...raam mne aisa kab kaha?

raam...nhi waise bhi sabko to yhi lagta h ki m whi krta hu jo tum kehti ho

priya...raam please mere kehne ka ye mtlb nhi tha aap mujhe glt samajh rhe h..

raam...m tumhe glt kaise samjh sakta hu tum to kabhi glt ho nhi sakti ho glti to bs meri h tumhari sunta hu to meri bhn apni jaan dene ki koshish krti h tumhari nhi sunta hu to tumhe bura lagta h m to do pariwaro k beech m pis rha hu kiski sunu kisjki na sunu...kya karu m pagal ho jaunga m

priya...raam aap pehle shant ho jaiye...kuchh nhi h apko is trh se pareshan hone ki jarurat nhi h..(priya ko neha ki baat yaadaa jati h ki raam apni family ko lekr kitna pssassive h to priya baat kosambhalne k liye aur suljhane k liye khud hi shant ho jati h aur raam ko bhi relax krne ki koshish krti h qki usko ab ye samajh m aa rha tha ki is situation ko handle krne k liye aram se aur pyar se kaam lena hoga)

raam...i am ok

priya...aap pehle freshnup hoke aiye phir dekhte h ki kya hoga

raam fresh hoke aata h priya apne hantho se khana nikalti h

raam...mera mn nhi h

priya...please mera gussa khane pe mt nikaliye

raam...are aisa kuchh nhi h m chhotiki wajah se pareshan hu kyun krti h wo aise

priya...theek h jo ho gya so ho gya ab aage aisa kuchh nhi hoga...aur phir apko chhoti ka khayal rkhna h to pehle apna khyal rkhna padega na to please chhoti k liye kha lijiye

raam khana khane lagta h aur priya use dekh k sochne lagti h ki ab use hikisi na kisi trh sachhai tk pahonchna hoga

priya...chaliye ab aram kr lijiye phir subah chhoti ko dekhne bhi to jana h

priya raam ko sahara dekr bister pr litati h uspe chadar dalti h aur muskurati h pr raam ankhe band kr leta h...thodi der baad priya bhi fresh hoke aati h todekhti h ki raam so rha h ...priya uske sir k yha baith jati h aur uske chehre pr apna chehra jhuka kr use dhekne lati aur use raam pr itna pyar aata h ki wo pyar uski ankho se ansoo bnke nikalta h aur raam k chehre pr padta h ...raam ko bhi is ehsaas ka ehsaas hota h aur wo un ansuo ko apni palko pe sametne k liye tadap jata h lekin ankhe khol kr dekhta nhi h...phir priya apne ansu ponchh k aur raam k maathe kochum k so jati h tab raam ankhe kholta h uski bhi ankhe ansuo aur guilt se bhari hui hoti h...raam sochta h ki akhir is situation kokaise handle kiya jaye...phir raam dheera se priya k kandhe pe haath rkhta h aur priya bina ghume raam ka haath pakad kr so jati h...dono apni apni ankho k ansuo ko to chhupa lete h pr chhune k ehsas se ekdusre k dardkomehsus jarur kr leteh shayad ise hi sachha pyar kehte h jo do logo ko hr haal me ekdusre k hone ka ehsaas krata h...

in morning...

raam uth jata h pr priya soyi hi rhti h raam kuchh der tk use dekhta rhta h phir use jagata h

raam...priya utho subah ho gyi h

priya...are aap uth gye itni jaldi

raam...ha wo chhoti ko dekhne hospital jana h na

priya...are ha

raam...tum chal rhi ho na mere sath

priya...raam m chalungi lekin baad m yha dadi bhi to h unhe bhi to dekhna hai

raam ko thoda ajeeb lagta h pr wo kuch kehta nhi h aur frsh hone chala jata h

on dyiening table

dadi...golu puttr natasha ab kaisi h

raam...dadi wo ab theek h aap chinta mt karo

dadi...puttr m bhi chaluni use dekhne

priya...dadi aapki tabiyat to khud theek nhi h mr.kapoor h na wo sambhal lenge phir natasha jaldi theek hoke ghr hi to aayegi tb aap use jee bhr k dekh lena

raam...ha dadi priya theek keh rhi h m jarha hu hospital m sb theek kr dunga

dadi...aur priya puttr tu nhi jayegi kya

priya...jaungi dadi pr apke paas bhi to koi hona chahiye na

dadi...m theek hu aur rishabh h na yha tu ja raam k sath aur ye mera order h

priya...ji dadi

dono ek sath bahar nikalte h to priya khti h

priya...raam mujhe coaching m ek book deni urgent h m wo krk aati hu aap chaliye

raam... achha to tum dadi k samne dikhawa kr rhi thi actully tumhe jana hi nhi h hospital to seedhe seedhe kh kyun nhi deti itna natak krne ki kya jarurat h

priya...raam aap kabhi bhi dusro ki feeling ko samjhne ki koshish nhi krte h

raam,... ha qki m tumhari trh samjhdar nhi hu...agr natasha ki jgh aayesha hoti to bhi tum pehle apni coaching hi jati

priya...ab ye isme natasha auraayesha ki baat kahan se aa gyi

raam...tumhari hi wajah se aayi h

priya...theek h to chalti hu m aapke hi sath agr isise aap khush h to yhi sahi

raam...nhi mujhe khush krne k liye jane ki koi jarurat nhi h

priya gussa k car m baith jati h aur raam bhi...dono jarhe hote h donoki mobile samne rkhi hoti h aur ek hi sath baj jati h dono jaise hi uthane jate h dono ka hath ekdusre k haath m aa jata h dono ekdusre ko dekhne lagte h with background music

o re piya...

udhar hospital me nuts ko hosh ata h tosab usse milne jate h...niharika sid aur mama

niharika...nuts beta kaisi ho tum aur ye sab kya liya tumne mne aisa koi plan to nhi bnaya tha

nuts...mom aapjanti h...(beech me )

mama...natasha puttr itni si baat pe koi aise krta h tumhe kuchh hojata to

nuts...mamaji...(beech me)

sid...nuts tumhare jaisi samjhdar ladki se mujhe is bachpane ki ummeed nhi thi

sid ko dekhte hi nuts hyper ho jati h aur chillane lagti h..

nuts...tum yha q aaye ho chale jaooo

to b continue...

abhi kafilate ho gya h to baki story sundy afternoon me...till then enjoy...lol

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phulwafan

@phulwafan

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

it is awesome...ur imagination is supab...

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IndYa4u

@IndYa4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Nervously waiting for the next one. Loved the convo between Ram and Priya. Very realistic and something we can expect to see in the episode soon.
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anizor

@anizor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

awsome veena. looking forward to next part. plz.cont. soon. thanks

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A. Kishore

@TVserialfreak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Very nice update Veena didi...

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jakther7

@jakther7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

very nice Veena ,Convo b2en RaYa is superb👏👏👏, plesae waiting 4 next update

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salsaly

@salsaly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

hats off to u veena di . 👍🏼. thanks 4 this... 😊

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

nuts sid ko dekhkr chillane lagti h...

nuts...tum yha kyun aaye ho chale jao yha se

niharika...nuts kaise baat kr rhi ho wo tumhara bhai h

nuts...janti hu mom ki wo mera bhai h lekin usne jo kiya h wo aap nhi janti h

niharika...are ab usne kya kiya h kiya to sab kuch tumne h aur tum useblame kr rhi ho...kya ho gya h nuts tumhe kyun tum sid k peechhe padi ho

sid...jane dijiye mom nuts ki abhi tabiyat theek nhi h aur phir upr se aisa hadsa...to is trh react krna to bnta h

nuts...tum mere samne apni ye acting band karo...

niharika...nuts bht ho gya wo tumse badah aur tum us ayesha k liye hi sid ko blame kr rhi ho na dekha nhi tumne kaise log h wo sb

nuts...nhi mom m isliye aisa nhi kh rhi hu aapjanti nhi h ki isne kya kiya h isne meri jaan lene ki koshish ki h...

niharika...nuts tumhara deemag to nhi kharab ho gya h

nuts...nhi mom m sach kh rhi hu ye chaku isi ne laga diya tha mere haath pe aur phir anjan bn rha tha...m bhai ko sb bta dungi aap nhi janti h mom ye mujhe raste se hta kr khud us ghr m ghusna chahta h ...aap kuchh nhi janti h mom

niharika...m sab janti hu baby

nuts...kya?

niharika...ha mne hi kaha tha use aisa krne k liye

nuts ...what?

niharika...are baby kya krte agr hm aisa nhi krte to raam kartik se baatkarne chala jata to hmsab mushkil m pad jate aur tumhe bhi toun logo k beech wapas jana padta...

nuts...haww mom iske liye aapne meri jaanki bhi parwah nhi ki jana padta to chali jati m km se km ye din to nhi dekhna padta...ijst dnt blv ki aap meri mom hoke aisa kr sakti h... apka to koi bharosa nhi h kyun suna mne apki baat ko m bhai ko sab kuchh sach sach batane wali hu

niharika...nuts bht ho gya tumhara natak tum aisa kuchh nhi karogi

nuts...m aisa hi karuni

niharika...baby abhi bhi tum mujhe theek se jaan nhi paayi ho...m ye sb tumhare liye nhi balki rampriya ko alag krne k liye kr rhi hu...aur wo to m kr k hi rahuni jb tum itna jaan hi gyi ho to sb kuchh jaan hi lo...agr tumne apna muh khola to m bhi chup nhi rahungi aur tumhare pyare bhai ko unki ladli bhn ki saari hrkte bta dungi...shadi se pehle bachha,phir abortion,phir aayesha ka drama...sabkuchh

soch lo baby

nuts...i dnt bliv it aap k kehne pr mne ye sab kiya shame on me...

niharika...baby ab pachhtane se kuchh nhi hoga ab to tumhe whi krna padega jo hum kahenge

nuts niharika ko dekhti rh jati h...udhar raampriya dono ka phone bajta h dono phone uthate raam ko niharika ka phone rhta h aur priya ko kartik ka

kartik...di ab nuts kaisi h m usse milna chahta hu please di

priya...hum wahi ja rhe h tu chinta mt kr sab theek ho jayega hum sb log h na m baad m baat krti hu

raam...kiska phone tha

priya...wo kartik ka

raam...ab kya chahiye use meri bhn ki jaan lene m bhi koi ksr nhi chhodi

priya...raam aap bina wajah baat ko badha rhe h

raam...m badha rha hu...aur tumhari family ...kahan h ab unhe chinta nhi h nuts ki koi aaya milne chhoti se nhi na kyun aayenge ab kya jarurat h...

priya...aapne btaya kab unhe ki wo aayenge

raam...kyun tumne nhi btaya hoga tumne to jarur btaya hoga

priya...ha btaya tha mne aur mne hi mna bhi kr diya qki m janti thi ki aap aise hi react karenge aur m koi aur tamasha nhi chahti pehle hi bht ho chuka h

raam...oh iska mtlb m tamasha krta hu

priya...uff raam mne aisa to nhi kaha

raam...kehne ki jarurat hi kya h khud hi pta chal jata h

tabhi hospital aa jta h dono utrte h...dono under jaate h...nuts hosh m rhti h aursab uske paas hi rhte h raam jaise hi uske paas aake baithta h nuts usse lipat kr rone lagti h

raam...chhhoti kya hua kyun ro rhi h ab sab theek ho gya h aurbaaki m theek kr dunga...tu rona band kr

nuts...bhai i am sorry aapko hmesha meri wajah se sb sehna padta h

raam...chhoti tu aisi baate q kr rhi h

niharika...ha nuts tum kyun itni emotional ho rhi ho ab sb theek ho jayega baby cmn chup ho jao

nuts...bhai mujhe yha nhi rhna h please mujhe ghr le chaliye

raam...ha chhoti tu chinta mt kr m abhi sb clear krk ata hu phir hum ghr chalte h

aur raam bahar chala jata h.

niharika...nuts chup ho jao wrna...

priya...natashatum chinta mt karo sb theek ho jayega

niharika...tum apne kaam se kaam rkho yha h hmlog h nuts ki fkr krne k liye

tabhi raam aajata h aur sab ghr jane ki taiyari krte h raam aur priya dono hi haath badhate h nuts ko sahara dene k liye to phirse dono ka hath touch ho jata h bt is baar priyahaath kheench leti h qki thodi distrb rhti h raam aur niharika ki baton se...phir raam kehta h ...m le chal rha hu tum rhne do...priya usedekhti hi rh jati h phir sb ghr pahonchte h dadi se milte h dadi nuts ko kamre m le jane ko bolti h priya se lekin raam phir se use roke deta h aur khud hi chhoti ko room me le jata h...phir priya nashta lekar jati h to raam darwaje pr hi use rok deta h aur nashta le leta h uske haath se priya ko bht bura lagta h wo apne kamre m aa jati h

thodi der baad raam aata h room me

priya...aap mere sath aisa kyun kr rhe h

raam...kya?

priya...janbujh kr anjan banne ki koshish mt kariye

raam...m aisi koi koshish nhi kr rha hu

priya...to phir aap mujhe natasha k paas kyun nhi jane de rhe h

raam...are isme janbujh k wali kaun si baat h wo meri bhn h to uska khyal rkhna mera farz bnta h

priya...aur wo meri kuchh nhi lagti

raam...please mujhe is bare me koi baat nhi krni h mera mood pehle se hi distrb h

priya...ye koi baat nhi hoti h raam...aapko btana padega

raam...please priya mera deemag mt khrab karo

raam chala jata h aur priya aur bhi jyada pareshan ho jati h...raat m kamre m ek ghri khamoshi rhti h jinke beech bs yaade baat kr rhi hoti h with bg music

bebasi dard ka alam...

dono paas hokar bhi ekdusre sebht duri mehsus kr rhe hote h...mgr usdoori ko mitane ki koi bhi koshish nhi krta h aurankho ankho m raat kt jati h

in morning...

nuts room

priya...natasha utho m tuhare liye nashta layi hu

nuts...aap kyun layi h

priya...dekho nuts m janti hu ki kuchh to baat h tum naraz bhi ho hmsbse lekin phir bhi m tumhari is baat ko manne ko taiyar nhi hu ki mere ghrwalone tumhare sath aisa kiya...natasha please aisa mt karo jb tumne ayesha k mamle m mera sath diyato mujhe laga ki tumne us pariwar ko accept kr liya h lekin phir ye sab kahin kuchh to h jo hame dikh nhi rha h please natasha hamare liye na shi agr tumne kabhi bhi apne bhai aur kartik se jra sa bhi pyar kiya ho to uske liye hi please sach bole do

tabhi nuts priya ka hath dabate hue chup rhne ka ishara krti h qki samne se niharika aa rhi hoti h...niharika priya ko kamre m dekh kr bhadak jati h aur chillane lagti h

niharika...raam raam...kahan ho tum

raam...kya hua ma sab theek to h

niharika...raam ye ladki nuts k kamre m kya kr rhi h tum apni biwi ko sambhal nhi sakte ho agr nuts ko phirse kuchh ho jata to...nuts ko pta nhi kya kya kahe ja rhi thi wo toachha hua m time pe aa gyi

priya...nhi raam aisa kuchh nhi h m to bs natasha ko nasta dene aayi thi aur aapchahe tonatasha se puchh le...m bs use samjha rhi thi...

nuts kuchh nhi bolti h...priya ko kuchh samajh nhi ata h...aur niharika abhi bhi chilla rhi hoti

niharika...raam ye akhir chahti kya h

raam priya ko dekh rha hota h aur priya raam ko...

to be continue...

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salsaly

@salsaly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

pls jaldi ram ko niharika ki asli chehra dhika do... 😉... i cant wait anymore... di , ur part luks so so real. 😃.. hats off to u.. ⭐️... ab jaldi muje next part chahiye... ye dil maange more...😊

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