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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all parts... priya and ram both of them are ek se badhkar ek... loved their pranks they played on each other.. totally enjoyed the parts... plss update more... 
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so frnds meri story atak gyi thi priya k raam bulane pe ...anyways ye rasm to puri ho chuki h priya ne raam ka naam lekar sorry bol diya...khair i hv to move on new story about dadi'wish & raya's reaction...
are yaar jb se ye track chala h na mere deemagi keedo ne solid khujli macha rkhi h aur mere haath bechain h mere bakwas ko page pe likhne k liye aur kl k precap k baad to totally out of cntrol ho chuke h...so i am here once again with my solid imagination about raya's awkwrdness & precap...

here it is

scene 7...

@neha vikram house


neha... hi raam ...kya baat h u look so hndsm in casuals achha h kafi sudhr rhe ho

raam...oye ho gya m hamesha hi smart lagta hu 

neha...ok fatty..hi priya hw r u

priya...fine tum btao vikram aaya ya nhi

neha ...are abhi kahan raste m h bs ata hi hoga

raam...excuse me ladies agr sari baate hame darwaze pe hi krni h to hm andr jake kya karenge

neha...oh sorry sorry m tumlogo ko dekh k itni excited ho gyi ki andar bulana hi bhul gyi

raam...wo to tu hamesha hi rhti h super excited

neha...hahaha...chalo ab andr to aao

sb andr jate h aur tabhi vikram bhi aa jata h...

raam...aiye aiye ye btayenge ki is ghr m mehman kaun h aap ya hum

vikram ...sorry yaar samjha kr kitni mushkil se aaya hu bht hectic sedule ho gya h aajkl

raam...dekh le isiliye m hamesha bolta hu ki tujhe mere jaisa boss kabhi nhi mil sakta

vikram ...tu bilkul sahi kah rha h tu

neha...achha theek h ab tumlog ye btao ki tumlogo ko kya important baat krni thi

priya...are neha pehle tum vikram ko uska surprise to do phir hamari bate to chalti rahengi

vikram ... surprise?// kaisa surprise

neha...dekha priya mne kaha tha na ye hamesha aise hi krta h .i hate him

vikram...are neha pr hua kya ye to btao

neha...kuchh nhi ja rhi hu m apna kaam krne

neha andr chali jati h aur rampriya dono vikram k upr chillane lagte h ki batane k baad bhi use kuchh nhi yaad h hadh h..vikram muskurata rhta h...neha aati h hath m cake leke aur kehti h

neha...vikram tumhe to kuchh yaad rhta nhi h lekin mujhe hamesha yaad rhta h aur aaj tum na bs rampriya ki wajah se bach gye ho qki aaj m tumhe ghr se nikalungi to tum kahan jaoge raam to yhi h...

vikram...sorry neha i am vry sorry...please u know me na...

neha...its ok chalo ab cake to kato...

sab milk cake katate hai vikram dheere se neha k peechhe ja k khada ho jata h

neha...are vikram kahan gya

vikram peechhe se neha k gale m ek chain pehna deta h neha totally surprised ho jati h aur peechhe mudk vikram k gale lag jati h

neha...vikram tumhe yaad tha (rone lagti h) i really so much happy 11 saal lag gye tumhe ye krne me bt i jst love it

vikram...neha sorry ki m hamesha bhul jata tha

neha ...please dnt say sorry iske aage kuchh mayne nhi rkhta h...lekin ye to btao ki ye tumhara idea to ho nhi sakta to kiska h kahin us stupid harry ka to nhi

vikram...hahaha... ha usi stupid harry ka idea h

neha...i know that i hate it...bt i love u baby...thank u so much

vikram...hahaha...love u 2 na...bt ye thank u tum muje nhi raam ko bolo qki m bhul gya tha to usne hi yaad dilaya aur aaj hmne itna achha moment share kiya (raampriya dono ko khush dekhkr bht khush hote h aur ekdusre ko dekh kr muskurate h)...aur yhi nhi kl hmdono ghumne bhi ja rhe h

neha ...excited ho jati h...kya sach m ...bs karo vikram itne surprise ek sath jhelne ki adat nhi h mujhe ...& raam thank u so much fr this

raam...are mujhe thank u bolne ki jarurat nhi h is thank u ka asli hakdar koi aur h

neha...hadh h are mujhe ye bta do ki actully mujhe thanks bolna kise h

raam...hahaha...priya ko ye sab inhi madam ka kamal h

neha...ok finally ..a big thanku to priya with huggie...

priya...its ok neha dost hote hi isiliye h ab tumhari baari h 

neha...kya

raam..are tum dono ko hamari ek bht badi problm solve krni h

vikram...ha ram bta to sahi teri problm h kya

ram... priya btao tum inhe problm

priya...kya h raam m kaise batau aap hi bataiye na

neha...caught it...kya bola tumne raam ..us time to nakhre dikha rhi thi 

sab hasne lagte h aur vikram kehta h ki koi bhi btao yaar btao to sahi ...to raam sari kahani btate h dadai ki wish aur ekdusre ke awkwrdness k bare me to vikram kehta h

vikram...are raam isme kya badi baat h ye to sabhi k sath hota h

neha...aye fatty ye koi prblm h m soch rhi thi tu sudhr gya h lekin tu to abhi bhi waisa hi h aur priya tum bhi itni samjhdar ho phir bhi ajeeb bate krti ho kabhi kabhi ye sabhi ki life me hota h

priya...neha m janti hu bt we r not cmfrtable with this..

raam...are yaar tum log lcture mt do solution do

vikram ...achha theek h m kuchh sochta hu pehle dinner to kr le

raam...ha mujhe bhuk bhi lagi h aur mera pet khali hota h to mujhe aur jyada tension hoti h 

sab hasne lagte neha kitchen m chali jati h vikram bhi uske peechhe peechhe jata h

raam...priya thanks

priya...kisliye

raam...indono ko itni khushi dene k liye

priya ...cmn raam wo mere bhi dost h aur phir pyar ka sabse bada tohfa hi yhi h ki do pyar krne walo ko milao to bs mne whi kiya


kitchen me...

vikram...are yaar indono ka na kuchh nhi ho sakta inko hr baat m problm mil hi jati h

neha...whi to pehle shadi krne m prblm thi ,phir pyar karne me, phir izhar karne aur ab bachhe paida krne m bhi problm h kya kiya jaye inka

vikram...mujhe lagta h ki sabse pehle inke andr bachho k liye sabse pehle pyar aur chahat paida krni padegi priya to samjhdar h pr ye raam na bht bewkuf h

neha ...ha tum theek keh rhe ho kya kiya jaye...idea...

vikram...kya 

neha...aisa krte h ki kl hm bahar ja rhe h to hm apne bachho ko inke yha bhej dete h aur akele jate h isse indono ko bachho k sath time spend krne ko mil jayega aur hame ek dusre k sath

vikram...deemag khrab h tumhara hamare bachhe??...dono pagal ho jayenge aur agr galti se bhi bachha paida krne k baare m sochenge bhi nhi...

neha...cmn vikram ab aise bhi nhi h hmare bachhe even try to kr hi sakte h na 

vikram ...ok lets try

sab dinr krte h phir vikram kehta h...

vikram...raam hm teri problm ka solution trip se wapas aa kr btayenge usse pehle tumdono ko hmara ek aur kaam krna padega

raam ...kya kaam

neha...priya please kya tum ek din k liye mere bachho ko sambhal sakti ho please unhe apne yha rakh lena...

priya...m? ha kyun nhi bilkul tum log aram se jao enjoy karo 

raam...are priya..

priya...are ram theek h na hum inke liye itna to kr hi sakte h...

phir sb bate hoti h aur raam priya wha se nikalte h...uske baad promo ka scene hota h after that...yehi kahani sunnane k liye mne itna scene banaya...i love to write it...hehehe


scene 8...

raya green room

raam taiyar hota rhta h tabhi priya aati h naha k

priya...raam aap kahin ja rhe h kya??

raam...kahin mtlb ofcourse office ja rha hu

priya...lekin aap office kaise ja sakte h

raam...car se aur kaise

priya...vry funny...mera mtlb h aaj to neha k bachhe ayenge na aur pura time hamare paas rahenge

raam...ha to m kya karu tumne bulaya h to tum sambhalna mujhe bht kaam h

priya...raam that is not fair m akele kaise sambhalungi aap jante h na neha k bachcho ko please aise mt boliye

raam...ha to ye bolne se pehle sochna chahiye tha na m ja rha hu

priya bht udas ho jati h aur ekdm masum sa muh bna k raam ki trf dekhne lagti h

raam...achha theek h theek h itna muh banane ki jarurat nhi h..rukta hu m pr ek shart pr

priya...thank u..pr aap hamesha blckml krte h kya shart

raam...tumhe pura din mere sath hi rhna padega aur hmdono mil k unko handle karenge...promise

priya...(muskurate hue) ok promise

phir neha k bachhe aa jate h phir dono milke unke sath thodi der time pas krte h pr raam isse jyada to handle kr nhi sakta h to ab wo priya k paas jane k liye machlne lagta h aur priya ko bachhe ghere rhte h

tabhi priya bachho k liye kuchh khane k liye lane kitchen m jati h to raam bhi peechhe peechhe jata h aur priya ko pakad leta h aur kehta h

raam...priya ye bht glt baat h tumne promise kiya tha ki tum mere sath time spend kaogi aur hm dono mil k inko sambhalenge pr tum to pura time inhi k sath lagi ho

priya...are raam .chhodiye na mujhe koi aa jayega ..m aap hi k paas to hu ye kya bachpna h bachhe wo h aur harkte aap bachho jaisi kr rhe h

raam...nhi tum pehle meri baat suno mujhe ek cheez chahiye

priya... are to kya chahiye btaiye to iske liye pakdne ki kya jarurat h

raam...jarirat h qki jo mujhe chahiye wo...

tabhi neha ka chhota beta aa jata h

bachha...aunty aap kya kr rhi ho aap to hmare liye kuchh lene aayi thi na

dono chaunk jate h raam priya ko turant chhod deta h 

priya... kuchh nhi beta chalo m le chal rhi hu...

priya jane lagti h phir mud k raam ko dekhti h aur ishare m sorry bolti h raam muskurata rhta h

phir thodi der baad raam kamre m aata h aur kehta h

raam...bachho tum logo ko pta h mne study m bht sari stories ki achhi achhi books rkhi h tumlog bansi kaka k sath jao aur unko dekho maza aayega

neha ka chhota beta bolta h...are uncl hame yhi maza aa rha h aap jaiye

raam...oye chhota sa h jyada ustad  mt bna kr jata h ya batau tujhe m

priya jor jor se hasne lagti h teeno bachhe chale jate h phir raam priya ki trf badhne lagta h aur priya peechhne hatne lagti h raam bolta h

raam...bht hasi aa rhi h na tumhe tumhari wajah se m itna bore ho rha hu office bhi nhi jane diya aur khud bhi nhi aa rhi ho...ruko btata hu m tumhe

priya...raam kya kar rhe h please chhodiye bachhhe aa jayenge

raam...ab bachhe to kya bachho k baap bhi aa jayenge tab bhi nhi chhodunga m tumhe pehle tum mujhe wo do jo mujhe chahiye

priya...lekin raam aapko chahiye kya ye to bataiye

raam...mujhe tumse ek

tabse neha ki beti aa jati h aur kehti h...uncl ye kaisi books rakhi h aapne(dono phir se chaunk jate h aur ekdusre ko chhodkr dur dur khade ho jate h) ye to saare puzzle h ab inhe solve kaun karega 

raam...h na ye tumhari teacher karao issi se solve mera deemag mt kharab karo aur raam gussa kr chala jata h

neha ki beti...anty ye raam uncle ko kya hua

priya...kuchh nhi beta tum ye dusri book lo ise padho m abhi aati hu

priya raam ko dhundhte hue uske peechhe jati h raam garden me khada rhta h priya pichhe se aake pakad leti h aur kehti h

priya... naraz ho gye kya ? i am sorry please bachhe h na aur hame unhe dekhna h to btaiye kaise kya kare...achha theek chhodiye ye sb ye bataiye kya chahiye tha aapko

raam muskurata h aur mud k priya ko gale laga leta h aur kehta h

raam...priya tum itna khadus jaisa raam kyun bolti ho dhang se pyar se raam nhi bol sakti kya

priya...bs itni si baat bilkul bol sakti hu...raam raam raam...khush

raam...ha khush lekin abhi mujhe jo chahiye wo to baki h 

priya...ab kya chahiye bol to diya itne pyar se raam

raam...ha to pyar krk bhi to dikhao

priya ...mtlb

raam..mtlb kya ...i want a kiss

priya...ab dekhiye ye kya baat hoti h ab mne thoda sa kr diya to aap ekdm chhad gye

raam...are to apni biwi se hi to mang rha hu...do na

tabse neha ka dusra beta aa jata h...aunty hame neend aa rhi h aap sula do na 

priya...sorry raam...bttr luck next time 

dono muskurane lagte h aur adr chale jate h ...phir raam bhi kafi der tk bachho k sath enjoy krta h khelta h kahaniya sunata h aur bat khush hota h aur priya raam ko dekh kr bht khush hoti rhti h

priya... chalo chalo ab sone ka time ho gya...raam hatiye mujhe inko sulana h

raam...are ye mere bed pe soyenge

priya...ha to aur kahan soyenge

raam...are to m kahan sounga

priya...oh raam aap to na m hu na...pehle inhe sula lene dijiye phir batati hu

raam sofe pe baith k wait krne lagta h aur priya  bachho ko sulane lagti h bachhe bhi kuchh kam nalayak nhi rhte h jaldi sote bhi nhi h aur raam priya ko isharo se bulata rhta h aur priya use chup rhne aur wait krne ka ishara krti rhti h...akhir bachhe so jate h to priya sofe pe aati h aur raam k bagal m baith jati h raam bolta h

raam...ab hm kya karenge hmdono to is sofe pe atne se rhe

priya...hahaha...bed pe to hm mushkil se atate h to sofe pe to sawal hi nhi paida hota h

raam...vry funny ab btao kya krna h...

priya...kya raam aap bhi hamesha bhul jate h ki mere pas hr baat ka solution h

raam...jarur bs dadi ki baat ka nhi h

priya...are kya aap bhi ho jayega uska bhi solution abhi to sone ki prblm solve ki jaye...yaad h wo suhagrat wala bed

raam...are ha yaar mujhe bht achha laga tha chalo vry gud idea phir se neechhe bistr lagate h aur us shandar bistr ka maza lete h 

phir dono neeche bister laga kr sote h ekdusre ki bahon m asusual...raam bolta h

raam...priya

priya...hmmm

raam...waise m ek baat kahu

priya...kya

raam...actully mujhe aaj bht achha laga aur mne aaj k hr moment ko bht enjoy kiya chahe wo tumhare paas aana ho chahe tumse door jana ho chahe bachho ka beech me ana ho ya phir bachho k sath samay bitana ho ...i totally enjoyed it 

priya...ha raam mne mehsus kiya api khushi ko aur m bhi bht khush hui bachho k sath

raam...bs tumse ek hi shikayat h

priya...ab kya h 

raam...are tumne mujhe wo nhi diya jo m mang rha tha

priya...raam aap bhi na

tabse neha ka chhota beta uth jata h aur bolta h...aunty susu aayi h..

priya...haste hue..lijiye phir se apki mang atak gyi ab kya karu m chhodiye mujhe 

raam...nhi mt jao

priya...are jane dijiye na nhi to

raam...nhi to kya wo khud jake nhi kr sakta h

priya...are wo chhota sa bachha h raam aur phir neend m h use kya pta kahan jana h

raam...mt jao na please

priya...raam...jane dijiye wrna wo apke bed pe

raam...o teri ..nhi nhi abhi jao tum karao use wrna wo mera bed barbad kr dega..m sota hu akele apni adhuri khwahish k sath

priya...hahaha.. adhuri khwahish kyun raam...ye lijiye jo apko chahiye abhi de deti hu

priya raam k gaal pe kiss krk chali jati h aur raam pillow ko bahon m leke bolta h

raam...chal bhai ab tere hi sath raat bitani padegi madam ji to gyi bachhe sambhalne...hmmm aaj k liye kiss hi shi

aur raam muskurate hue so jata h thodi der baad priya aati h aur use muskurate hue sote dekh kr uspr bht pyar ata h use aur sochti h ki raam ki ye khushi bnaye rkhne k liye aur dadi aur papa ki ichha puri krne k liye use ek aur baar is bare m sochna chahiye...


to be continue


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Posted: 12 years ago
veena glad ki u updated next parts...
will comment after reading..
btw thanks a lot... 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome post didi...really loved it...😊😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb imagination veena...


thanks a lot... 🤗
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Originally posted by: salsaly

veena glad ki u updated next parts...

will comment after reading..
btw thanks a lot... 🤗





aww so sweet ...thanks fr waiting ...& sorry fr late...asusual bt ...m der krti nhi der ho jati h...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
no word just 👏👏👏, continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum ,fantastic,superb too gud bilkul sahi kaha veena tum der kaha krti ho der to ho jati he 🤣
muaahh🤗
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amazing imagination.hey is tarana(naha of balh) married in real life?
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Veena it was sooo sweetuuu... thanks dear...