OS on Raya! (24/3/2012)

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Posted: 2012-03-24T00:06:01Z
Hello everyone!I just thought of writing a short OS on Raya.Hope you guys like it.This is my first time that im attempting on writing a OS on Raya so pls forgive me if its not upto the mark.Comments and criticisms are welcome!

This is just after Priya and Ram have confessed their love for each other and also consummated their marriage.Next morning,its Holi and they enjoy a lot but something seems to be bothering Ram as he is not enjoying..Priya thinks what is the matter?Why is Ram not happy?Is it because of last night? Does he feel quilty? Many negative thoughts were coming into her mind and she was feeling heart-broken at the thought that maybe her fear would come out to be true.Priya was very sad but she didn't let anyone know about it as she didn't want to spoil the mood as everyone was enjoying Holi.After sometime,as the Holi celebrations got over and everyone went into their respective rooms.Ram went to their bedroom and saw that Priya was not thereā€¦he suddenly heard the door shut..and turned only to be hugged by Priya tightly,he was a bit surprised but he hugged her back tightly.He then asked her "What happened"? Priya : *Crying* Are you not happy about last night Ram? You ignored me the whole day today and you didn't even enjoy Holi ? Do you think you did something wrong last night? *Still hugging each other*
Ram : Shocked at her questions breaks the hug and wipes her tears ways and cups her face and says Who told you im not happy?How can you ever think like this Priya..last night was the best and the most memorable night for me.I can never forget it.Priya : *Happy with Ram's words* But she asks,then why weren't you happy Ram?What's the matter? Ram : Its nothing,just some business problems..don't worry. Priya :   Okay *Then she turns to go to the washroom to have  a bath and get fresh but Ram is in  a naughty mood today..as she turns to leave he catches hold of her pallu and doesn't let her leave..Priya firstly was shocked at Ram's actions but is somewhere happy deep inside her heart.
Priya : Ram..kya kar rahe hai aap?Pls chodiye mujhe..
Ram : Chodne ke liye thodi na pakda hai
Priya : *blushing hard*
Ram tugs at her pallu and makes her turn towards him and pulls her pallu and she lands right there at Ram's arms
Ram starts nuzzling her neck and Priya is mesmerised by his touch though its not the first time but his touch makes her go weak in the knees she knows that..
Priya : Ram plsss..
Ram : Plsss..kya?
Priya : Chodiye mujhe..
Ram : Sach mein chod du na?
Priya : Who was loving his touch but still was very shy said "Haan sach mein"
Ram : Leaves her and turns to go *He's teasing her*
Priya : Now,visibly dissatisfied catches his hands and kisses him on his lips passionately
Ram : Is shocked out of his wits but loves it that his wife is also having the same kind of passion that's burning inside him too
Ram : Wraps his arms around her waist and starts kissing her neck and then turns and kisses her back and opens her blouse hook..Priya is shivering by his touch and catches his hands
Then Ram starts kissing her earlobes and then turns her around and kisses her on her forehead,eyes,cheecks and on her lips and then he carries her to the bed and they make love again that night.  :In Love:
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Posted: 2012-03-24T00:23:00Z
Hawwt and RomaanticEmbarrassed ...too good yaar!!! Thanks for writing such a beautiful and censored(critics se darr lagta hai) OS...Kaash yeh BALH mein bhi dekhne ko milta but no worries, you made it come to life with your description...please do write more and make the weekends bearable for RaYansLOL...ThanksClap
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Posted: 2012-03-24T00:36:52Z
It's a good one.Clap But such scenes happens only in our dreams. Though it's your first take, ur imagination was great. Hope to see more of such OS on our RaYa.Thumbs Up
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Posted: 2012-03-24T00:44:08Z
Originally posted by balhfan4ever


Hawwt and RomaanticEmbarrassed ...too good yaar!!! Thanks for writing such a beautiful and censored(critics se darr lagta hai) OS...Kaash yeh BALH mein bhi dekhne ko milta but no worries, you made it come to life with your description...please do write more and make the weekends bearable for RaYansLOL...ThanksClap


Thankyou so much! Smile Yes,censored it because i don't want critics ka hoohah again lol LOL Will definitely try to write more!
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Posted: 2012-03-24T00:46:01Z
Originally posted by Indomitable


It's a good one.Clap But such scenes happens only in our dreams. Though it's your first take, ur imagination was great. Hope to see more of such OS on our RaYa.Thumbs Up


Thankyou so much! Smile Yes,these scenes are possible only in our dreams *sigh* Will try to write more!

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Posted: 2012-03-24T01:09:12Z
Thanks...superb post...awesomeSmileSmile  hats off to your imagination Edited by TVserialfreak - 2012-03-24T01:12:19Z
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Posted: 2012-03-24T01:20:45Z
oye hoye Naz.. sizzling OS yaaraSilly absolutely loved itClapClap
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Posted: 2012-03-24T01:30:42Z
just loved it !
was unhappy to see Ram's reaction Ouch
but this OS just compensated it !Big smile
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