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Posted: 12 years ago
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                                               Chapter 2:


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Days passed maan n geet understood each other very well, their replationship grew n they became inseperable. They use to hang out n watch movies n go to different places. They both are enjoying their life to the fullest. Here no one knows about their relation, neither geet's family nor maan's family.

It's the final year of maan n geet in fourth year. One day maan didn't come to college n geet is having the exam next day n she is not able to understand a topic. She waited for maan till noon but he didn't come still, geet called maan thinking that he is not well or something. But here our dear maan is sleeping peacefully on his bed n the music system is on.

Geet is calling him but he is not able to hear due to the music system. But due to the continous vibration of his mobile he got annoyed n switched off the music system n picked the call.

Hello told maan sleepily.

But our dear geet is so worried about maan so she attacked him with all questions.

Maan where r u? how r u? u r fine na? why u didn't come to college? Asked geet.

Poor maan his sleep totally gone.

Geet geet geet, just wait take a breath, relax told maan.

Geet did what maan told.

Good.

Now tell me asked geet.

Nothing geet I didn't feel like coming to the college, last week I didn't bunk even one class.

So? Asked geet.

So I didn't feel like coming to college.

Maan, grow up waise I was so worried ki something has happened to u told geet worriedly.

Nothing junior I am perfectly fine told maan.

Hmm'

Waise u didn't go to class??? Asked maan.

No I have exam tomorrow, I am preparing for that n not able to understand one topic n struggling from past one hour told geet making sad face.

Awww don't worry kiddo n don't make those faces told maan n laughed.

U r thinking its funny, I thought u will help me told geet making baby face.

Why don't u come here so that I can help u told maan casually.

Me there now?? Asked geet.

Hmmm why not told maan.

Ok told geet n cut the call.

Maan thought she wont come here, so he immediately took shower n got ready in 30 min.

But our geet is unpredictable, she immediately took her car n headed to KM. within 30 min she reached KM.

Here maan came out of his room n was talking to someone on phone. Here geet entered KM.

A girl saw geet entering KM n asked her.

Ji aap??

Hii I am geet.

Hiii I am annie.

Both smiled at each other.

Actually I came here to meet maan told geet.

Oh come, I am maan's sister.

Oh hii'

Plz take a seat. R u bro's class mate?asked annie.

No I am maan's junior told geet.

Ohhh smirked annie.

Firstly she is calling her bro maan, secondly she came home. Kuch tho gadbad hain boss thought annie.

R u both friends?

Ya from day 1 I know him told geet excitedly.

Wait I will call him told annie.

At the same time maan came down n maan's mom too came there.

Hey bro, someone came to meet u told annie.

Acha. Who? Asked maan.

Geet told annie.

Maan is hell shocked to hear her name.

Arey come na bro, she is waiting for u told annie.

Ya ya coming.

Both of them went there n geet smiled at maan. But maan asked innocently

Aap kaun??

Geet n annie looked at him shocked.

Bro, she told that she knows  u told annie.

Ha may be she knows me told maan.

She told that u both r from same college told annie n smirked.

Ha wahi tho I saw her somewhere told maan all innocently.

Geet is really very very shocked to see his acting.

Waise annie u n mom r going somewhere na? asked maan.

Ha maan, we r going now but it will be late, u have lunch. Ok? (to geet): sorry beta aapse baat nahi hui, aap bhi lunch kijiye. Thik hain?

Ji aunty ji told geet.

Sorry geet, have to go now told annie.

No problem annie. We will meet some other time told geet.

Bro, atleast now u remember her, take care of ur FRIEND told annie n left from there.

Maan made sure that annie n mom went out n he turned to geet.

Geet, what r u doing here? Asked maan.

Hmmm acha u know my name asked geet n settled comfortably on couch.

Oh very funny geet.

Geet gave him an angry glare. Maan sat beside her n told I am sorry geet, I didn't expect u here. So I don't know what to tell to annie n mom. Actually I was coming to college only to meet u told maan.

Geet smiled at him n told don't worry maan I was just kidding.

Maan hugged geet n told hmm apni sasural mein pehli baar ayi ho, kaisa laga?

Geet blushed n told maan, tum bhi na.

Arey wah my blushing queen is back.

Geet hit his arm playfully n told maan chalo na, I have exam tomorrow n mujhe darr lag raha hain.

Arey jab main tumare paas hut ho darne ki kya baat. Hmmm?? Come lets go told maan.

They both went to his room n geet sat on the couch n examining the whole room. Maan saw her n asked what happened?

Wow maan, ur room is damn beautiful  n its so neat.

Thanku told maan n smiled.

 My room na it will be so dirty, I wont keep anything in place.

Hmmm yeh sab mom karti hain, I wont do anything.

Hearing mom geet had tears in her eyes. Maan saw that n got worried. He cupped her face n asked geet, what happened?

Geet hugged maan n told I miss my mom maan. Agar aaj maa hoti tho I would have learned all this.

Geet calm down dear, dekho if ur mom will see u in this condition na she will feel bad. Haina?

Geet broke the hug n nodded in a yes.

Maan smiled n wiped her tears.

Chalo then don't u want to study asked maan.

Geet hugged him sideways n nodded in a no n rested her head on his shoulders.

R u hungry asked maan.

Hmmm..

Ok u rest here I will ask nakul to bring lunch here.

Geet smiled n told ok.

Maan went down n asked nakul to bring food.

Nakul..

Ji maan baba.

Bring food to my room nakul.

Ok baba told nakul.

Maan left from there n went to his room. After some time nakul brought the food n they both ate silently. After having lunch maan took geet books n explained the topics.

Geet ab samaj me aya tumko? Asked maan.

Ha maan, yeh tho bohot easy hain. Thanku maan told geet.

Maan kissed her forehead.

Maan kahi bahar chalet hain asked geet.

Where??

Ur wish.

Hmmm

Ok ok itna socho mat movie chalet hain. Ok??

Ok as u wish told maan n got ready.

Soon they went to the movie theatre n booked tickets for a movie. Still one hour is left for the movie so geet asked maan hum shopping chale?

Shopping? No way geet, kahi aur jate hain told maan.

Plzz maan asked geet making a puppy face.

Hmm now how can our maan say no to her.

Ok thik hain chalo.

They both went to the near by shopping mall. Geet n maan went to men's section.

Geet hum yaha kyun aye hain ?

Maan shopping mere liye nahi balki tumare liye told geet.

Aww how sweet of u told maan n kissed her cheek.

Geet blushed n told maan this is public place. So behave.

Ok ok sorry told maan.

So they both did shopping for maan. But this whole scene was didn't miss by two people. They are none other than geet's dad n bro. geet's dad couldn't believe that his daughter is with some guy. He was too shocked to react. But yash is happy that he is none other then maan singh khurana, he met maan few times n liked him. So yash don't have any problem. But here the main problem is geet's dad mohinder.

Yash who is that boy asked mohinder.

Yash was little reluctant to say because KC is rival company of HC.

Wo.. he is maan singh khurana told yash.

Now mohinder is angry that he is his rival's son.

Ok lets go now.

Later maan n geet finished their shopping n went to movie. Maan droppde geet at her house n he went to KM.

When geet came in she saw her dad is reading some file.

Hii dad wished geet.

Hii beta, how was ur day? Asked mohinder casually.

Fine dad, I have exam tomorrow.

Oh r u prepared ?

Yes dad.

Waise where is ur car?

Wo.. dad actually I didn't feel like coming by car so I came on my friends bike.

Oh ok..

Ok dad I am tired, bye good night wished geet.

Don't u want to have dinner asked dad.

No dad I am not hungry told geet n left from there.

Dad(st): my princess ne mujhse jhoot kaha. Aaj tak aisa kabhi bhi nahi hua.

Mohinder called yash.

Yes dad.

Did u find about that boy n geet.

Ha dad, geet n maan loves each other from past 2 years.

2 years? Asked dad.

Ha dad.

Ok fine u can go now.

Now mohinder is hell angry that he don't know about his own daughter.

But he cannot ne angry on his princess.

I think that maan might have trapped my geet, she is too nave to understand anything. I have to do something.

 

Precap: any guesses..

 

hii friends this is part 2 of geet ki kashmakash. Hope u liked it.

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Love

-jyothi.

Edited by jyothikrish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Awsome update agyer soo long u updaye dis


rivalary is diff thing bt live us diff


yash is happy waiting for geet father
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
nice update...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Awesome... Yash saath hain na... koi gadbad nahi hogi... mujhe yakeen hain!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Loved the part...
Omg!maan s such a dramebaaz..
He told that he dunno geet..
i thot geet vl give him some cute punishment for this harkatein..
Nw mohinder came to noe abt their relationship..
I hope yash vl give sum warning to geet abt ds..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
 hmm...

looks like some one is following and taking my ss too seriously...๐Ÿ˜†

chill kidding๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

hmm...hey that was nice...loved it...๐Ÿ‘

maan and geet didn't tell their fam...????kyun???

oh rivals hmm...

but do they know fam. rivalry?????


yash is good he knows maan is a nice guy

ahan annie tried to tease maan

opsss๐Ÿ˜ฒ they were caught by geet's father and geet lied...

ab kya hoga?????๐Ÿ˜•

oh mohinder thinks maan is trapping

 her...for business purpose...ahhh!!!

precap hmm...i don't know...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

thnx for pm

continue soon

love rose๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

finally geet's father came to know abt thier relation

yaar iske papa ko villain banana zaroori hai...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
thnx 4 pm 


hope geet's fatther doesnt say anything 2 maaneet



do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
awesome n mindblowing update dear...

loved it...

he will blackmail geet...simple...dats why geet is in kashmakash na...


thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loved it