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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg :( :( i thought it would be an happy update but it turned out sad in the end :(
beautifully written.. specially the part she tells the sleeping arnav that she wished it was enough :( :( awww i cant wait for ur story to progess to this part !! 
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Posted: 12 years ago
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" She forgot all the hurt, the pain, the ache this man had caused in her life, and at that moment, he was the man whom she had loved more than her life. Whom she still loved, with all the pieces of her broken heart. Whom she would love until her end." 

Sigh. 

I loved it. It was sweet and hot till the end! I hated the end, hated it! Get her back to that bed and in his arms right now! RIGHT NOW! :s :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AngelTeen

" She forgot all the hurt, the pain, the ache this man had caused in her life, and at that moment, he was the man whom she had loved more than her life. Whom she still loved, with all the pieces of her broken heart. Whom she would love until her end." 


Sigh. 

I loved it. It was sweet and hot till the end! I hated the end, hated it! Get her back to that bed and in his arms right now! RIGHT NOW! :s :p



πŸ˜†

Oh, she will!!

Just gimme some time... 😳

And thanks, Rae. . . πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh man, she left him after this!!
Bring her back please, let him suffer but at the end get them together :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The end...Oh my god :(

How I wish it was enough...
But, No. It's not.

I want him to suffer, I do.
But that end still managed to tear at me. :(

Beautifully written! <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great Work Hon!😊

Really well written, and really really HAWT! πŸ˜‰Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome haawwttt os
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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How did she do that??! Maybe she wanted him to know that she was his, before leaving! Oh, look at silly me, guessing about the characters in front of the writer! Yea, really wish it was enough! But it is not.. So you know what to do.. Write!! Please update the FF soon!! :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww
Loved it dear
you describe ArHi feelings too beautifully
Another Piece of excellence from ur side
Keep it up
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet