fight k baad kya???????? UPDATED ON PGE 2

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Posted: 2012-03-04T22:10:05Z
hmmm...waiting waiting waiting kb khtm hogi ye waiting yaar...aur upr se ekta ne aisa precap dikha diya h ki koi story bhi nhi aa rhi h deemag...pr time paas k liye kuch na kuch to krna hi padega...to mne bht socha aur bht sochne k baad ye chhoti si story samne aayi hope u all enjoy it...

Accrding to me after fight what will happen...here it is...

Scene 1...

Priya ... Stop it mr.kapoor aap mere sath aise nhi baat kr sakte

Itna kh kr priya jane lagti h tabhi mr.kapoor bht jor se use pakad k apne samne khinchte h aur kehte h

Raam...kyun nhi kr sakta

Priya...mr.kapoor chhodiye mujhe its hurting me

Priya rote hue ram ko dekhti rhti h aur apni baho ko chhudane ki koshis krti h jo ki raam ne bht buri trh se pakad rkha hota h...raam priya ki ankho m ansu dekhta h aur use realise hota h ki usne bht jyada kr diya...wo turnt priya ko chhod deta h priya uski trf dekhti h roti h aur apne hath ko sahlate hue wha se chali jati h...mr.kapoor ko bhi bht guilty feel hota h pr wo kuchh kehte nhi h

Raat ko dono apne apne bister pe krwate badlte rhe sari raat h lekin ek dusre se kuch keh nhi pate h...raam sochta h ki use pria k sath aisa nhi krna chahiye tha ,kitna bura laga hoga use kya karu ab to baat bhi nhi karegi lekin uski bhi to glti h wo janti h meri adat ki mujhe gusse m kuch nhi samajh ata h to use mujhe jalakr gussa nhi dilana chahiye tha...priya bhi raam k bare me sochti h ki mr.kapoor aisa kaise kh skte h yhi hmesha vishwas ki bate krte h aur soch aisi h...kaise kh diya unhone mere baare aisa...theek h ki mne hi unhe pehle jalaya tha lekin ye itni badi to bat nhi thi ...wo mere bare m aisa kaise soch skte h sochte sochte priya rone lagti h...priya ki siski mr.kapoor ko sunayi deti h to wo uthkr sofe k paas aate h priya ankhe band krk sone ka natak krne lagti h mr.kapoor 2 3 baar awaz dete h pr ansr nhi milta h to phir wo bhi sone chale jate h ...dono hi jagte hue ek dusre k sath k bawzud tanhai aur khamoshi m puri raat bita dete h aur pta nhi kab kisko neend aa jati h...

Subah mr.kapoor uthte h ..

Raam...priya chai to pila do yaar aaj bht sardard kr rha h

Pr mr.kapoor ko koi ansr nhi milta h tb mr.kapoor ki ankhe khul jati h aur wo dekhte h ki priya kahin h nhi to mr.kapoor ko phir se raat ki ek ek baat yaad ane lagti h aur unhe tnsn hone lagti h ki wo priya ko kaise samjhayenge kaise usse baat karenge ,wo to bht naraz hogi raat m bhi koshish ki thi lekin kuchh nhi hua...sochte sochte mr.kapoor phir se priya ko awaz lagate h lekin koi jawab nhi milta h tabse bansi kaka chai lekr aa jate hain...

Raam...aap kyun chai laye h,priya kahan h

Bansi...priya mam to apni coaching chali gyi aur unhone hi mujhe kaha tha ki jb aap uth jaye to m apko chai de du wrna apke sar me dard hone lagega ..sir r u alright

Raam... Ha m theek hu pr priya itni jaldi kyun chali gyi ...kuchh kh k gyi kya

Bansi...sir jaldi kaha gyi wo to apne time p hi gyi h aap der se uthe sir 

Raam...kitna time ho rha h 

Bansi... Sir 9o'clock

Raam... 9 baj gye aur m sota rh gya ...theek hai jao tum yha se aur le jao ye chai bhi nhi peeni h mujhe...

Bansi chala jata h raam sochne lagta h ki aise kaise aaj m so gya ki mujhe pta bhi nhi chala ki itna late ho gya aur priya ne bhi mujhe jagaya nhi aur bina mere sath nashta kiye akele chali gyi ... Mne kaam bhi to aisa hi kiya tha...vikram tere chakkr m dekh kya ho gya ab m kya karunga kaise manaunga priya ko lekin ab glti ki h to use sudharna to padega hi...phir raam fresh n up hoke neeche ata h aur office jane lagta h tabhi

Niharika...raam...baby itni jaldi me kaha bhage ja rhe ho nashta to kr lo

Raam...nhi ma mujhe bhuk nhi h aur bht late ho rha h...bolkr raam chala jata h

Niharika...bhaiya..dekha apne ye dono gye to akele akele h lekin dono ka attitude ekdm same tha ,dono hi kuch pareshan lag rhe the aur naraz bhi dono ne nashta bhi nhi kiya bhaiya mujhe to lagta h jarur kuch gadbad h pta lagana padega ki akhir kya aur kahan aag lagi h

Mama...sweety tu theek kh rhi h pta to lagana padeg tabhi to hm us aag m ghee dalenge na

Niharika...ha bhaiya bilkul sahi kaha aapne mne kaha tha na ki ye dono jyada der tk ekdusre k sath dhang se nhi rh skte h

Mama...mtbl sweety hamara kaam krne ka time aa gya chalo bhai m kaam pe lag jata hu...jasusi karne ka kaam...

Raam ja rha hota h to achanak priya ki coaching ke samne ruk jata h aur sochta h priya se mil k sorry bol deta hu bekar baat badhane kya fayeda..raam car se utrta h priya se milne jane k liye pr achanak ruk jata h sochta h ki ya baat krna theek nhi h abhi...m sham ko ata hu aur priya ko pic bhi kr lunga aur raste m akele m usse baat bhi krk sorry bol k prblm solve kr dunga...aisa soch kr raam wha se chala jata h

Udhar priua ka bhi coaching m mn nhi lag rha hota h wo chahe jitni bhi koshish krti h lekin baar baar uska dhyan distract ho jata h aur mr.kapoor ki whi bate baar baar deemag m ghumti rhti h priya class lene bhi nhi jati h whi baithe baith yhi sochti rhti h ki mr.kapoor mere baare m aisa kaise soch sakte h..

Udhar raam ka bhi yhi haal rhta h uska kuchh krne me mn nhi lagta h bs baar uske deemag m ek hi baat chal rhi hoti h ki wo priya ko kaise manaye...kisi trh shaam hoti h mr.kapoor turnt office niklte h aur priya ki coaching pahonchte h...lekin chunki wait nhi kr paa rhe the to ek ghanta pehle hi pahonch jate h...ab ram bahar wait krta rhta h ki kb class khtm ho aur priya bahar aaye...aaj raam k liye ek ghanta katna itna mushkil ho rha tha jaise ki ek saal katna h... Achanak class khtm hoti h sblog bahar aane lagte h raam besabri se priya la intezaar krta rhta h 15 min ho jate h sare log ja chuke hota h pr priya ka kahin pta nhi hota h ab to raam ko tension hone lagti h...wo andr jata h priya ko dhundhne pr wo andr bhi nhi milti h tb ram peon se puchhta h to wo btata h ki aaj to priya mam lunch k baad hi chali gyi thi kuch pareshan lag rhi thi shayad unki tabiyat theek nhi lag rhi thi shayad...
Raam kuchh ni bolta h aur mayus hokar bahar aa jata h aur sochta ki ab kya kare to phir wo vikram ko phone krta h aur chillane lagta h 

Raam...vikram dekh tere bakwas idias ki wjh se aaj kya ho gya

Vikram...kya hua ram tu chilla kyun rha h

Raam..chillau nhi to kya karu kash mne teri baat nhi mani hoti ...aur ram gussa k phone kat deta h vikram ko kuchh samajh nhi ata h ki ram ko kya ho gya h...

Phir raam ghr wapas aa jata h aur kamre me aat h to priya ko dekhta h to thoda relax feel krta h qki wo raste bhar yhi sochta hua aata h ki kahin priya naraz hokr apne papa k yha to nhi chali gyi ...pr use yha dekh kr lagta h ki chalo atleast wo priya se apni baat to kh sakta h

Raam...priya tum coaching se itni jaldi aa gyi subah bhi tum mujhe bina bataye bina jagaye chali gyi aur is time bhi m tumhe lene gya to pta chala ki tum chali gyi...
Priya kuch nhi bolti h ...mr.kapoor aage khte h...priya tum kuch bol kyun nhi rhi ho mujhe tuse kuch baat krni h

Priya...lekin mujhe apse koi baat nhi krni h aur agr aapne force kiya to m iss room se bahar chali jaungi...

Raam... Nhi aisa krne ki jarurat nhi h m kuchh nhi bolunga infact m hi chala jata hu please pr tum aise gussa mt ho aur raam kahkr room se chala jata h study m pr wha bhi wo priya ke baare me hi sochta rhta h aur yhi sochta h ki kaise priya ko manayega kya safai dega apni baat ki...udhr priya abhi bhi unhi sawalo m uljhi h ki raam ne uske baare m aise kaise socha uska mn to yhikr rha tha ki jaye aur mr.kapoor ko jhijhor kr puchhe ki kyun kiya unhone uske sath aisa bt wo aisa nhi krti h..

Scene 2

At night in room

Raam...priya kal nuts ka fashion show h

Priya ... Janti hu m aur isi k liye to aap aaye h itni jaldi

Raam...ye tumhe kisne kaha

Priya...mujhe kisi ko kehne ki jarurat nhi h aapne khud cnfess kiya tha ma k samne ki aap natasha k fasion show k liye hi jaldi wapas aaye h

Raam...are to m ma k samne aur kya kehta kya unko aise bol deta ki m apni...chup ho jate h mr.kapoor

Priya...ha aap kaise bolenge kuchh aur aap to bht hi mahan bhai h bete h aur bht hi bade dilwle h na apni family k liye to kuchh bhi kr sakte hain bs in sab cheezo m meri hi koi jagah nhi h aur mere baare me apki soch kya h ye bhi m samajh gyi hu..

Raam...priya jaisa tum samajh rhi ho waisa kuch nhi h wo to mne gusse m aake aisa bol diya tha

Priya...(rote hue)..oh to kal ko apko jyada gussa aa gya to aap to lejakr mujhe ronit k paas hi chhod ayenge aisa kaisa gussa h mr.kapoor aapka

Raam...priya please tum rona band kro aur mera aisa mtlb nhi tha tum janti ho ki m gusse ko cntrol nhi kr pata hu upr se m pehle se frstrate tha aur nhi to tum us ronit ki bate kr kr k mujhe aur pareshan kr rhi thi... 

Priya...oh to apka ego hurt ho gya ki apko mne unfit kaise kh diya h na

Raam...aisi baat nhi h priya

Priya...(rote hue)...to kaisi baat h mr.kapoor ..aap hi to hmesha khte h ki hmari shadi samjhoute wali h aur m ye man k jee bhi rhi thi lekin phir apne hi mujhe jindgi ke naye mayne seekhaye aur jb m un mayno ko samjhne lagi to aap ne mere sath aisa kr diya ...aisa kya ho gya mr.kapoor achanak ki aap itne badal gye...kyun kiya aapne mere sath aisa ...m apko kabhi maaf nhi kr paungi mr.kapoor

Raam...please priya aisa mt kaho ... M aisa kuchh nhi krna chahta tha m to kuchh aur hi krna chahta tha lekin pta nhi aisa kaise ho gya shayad ab jindgi waisi nhi rh gyi h priya jaisi pehle thi ab sabkuch badal gya h priya ab pehle jaisa kuch nhi h ki tum kuchh bhi karo to mujhe fark nhi padega...aisa nhi h priya ab mujhe tumhari hr baat se bht jyada frk padta h m nhi janta ki aisa kab hua kaise hua lekin aisa hua h priya m nhi brdast kr paya ki tum mere samne kisi aur k bare m aisa kuchh kaho...

Priya...kyun mr.kapoor whi to m janna chahti hu ki aakhir aisa kya ho gya ki aap aise baat krne lage bataiye mujhe kyun kaha aapne aisa...boliye mr.kapoor kyun kyun kiya aapne bataiye ...

Priya raam ko pakad kr jhinjhor kr puchhti h tb raam kehta h

Raam...kyunki priya m tumse pyar krta hu aur bht jyada pyar krta hu aur m koi faishion show k liye nhi aaya tha m kisi aur k liye nhi aya m sirf tumhare liye aaya tha aur m nhi janta ki ye sb kaise hua lekin m ek baat bht achhi trh janta hu ki m tumse bht pyar krta hu aur hamesh aisi hi krte rhna chahta hu

Priya...to agr aisa tha to aapne kaha kyun nhi

Raam... M kehna chahta tha lekin hamesha kuchh aisa ho jata tha ki baat hote hote rh jati thi aur phir tumne bhi to nhi kaha kuchh to m himmat nhi juta pa rha tha

Priya...mne to bht ishara kiya tha mr.kapoor pr aap hi nhi samjhe har mauke pe meri sanso ne ,meri ankho ne,meri dhadkano ne aapse ye baat kahi lekin aap nhi samjhe nhi aur nhi to aap ne mujhe itna sabkuch suna diya

Raam...priya please i am sorry lekin tum mujhe janti ho na are yaar mujhe aaj se pehle kabhi pyar nhi hua tha to m kaise samjhta in isharo ko tum seedhe muh se hi kh deti...to itna sabkuch nhi hota pr actully i mean it priya...i am really vry sorry...

Priya ram k gale lag jati h...

Priya ...mr.kapoor abhi bhi sorry hi bolte rahenge wo nhi bolenge jise sunne k liye itna sabkuch ho gya...

Raam...hahaha...bolunga pr aise nhi 
Aur phir dono ekdusre ko baho m samet ke kho jate h with background music...MAIN NA BHULUNGA MAIN NA BHULUNGI

Scene3 


Next morning
Nuts fashion show day...
Raampriya in thier room...




TO BE CONTINUED
Edited by veena23 - 2012-03-05T07:32:10Z
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Posted: 2012-03-04T22:50:46Z
hm... interesting keep it up...
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Posted: 2012-03-04T23:33:19Z
hey veena.. loved it to the core. somehow i am feelig the same would happen. hope it will happen the same way.

if possible, please do continue soon... pls.

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Posted: 2012-03-05T00:51:06Z
hiii ... lovely update enjoyed till the end ...ClapClap Clap

thankyouuu..Thumbs Up

p.s: if possible please please  update in english ,it will take lot of time to read in hindiii
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Posted: 2012-03-05T01:28:47Z
awesome veena...it is realy sweet..keep posting.
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Posted: 2012-03-05T03:30:38Z
superb Clap
plx pm me da next part
please...
Edited by salsaly - 2012-03-05T03:30:40Z
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Posted: 2012-03-05T03:34:37Z
wow ,awesome post i am loving  it, please continueClapClapClapClap
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Posted: 2012-03-05T05:38:33Z
Originally posted by luvsakshi


hiii ... lovely update enjoyed till the end ...ClapClap Clap

thankyouuu..Thumbs Up

p.s: if possible please please  update in english ,it will take lot of time to read in hindiii
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bt mere sath problm h dear i cnt update this in english...i hv sm grammatical prblm in english ...fr me its easy to read bt not to write...pta chala english m likhne baithi to balh khtm ho jayega meri story khtm nhi hogi...hehehe...sorry bt what to do...
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