GEAR UP, MJHT NEW FF 6/6..CHP:16.Pg57 - Page 31

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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update...
lovely..
hmm so mr sharma is serious 4 this relation ship...
good..
n nupur finaaly found him reliable...
phew!!! the money matter also finished
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago

superb update

loved mayank-nupur scene n convo


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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome. brilliant. mayur is so romantic
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was really really very very nice update..

amazing...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

nice update but i wanted more deep covo between mayur ...

i wanted to know if nupur dont find him reliable then y she said YES to him n give herself to him both mentaly n physicaly !!!!!!!



thanks alot

oki sure...ur wish will be hopefuly granted in 16th chpt

initially she didn't find him reliable... that was the time he was talking abt ... abt why she was avoiding him n she answered him... she did gave herself whn she strt trusting him


Originally posted by: kainatdilawar

love it as always...u r the best :)



thanku


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vinan2050

wo as usal awsm update and i can'y blv Mayank and nupur dng ahem ahem u knw bfr mrg i thaught their wil be prpr cnfetion frm both but i liked the change awsm update yarr thanxx fr PM and plzz tna time mat lia karo updates k liye




thanks alot
ya i know..
its against my style ..yet cant help there characters are such...

i wasn't planning a proper confession ...
sorry abt being late..

Originally posted by: Mudrika25

superb part...amazing...
waiting for the next..continue soon...



thanks alot dear
glad ur enjoying it



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Brilliant part api...👏
So finally the ahem ahem happened bw them...no wonder...😆...typical indo american they r...
But im glad that both has taken this relationship seriously...specially mayank...and wow in so so glad that finally he paid all the money and got clearance...
Now cant wait fr mission ADDY...want a satisfactory revenge this time..😡😈
Loved this part dii..
Cont it and update MY soon too...🤗





thanks alot dear..
lolzz i know .,.. kya kero character ki demand thi...
i have nothing in my mind how to take the revenage... need sum time for it...
thanks fro liking dear

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
now dat was an awesome pay back...🤣🤣☺️
Gosh!!!!!! u actually wrote dis part API...😲😆🤣
loved it to d coreee...
good to see dat Mayank has taken der relationship very seriously n m glad dat even Nupur know dat he is totally onto her...
loved d fact though she firstly didn't blv him bt now i know she does as she submittet herself to him in true senses...Awww
it was d most Fav update...
apart from der teasing sessions...dis part was actually showing der Love wid Proper conversation too...
m glad dat he paid all d money...
n now m waiting for him revenge from dat moron...huh
Woa!!!! so we r getting another race...n i know dis time my hero is gonna win it...
i thought ke d game ended in last part n he lost...bt Gosh!!!
Thank u API...
m sooo glad ke now we will get a proper race n dis time for Only Winning...
loved it to d coreee...
loved der love too...
n d last part was really cute...
loving it to BITS...
Love u lodsss API...Dil se...alwaysss🤗🤗🤗



lol... ya actually i worte it... sigh
yup glad u can see that both f them have taken there relationship seriously..
thanks jani for liking
not a hige proper race yet yes there is a last round there for the whole thing
hope u like it too

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Posted: 13 years ago


just give me few mins... in half n hr
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

this is amazing

and mayur r too fast
unexpected update for me
luved it



thanks alot dear
lol... i know they are

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go

MindBlowing Fiza :)
Finally mayank had his way ... lol
Loving there chemistry .. But i seriously want to see Mayankz possessive attitude towards Nupur . Mayve a lil Nupur-Jack not-so-friendly interaction wont hurt ;) ;)



thanks dear
ya finally he had it...😉
oki ur words taken... i m plaaning to add it in 16 th chapter...

thnks dear



Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

I am a little bi confused...if nupur don find him reliable than why she spend night with him? But anyways we got a romantic Mayur moment..so loved it...❤️but u know I wanted some deep relation b/w them...agree with kheya.


continue soon.



nupur was answering his question ..tht initially why she was so rude to him n wasnt excepting him.. so she was refering to that.. not now...
sure i will try to add it...


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