VirMan OS: In love with the matchmaker *for Talli* - Page 2

Absolutely loved it! It was fantastic! The conversation b/w Virat n Manvi seems v real. They will actually talk like this. Loved the thing dat Manvi did 2 cheer up Virat - spilt iced tea on dadaji's pants n used buaji's dupatta 2 wipe it off... lol. Wud love 2 c sumthing like dis in the show too. Plz continue writing. U are awesome!

How can u say this is lousy this is amazing it is awesome so sweet definately jealousy is the medicine for lovers is there anyway u could change this os to a ss or ff because this is a splendid storyline im 100% sure if u turn this to a ss or ff this will be the best ss/ff on IF please continue writing and whenever u do jus pm me

Mia, sorry for reading this OS so late... The title itself was very different and coming to the update, it is simply left me speechless. Manvi's explanation about love and life was simply awesome, it shows the mature side of Manvi. I could literally imagine the whole scene, the expression on Virat's face when he heard those words from Manvi... How he realized that Manvi was his first love not his music nor Maya...
Mia, you deserve a huge hugs for this🤗

Please continue this OS, I want to read more gal... Another special thanks to Talli; without you, we couldn't have gotten this awesome OS...😉

Now running to read your next OS

Originally posted by: rev4eva

Mia, sorry for reading this OS so late... The title itself was very different and coming to the update, it is simply left me speechless. Manvi's explanation about love and life was simply awesome, it shows the mature side of Manvi. I could literally imagine the whole scene, the expression on Virat's face when he heard those words from Manvi... How he realized that Manvi was his first love not his music nor Maya...
Mia, you deserve a huge hugs for this🤗

Please continue this OS, I want to read more gal... Another special thanks to Talli; without you, we couldn't have gotten this awesome OS...😉

Now running to read your next OS

Rev! 😃 I thought you didnt get my PM!!! But its ok, I always wait for your comment 😆 And yeah, I tried to show Manvi's mature side in this...Guess it came out good huh? 😉 Of course, Talli deserves a thanks!!!

Originally posted by: Khushnav

Rev! 😃 I thought you didnt get my PM!!! But its ok, I always wait for your comment 😆 And yeah, I tried to show Manvi's mature side in this...Guess it came out good huh? 😉 Of course, Talli deserves a thanks!!!

Mia, Even if I didn't receive your PM I would definitely read all the OS & FF here... Do you think I would miss when I know it is from you...Loved it so much dear

This was an amazing OS. I totally agreed with Manvi's viewpoint. Even I was thinking of the same thing when I found out the reason Virat didn't want to accept Maya's apology. I know it hurts a man's ego when a woman rejects his proposal. But she just wanted to settle her career first and then deal with marriage and the whole circus. I don't think Maya was wrong. Maybe the delivery of the message had been wrong, but the message itself was OK.

Good concept! I am waiting to see how this plays out...Please update whenever it's possible;)