I honestly have no words. I felt every emotion of the characters, up and down, as I was reading this. The flow and continuity in your writing, its so good, that the CVs on the show ought to take lessons from you!
As for the update, I'm glad you bought in Khushi's doubt that Arnav would think she was asking because she cared for Shyam. I actually hadnt thought of that at all! :) but she got it all out inspite of that. So thats victory for her. :)
And the sneeze and her concern. I was smiling along with Arnav :D
The pallu scene reminded me of Haldi morning in RM ! :)
Cant wait for what more the rain has in store for us!!!! :) I'm in Arhi-land. Shyamu can go to hell for all I care.
Thanks for the PM! :) Will miss your writing. Good luck with your exams!
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