very nicely written...
wow they met...
cont soon...
Originally posted by: alwayzzgurti
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PART-2
As the time went by , the clouds started getting darker...but geet still in
maan's arms...reading him like a book of mystery and misery...while
maan held her tightly keeping his hands on her delicate waist , like he is
holding a delicate flower...the dark grey clouds turned black n
suddenly miss.thunder entered the world without any invitation, bringing
back senses into the two people who were thunderstruck by one
another!!!!!!!!!!!
As the thunder struck , it also struck the emerging feelings of the two
people who lost themselves to each other moments ago...but soon their
realisation hit their hearts and they looked each other not in the daze in
which they were in...but in utter terrific state...they quite failed to
understand in what situation they are in...in what place they are in...they
seemed lost!!!! The rain started pouring heavily wetting not only their
bodies that were still clinging on to each other unconsciously but also
their inner feeling that seemed lost years ago... but would you think
they would give in???
Never!!!! And tats what their kismat says!!!
As the realisation hit geet, her eyes widened like she has seen a scary
movie, tears started in her eyes n tat is nw getting mixed with the rain...
Wat the hell she had been doing???
Hugging a complete stranger tat too on a secluded place like tis???
Trying to get solace from a person who she most probably has not evn
come across in her dreading life???
She looked at him with fear and hatred filled eyes...though she knows
the hatred she showed is only the mask of the fear inside her
heart..which seemed to slip in any moment...she pushed him with
greater force that maan stumbled slightly and balanced himself on the
ground...he looked at her with eyes filled with nothing but pureee
anger...
Geet: hei babaji yeh maine kya kardia???? ( she mumbled looking up,
not knowing what to do to )
Maan looked at her as like she is some 'ready to eat'food...though he
was confused with her behaviour,,,he couldn't tolerate the fact that she
pushed The MAAN SINGH KHURANA!!!!!
Initially when he saw her eyes..he was surprised...her eyes were like
colour changing butterflies..they changed emotions so drastically which
made him look at her in sheer amazement...first her eyes looked so
calm and serene..as if it reached its manzil...then it changed into
confusion...shock...fear...and atlast hatred??? Bt y??? His brains didn
seemed to comprehend...but his mind calculations was suddenly
abducted by her push and he thought he will be on the ground , though
he managed himself to stand straight on the ground and change his look
towards her like he is gonna pounce on her...
Geet's fear control meter lost its stability long ago...jus by seeing his
burning eyes...but yet our sherni maintained a brave and tough face
towards him...she turned swiftly and decided to go...that wen he caught
her by hand and twisted it behind her back...though its hurting her
badly..she is used to getting hurt physically and mentally by ppl...
Geet screamed: chodo mujhe!!!!!
He looked at her gritting his teeth while she again pushed him and ran
holding back her tears that which threatented to fall befre hm...bt she
didn let that happen..no matter what a damsel in distress she may
be...she will never give up or accepts defeat before anybody...
He stood there like a statue...he surely couldn understand what all
happend few minutes before...
Y the hell did he help her in the first place ???
N y the hell he got lost into her like that???
Y did he forget all his pains and worries when she was in his arms and
y did his anger burst wen she pushed him???
He was in both illusion and confusion...he looked far away only to see
geet running at a high speed towards the feet of the mountain with her
duppatta covering her mouth...he could say tat she is crying...but y???
Poor Ma(a)n never had a clue...he just cursed himself for having evn
looked at her...he again closed the door of his mind and went towards
the other side to descend from the mountains..which gave him complex
emotions, which he had not experienced in his life...may be he thought
he will not taste it anytime..but tis time it happened..and he couldn
name the flavour that soothed his soul...
He took his jeep and zoomed off to other forbidden area...in hunt of his
lost peace, which now seems to be taking a different turn with this new
gal's box office entry into his so called well-maintained heart!!!!!!
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Geet ran continuosly towards the deep ledge down...she didn knw frm
which she is running...is it from the guy who made sudden appearance
in her life from no where or from her own feelings, confused her to the
core...
She had been living a life where she stopped to question the reasons for
what and y things are happening...she lost the ability to think in the
thirst to live the present cheerfully...but just one encounter with a
complete stranger that too for few damn minutes...rekindles some
forbidden and unanswerable questions inside her mind...which seemed
to break her head within..she felt suffocated...she ran and ran until the
rain stops..until her turmoil stops...she sat on a rock nearby and cried
her heart out, for the first time in her life...god knows how she
controlled all these tears but today they came out like flood... she
shouted and cried in the silent valley there..
Y me????????????
Wat did i do???
Y is a mere stranger afftecting me soo much??
Y i felt so much connected to him??
Y i lost my insanity just by within his touch??
Am i so vulnerable??
Nooo...nooo...
Her cries stopped...she sat there quietly...blankly looking at a flower
nearby...she took a deep breath..calmed herself...n her mind slowly
drifted towards Maan's face...his touch...how he held her life he is
holding some of his life's priceless possession...his authority...his
eyes... Geet was in her lala land just then she heard someone
calling her from other side of the mountain...she immedietly gave a big
grin and smiled like a maniac...n she turned towards that person n
hugged that person ever so tightly...
I LOVE U...
I LOVE U...
I LOVE U...
Precap: Geet's three day freedom celebration...
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