New SS: Love after Marriage!chp#4 updtd pg#14

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        Chand and Arnab are childhood friends.. Chand wants Pia to be his elder sons's wife from their childhood.. Jeh son of Chand has a dry nature he doesn't like these marriage stuff. Abhay younger brother of Jeh is totally opposite of his brother. He is a fun loving person and every girls dream boy:P.. Chand is very much strict with Jeh whereas he is very kind with Abhay.. Pia who is a very shy girl, cute and beautiful.. Pia and Jeh had only met in their childhood.. The day of their marriage finally comes but Jeh will not marry her for some reasons and under these circumstances Abhay and Pia will get married and the story begins..
 
 
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chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
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Posted: 12 years ago
sounds interesting! do continue😊
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                                                     Chapter 1


A beginning of a new day and as routine Abhay's dad Chand Raichand went for jogging. Scene shifted to India, there a convocation day is going on in college

and they called Pia to come and say something about her journey in college. From Germany Chand calls Madhu to tell her that he is coming to India next week,

he wants to talk to Pia but she was on stage. Madhu says, "I'll let you hear her voice." Scene shifted to Germany, Jeh and his younger brother Abhay are

swimming. After swimming Abhay teasing Jeh, he snatched his mobile and ran away a distance

Jeh: wait give me back my phone..
Abhay: If you really want it then come and take it.. :P
Jeh: Common Abhay, U know merey kuch important mails anay wali hain
Abhay: Oh no ! Mails i thought females anay wali hain.. :(


Haseena comes out from kitchen, stop fighting boys breakfast is ready have some breakfast first.

Jeh: Abhay go atleast take shower first...
Abhay: No Bhai, mai tow aisay hi khaounga... Ap bhi ao jaldi..
Jeh: No, mai change karkay ata hoon..

Scene shifted to India, Pia talking to Chand..

Pia: Hi uncle, how are you?
Chand: I'm fine tum batao..?
Pia: I'm fine aswell
Chand: Today was your convocation day, how was it?
Pia: It was good..
Chand: Oh good! Dekho ab dair nahi karo ao or date fix kardo bas!
Pia: Uncle yeh parcel delivery ka kaam malikon ki marzi say hi hoga.. Ye lien mom say baat karien..
Madhu: Bhai sahab bas ghar pohch jayien tow baki ki batien tai karlegay na..
Chand: What!? Baat fix tow merey beti or mujhey karna hai, tum log tow aisay beech kay log ho saray :D..(Chand teasing Madhu)
Madhu: Ok, when you come to India next week we'll talk...
Chand: Chalo Ok, BYE!

Raichand House:
Abhay and his mom having their breakfast, Chand joins them..

Chand: Where is Jeh?
Abhay: He is getting ready..
Chand(Angry): Getting ready? Itni dair hogaye hai, I have already told you guys there is a specific time for breakfast..
Abhay: Dad apka ab yeh time table chalna wala nahi hai Bhai ki waja say.. Subha subha itna ghussa chill Dad :D

Jeh joins everyone at breakfast table..

Chand: Jaldi nashta karo sab I really need to talk something important..
Abhay: Dad i have finished breakfast mai apni zaruri baat karun :P?
Chand(Laughing): (Chand knows what Abhay is talking about) Kitnay Chahiye?
Abhay: 1000 Euro
Jeh: Are you mad bro ? 1000 Euro? Kia karogay itnay paison ka..
Chand: Ok, now I have something important to talk
Haseena: What is it?
Chand: Mai Pia ki shaadi karwa raha hoon..
Abhay: What? Dad woh tow bhai ki fiance hai uski shaad kis say karwa rahay hain?
Chand: You fool I'm talking about Jeh and Pia's wedding.. So tell me Jeh what you want to do ?
Jeh: Do whatever you want, I'm getting late BYE!


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Here I ended this chapter if you guys like it then plz comment...
Edited by innocentgal90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!sooo j & abhay r brothers...😎 add me in ur pm list
& continue soon... remember i m waitinggg
Edited by luckdiya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice ff
cont. soon
thanks for the PM
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Nice do continue. But yeh kya instead of Abhiya we have Jiya. well story age barao
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Abhiya's story will start soon and as i have written in the plot jeh will not marry pia
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AMAGING concept and LOVELY update dear:-):-) I LOVE IT:-):-) ABHAY is too good:-):-) Thanks a lot 4 pm me dear keep it up ok:-):-):-) CONTINUE SOON...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome start...πŸ‘
thanx 4 da pm...😊
update soon...😊
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a nice begining.. sounds interesting.. continue soon