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Posted: 12 years ago
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Choti Si Ghalat Fehmi Kar Day Gi Juda Hum Ko
Halat Na Badlain Gay Maloom Na Tha Hum Ko, Maloom Na Tha Hum Ko
Rishton Ki Hamain Itni Pehchan Na Thi Pehlay
Kehnay Ko Marasim To Apnay Thay Bahut Gehray
Ashkon Kay Siva Laikin, Kuch Bhi Na Mila Hum Ko,
Halat Na Badlain Gay, Maloom Na Tha Hum Ko, Maloom Na Tha Hum Ko
Prologue:
arnav could not take his insult that she slapped him , khushi did say sorry to him but he didnot listen to her, shyam who was witness to the slap instigated him to take revenge from her , he mixed something in Arnav drink in Sangeet function , and he made him jealous by saying"Saala sb see Khushi hw happy she is with NK"
Arnav just fume and he just pull her with him to his room . 
Khushi: was scared as she felt he was drank and not in his sense 
Arnav: you are happy with everyone else accept me he just punch his hand hard , his palm got a cut 
Khushi: what are you saying ?who said that to you
Arnav: just kissed her she couldn't stop him ,he just closed all his limits . when he woke up next day ."every one was worried for Khushi as she was missing from the home
After 18 years in Mumbai.
Arnav: was on a business trip, he walk to a book shop to fetch some book. A voice strikes his ear. He follows the voice. He was shocked to see a girl similar to Khushi. 
A young girl dress up in blue jean & pink kurta .made a tight pony tail was fighting with the shop keeper. "Listen me I have paid you, don't try to mess up with me. I know how to handle such kind of people." 
Arnav: got inquisitive he walk to the counter "what happen why you are teasing her"
SK: "sir she had paid 100 rupees for this book they have increased the price but she is not listening"
Arnav: noticed she was busy reading the book sitting out sit at shop stairs ."take this" he gave the SK more money
SK: "sir why you are paying? she will pay when she will get pocket money "
Arnav: she lives here?
SK: yes she live in old home with her mother. 
Arnav: old home
SK;"yes old home her mother runs it "
Arnav:" can I get the address of the old home"
Sk : "why sir do you want to join it" looking at her grey hairs.
Arnav: "took a deep breath may be"
SK: wrote the address & gave him paper.
Arnav: "can I know the owner name "
SK :   Khushi
Arnav: grab the book shelve & keep his hand on his heart " at last I found you tears following down his eyes."
SK : keeper are you ok sir .
Arnav: sit on floor
SK: Pari ! Pari! Come here'
Pari : who was busy reading the novel turn back.. "what happen"
SK: bring water..
Pari: cupped Arnav face "uncle uncle plz bola na"
Arnav: felt Khushi had touch his face. "beta I am fine " he took out his tablets & eat."give me some thing sweet"
Pari: kya fine Uncle jee look at your face. She wipe his sweat with her hand made him eat piece of chocolate 
Arnav: murmur "just like her"
Pari : tell me where you live ? what is your home #?
Arnav: home? I don't have a home 
Pari : uncle aaisa kyun bola mein hoon na aap kai beti'. Offer her hand..
Arnav: hold it tight not to leave her again. " yes you are"
Pari: help him to stand up. "uncle keep you arm at my shoulder I will take you to Our home sweet home"
Arnav: "Khushi tumhari perchai ha yeh."murmur.
Pari: to shop keeper " I will pay you later note it in my account"
Arnav: beta I am fine now I can walk'.
Pari: uncle are you sure. Looked in his eyes
Arnav: for few second thought he was looking in Khushi 's eyes. 
Pari: bola uncle..wave her hand in front of his eyes.
Arnav: yes beta.
Pari: ok hold my hand. She grabs his hand
Arnav :smiled. 
Pari: my mama is out of town ,she will be back by evening . don't worry we have plenty of space in our Home. 
Arnav: your mama will mind as you are taking a stranger' the slowly walked.
Pari: actually uncle we have a old home my mama runs it.
Arnav: old home
Pari: yes uncle when my papa left us my mama travel different cities she was in search of job she was maid of a old lady she had no one like my Mama. There I was born. She was like my grandmom .after 5 years she died & left her all property for us. My mama shifted here she opened a old home .since then we are here. I grow up here . uncles & aunties come & go in my life . they enter the old home there was a garden with a lot of flowers & small benches '
Arnav: recollected Khushi work. "beta your home is beautiful"
Pari: uncle Our home ? smiled & kissed his cheek. "let me show you your room"
Arnav: how many people are here?
Pari: me you & mama.. there were 3 more but all die in last 1 month.. she became sad.
Arnav: sorry'
Pari: why sorry ? we all have to die one day ' open the door
Arnav: you are a strong girl .
Pari: not strong like mama she is very strong ,she never cry.
Arnav: recollected how her eyes use to get teary in front of him. even if he use to scold her."meri Khushi strong hogai ha".
Pari: uncle u rest I will bring coffee for you.
Arnav: thx beta.
Pari: beta bhi thx bhi wah uncle. She walk out .
Arnav: recollected he reached train station but he couldn't find Khushi. He searched but she was no where. He went back home told nanima that Khushi had left him for ever . nani took the news very seriously she became sick. Arnav try to search for Khushi but she was not trace able. he got she was right she didnt hit him from revange she was just killing a mosquito , in return what he has done to her , he had just ruin her life ,He completely broken he didn't stop his search but it was no use as every time he has to face disappointment.
Pari :knocked ..uncle can I come in
Arnav: yes beta.
Pari: your coffee. How much sugar?
Arnav: i dont take sugar
Pari: oh like Mama she dont eat sweet
Arnav: Murmur "she use to love sweet". tears flow down his eyes
Pari: if you don't mind can I ask you about ur life.
Arnav: sure beta.took first sip just like Khushi's coffee
Pari: your wife, kids, 'sorry uncle.
Arnav: my wife or life got very annoyed from me she left me ages back.
Pari: oh ! you are such a nice human being why she left you?
Arnav: I hurt her'
Pari: oh uncle didn't you try to find her?
Arnav: for last 18 years 2 months 5 days & 50 mins I am trying to find her but she is hiding from me.
Pari: you loved her a lot .
Arnav; yes after her my life is empty.. she was a cool breeze in my life she taught me how to smile, how to smile in pain.
Pari: uncle mein ho na I will find her promise'. Offer him his hand.
Arnav: why there are no flowers in room? He hold her hand
Pari:oh mama will kill me if I put in rooms.
Arnav: why? (recollected he had thrown her flowers)
Pari: I don't know she just say my papa don't use to like it.
Arnav: gave a weak smile so I am your papa'. Murmur.
Pari: uncle you know it is secret my mama miss my papa a lot I know that'. Bas aik dafa papa mil jai.
Arnav: how you know that?
Pari: uncle my quote him a lot. She say he use to hate her tears that why she doesn't cry. ' uncle I once read her diary'.. I wanted to know about papa. She daily writes it A ' this happen today'opps I know it is bad habit but
Arnav: when your mama loved your papa that much why she don't tell him?
Pari: mama says I don't want to be burden on him. I think she is right when relation became burden we should let it go if it comes back it is ours if not it was never ours.
Arnav : when you were burden Khushi? He closed his eyes.
Pari: oh uncle it is raining let me play in it mama never allows me.
Arnav: why?
Pari: she say there should be someone to catch you if you slip if you don't have don't walk in rain'she ran out' you will catch me right shouted
Arnav: oh Khushi you don't have anyone'. He saw Pari dancing in rain 
Khushi reached Mumbai ..
Khushi:oh it is rain Pari must be alone let me call her she called at her cell but there was no answer.. yeh ba mosam kai bearish..she got out of taxi as it was a bad traffic jam. She stared walking holding her saree. "aaj saalo ka baad Arnav mein barish mein walk kar rahi hoon, aaj aap mujhe ko bahot yaad aa raha ha."she started walking fast.
At home
Arnav: pari bus karo beta you will get sick
Pari: uncle aap bhi mama kai tarah .what the ..
Arnav: grab her arm look at her "what you said " 
Pari: mama  fav word she say that thousand time and cries like any thing and some time smile .
Arnav  she was about to slip "bus chalo andar"
Pari: thori aur plz
Arnav: nahi bilkul nahi. Tumhari mama kab aai gai
Pari: abhi tak aajana chaiaya tha.
Arnav:call karo
Pari: oh she called me when I was playing in
Arnav: snatch cell from her try to redial but it was saying switch off
Pari: uncle don't worry she must be sitting in taxi as she will never walk in rain.
Arnav: from which side she must be coming . 
Pari: from airport.
Arnav: ok do you have servant?
Pari: yes '
Arnav: ok you stay i n till I come back '
Pari: how you will find my mama?
Arnav: I will find her. He walk out
Pari: papa
Arnav: turn back "how you know?"
Pari: your eyes are saying like mama's'. She ran & hug him
Arnav: meri pari kissed her forehead . forgive me beta.
Pari: mama ko la kar aaya ja kar.
Arnav: kissed her forehead again.
He walked out 
Khushi was walking on pavement .talking to herself. "Arnav you changed me completely .i pretend to be strong but from inside I am tired know"
Arnav: walked as fast as he could his every step looked like a year long years. It was getting dark he was standing in middle of road looking all around. He at last found his Khushi walking toward him she didn't saw him.
Khushi: oh DM yeh pari pata nahi kahan ha iss ki wajhe se aaj muhje ko barish mein' her shoes was filled with water she took it off & try to drain water.
Arnav: started walking towards her he just reached next to her.
Khushi lost her balance Arnav grab her by her waist like always.she clutch his shirt. His touch gave her goose bumps. she felt it was similar touch..
Khushi eyes were closed as she was scared of falling down. Murmur"Arnav"
Arnav: hugged her "ha mein Khushi"
Khushi: thought she was dreaming but his hug made her realized it was real.
Arnav : tum mujhe se itna naraz hogai thi ka mujhe ko chor kar chal gai itna duur
Khushi: "Arnav leave me koi dekhe la ga"
Arnav: nahi Khushi ab nahi 'he hug her more tight it was totally dark there was no street light. you are scared of dark
Khushi:Arnav ab nahi hoon 
Arnav: Khushi kya 18 saal kia saaza mera leya kafi nahi ha'could feel his voice shivering
Khushi: Arnav muhje ko daard horaha ha.. 
Arnav: left her but hold her hand. He sneezed 
Khushi: oh you will get sick come with me I will take you home. She pull him with her.
Arnav:Khushi mein na tum ko kaha nahi dhoda.
Khushi: kyun .
Arnav: stopped her pull her to him" we had a he paused "
Khushi: you remembered 
Arnav: ha i was drank but what i did to you was  in my senses as i was drank in your love mein iss ki mafa Magana chata tha per tum..sorry hold his ears 
Khushi: i thought you next day you will say i am such kind of girl humari aukat 
Arnav:shhh Khushi. He pull her more close hardly any distance between them
Khushi: woh mein 
Arnav: shhh Khushi aik dum chup mein tou samjha tha ka mei n maar jao ga per tum se nahi mil pao ga
Khushi: kept her hand at his lips' shhh
Arnav: Khushi mein thaak gaya ho bahot he sank on his knees
Khushi: Arnav she too kneel down" where is your wife, kids?
Arnav: wife kids. Mera dil kia chabi to tumhara paas thi (keeps her hand at his heart) '.mein kis tarah kaise aur ko aapna dil mein jaaga data. i fall in love with you when you left me 
Khushi: kya matalb'
Arnav: Khushi waqt zaroo beet gaya ha per mein abhi bhi wahan hee khara ho mujhe ko maaf kar do plz Khushi mein tum se bahut pyar karta ho. mein bus jee raha ho tumahra baghair mein adoora ho.
Light came 
Arnav: look at her fore head"yeh"
Khushi:shyly smiled 
Arnav:you are married  he left her 
Khushi: yes 18 years 2 months 5 days & 18 hours 45 mins back i got married to some one 
Arnav: did we got married?
Khushi: yes you first took me to the worship place .
Arnav: dammit then why you vanish ,
Khushi: as i knew next day you will do what the what the and say and reject me 
Khushi: looked a shadow coming close to them. It was Pari she was asking her to hug him."she hugged Arnav as she couldn't see him in more pain,
Arnav hide himself in her arms 'Khushi kissed him 
Khushi: i missed your touch i am tired too i cannot live without you any more.
Pari My mama papa' she turn back with smile wiped her tears
 
waiting for long comment please i will indeed stop writing 
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.its lovely...dear...
amazing update...
love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gom3090

wow.its lovely...dear...

amazing update...
love it...

at last some one comment i though it was not worth reading 
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Posted: 12 years ago
no words to say.
absolutely beautiful.
do write more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Phew i cnt bliv sme1 cn even do dis...
he gave her such a big punishmnt 4 such a silly mistke..πŸ˜”
ohhh i damn hte dat snake..😑
i really hpe dis neva happen 2 anybody..
nyways loved Pari a lot...πŸ€—
 
ps: Nad am sry i hvnt read ur other updates..plzzz gimme sme tym i'll read dem n comment okkk...
Edited by fallenstar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh this was sooo... I have no words... I still have a lump in my throat 
Just wish nothing like this ever happens to anyone in this world not even to my enemy
Very well written ,
I know how much courage a writer needs to write something like this
well done Nadz 
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was beautiful di wow i thought of veer zara it was awesome very emotional no words to express superb di
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was very very niceπŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
totally different ! superb work !
truly loved da way u wrote it !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome dear!! Mind blowing os!! Just a simple misundrstng made der life miserable!! Ending ws just superb!! Rocking os. U trully deserves applauses 4 ds os.