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Posted: 12 years ago

os bitter or after reaction πŸ˜‰


buaji Khushi chalo sojao

Khushi: buaji i will sleep you go

Buaji: made her rest on bed again she was about to go she saw flowers."Sanka devi why you throw the flowers like that"

Khushi: buaji tou hum kya kara in phool ka

buaji go bring vase i will keep it in water ..

Khushi i am sleepy i am not getting up ...

Buaji:how nice is nk not like your that LG ,

Khushi hiccup

Buaji: kya huwa , i took his name & you started your hiccups

Khushi: just peep in blanket "sorry, buaji down call him LG he is so nice"

Buaji hato ,subha se LG LG kar rahi ho ab woh acha hogaya .. nk Akash ka bhai lagta ha na ka iss LG ka

Khushi hiccup again

Buaji: hum ko lag raha ha tumara LG tum ko yaad kar raha ha ,waise iss na kis ka saal kharab kiya hoga Khushi

Khushi: buaji bus aap na aik dafa bhi un ko LG bola tou hum.tou hum phir se jalebi bana laga ga ...

buaji: you are making that since morning.

Khushi:buaji aap apna nk ka phool la aur jai yahan se ...

buaji: how mine?

Khushi:as you saw his face at 12 .i didnot mine is the whose face i saw

Buaji hum ko lagta ha tum na apna iss LG ka dekha ha tab he tou hum ko maana kar rahi hoon( i feel like you have seen face of your LG ,that why you are stopping me to say LG)

Khushi: ha ha dekha ha ,

Arnav: pinch her to shut up

Khushi: aah shiii ... 

Buaji kya huwa ...

Khushi: aap ka nk ka phool se allergy coldtoo, please take it & go to your room please ,she sneeze again.

buaji: ja raha ha ja raha ha she walked out 

Khushi: just relaxed as she closed the door

Arnav placed his hand on her "so i am LG "

Khushi: just gulp she try to get up but he stopped her by placing his hand on her shoulder

Arnav: you make fun of me by saying me LG

Khushi: dekha you can say any thing you want to just be calm please ,he look at her face it was all pale her lips were all dry,

Buaji just murmur something walk back "khushi wait'

Khushi just closed her eyes "not again" he just lay down his hand was caring her cheek she just stop breathing 

as she felt his closeness

Buaji :just walk in the room to see," sogai kya utho" she just sat next to her.

Arnav: pull his hand back.

Khushi: just look at him and taken out her head" bola buaji i feel like you will not let me sleep today"

Buaji: was sitting with spoon and cough syrup "take one "

Khushi: just took one spoon quickly." now go"

Buaji: just look at her "Wait i will make Payal to drink one too"

Khushi: no no give me her's i will take her's too. she just took the spoon and pour one more oh happy ji kai bhi he also had cough 

Buaji: sanka gai ho kya ,iss se neend aati ha 

Khushi: if you will not go i will take the whole bottle.she just grab the bottle ,you have already dig grave for me.

Buaji: i am feeling the medicine has started working .. she just walk out

Arnav: just waited and then he throw the blanket"are you crazy you took over dose "

Khushi: nahi is should have let buaji to give you .now shout on me on  this too.aap ka tou kam just hold his hand and placed it on her heart "see how it is racing ? he felt strange every heart beat was bring him close to her . 

Khushi: you go or i will drink the whole bottle because if this hide and seek last for few more mins i will meet my amma babuji and your maa"

Arnav:placed his other hand on her lips "shhh i am going"

Khushi:look at him as he took the bottle away

Arnav:dont say like that  both look at each other.

khushi: jiji tou khud maza kar rahi hogai and i am taking this bitter medicine 

Arnav:just felt sorry for her."you have your jalebi he saw the plate on the table"

Khushi: nahi he just got out of bed just felt her hand was still holding his 

Arnav: do you want me to stay here?

Khushi : just left his hand "didn't reply.he just walk to the window she just get out of the bed walk behind him

Arnav:what

Khushi :i didn't call nk he came himself

Arnav: look at her they way she was clearing his doubt .

Khushi: aur those flower was for jiji

Arnav : did i said anything.

suddenly light went out he felt she hold his arm.

Khushi:can you stay for few more mins please?

Arnav hmmm

Khushi:just came close to him

Arnav: just pull her close 

Khushi: DM yeh light bhi abhi jani thi, you dont know how much i am scared of dark, and jiji too not here.she was murmur she felt his arm wrap around her waist

Arnav: i am here she just look up at him in dim street light from out ..he was looking at her he saw she was making bad face as she still had the taste of her bitter medicine .. he just raced her chin "was it too bitter "

Khushi: yes because of you i took 3 spoon where as i dont take single .

Arnav; just peek her lips whisper "now "

Khushi in shocked look at him her grip became tight on his arm she dont not reply

Arnav: this might be more bitter than your medicine right 

Khushi: just gain back her conscious 'hum na yeh tou nahi bola" look aside  

Arnav:you even didnot liked it 

Khushi: aise baat nahi ha 

Arnav: phir kaise baat ha ,waise you are so unromantic ,i guy kissed you and you are just not responding .

Khushi:look at him she got he was pulling her legs ."he didnot kissed me he just touch "thou it was slip of tongue but it encourage him to give her a proper kiss .

Arnav: just brush his nose tip with her's "let him kiss you properly then "he just sealed her lip's with his without waiting or thinking pull her close and bit high to him that there was hardly any distance between them ,explore each other .


akash :knock at the window "khushi ji"


they broke 

Khushi abhi aana tha 

Arnav smiled and sealed her lips again as it was now time for Akash and Payal to suffer.they broke as they felt they cannot take it any more "am i  LG now"

Khushi: shyly placed her head on his chest "yes sometimes"

Arnav: let me go or they will wake everyone as akash was throwing stone at the window .he slow free him self from her embrace "you can cont in morning from here"

Khushi: just left him ..

Arnav: open the window

AKash Bhai you 

Payal: kya kar rahi thi tum itna daair se

Khushi: we were playing ghar ghar in blanket ... both smiled at each other

Akash ghar ghar

Arnav: you will not understand lets go before buaji come with her medicine and she take one more spoon ,and i he just paused as he felt she pressed his hand 

Payal: khushi your lips ass he jump in with the help of Akash and Arnav.

both said together "medicine after reaction " smiled at each other 

Arnav: whisper in her year had best new year night .peek her as he knew the blind couple will not see them..and jump out "i hope you are not feeling bitter now "

Khushi just ran to bed as she couldn't see him going 

Arnav: just saw her and smiled and pull Akash with him ...


dont forget to comment i will stop writing or come out of your system to strangle youπŸ˜†

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey i was the first one. It was so nice. Just imagine if they r doing all this on the first night of the yr. Then think abt the whole yr.Edited by arhi-fan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god loved it!! every bit of it! 
haha specially when arnav goes, "now?" lol the medicine is stinging inside the throat, but loved the way you wrote it! keep it up <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈ
Loved reading it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: thecraze92

oh god loved it!! every bit of it! 

haha specially when arnav goes, "now?" lol the medicine is stinging inside the throat, but loved the way you wrote it! keep it up <3

i think this is your first comment at my any os welcome aboard
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice OS Naddiya. Enjoyed it. Thanks !
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome cute update naddiya
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Posted: 12 years ago
awosome os nadiya. keep it up.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome OS dear
very well written
loved it to bits😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I always wonder how could u write so fast based on precap im not talking about this but all ur OS's u will be the first one to write and very regular ...
i always read but i wont comment because i have think for that also and my brain is very slowπŸ˜†
this is my first comment on your work...
and really like it and just give me some tips on how u manage to write so fast???