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Originally posted by: tina_1234
beautiful part...can we hav a bit of present in btwn :D
Thanks 😊 Will try to add a bit of present scenes as well in future if I can fit into the update
Originally posted by: tina_1234
beautiful part...can we hav a bit of present in btwn :D
Great Update.. They Are Starting To Feel Things For Each Other.. Do Continue Soon And Thank You For The PM..
Originally posted by: nikki028
reva.. xcellent update..d initial sister convo padke meri aankhon mein nami pad gayi n d line by virat to manvi on "learning abilities" indeed made me also chuckled lik virat..haha.. truly u r a gifted writer dear..one can truly feel n visualise evry feeling u pen down.. :) nywz plz continue soon..
Originally posted by: innocentmanvi1
dear i think u should remove ur last line of jootay and chappalas!!!!
this was damn goood i loved it and imagined all those dialogues scenes in my mind loved it mmmuah for u!!!!❤️
wow yaar!! i just discovered your ff... this is the best virman ff i've read so far. read all 10 parts in one go...add me to your pm list please and pm me when you add the next part
thx xx
Originally posted by: shehroon_riaz
One word; PERFECT!
Just perfect. I really did want to write a long comment but can't as I have no words. All I can say if continue soon and PM me when you do, :P
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