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last update an awesome n reli a high one frm story pov bt for me d best was , d way u wrote it down...
no doubt few of ur best writings till nw👏👏👏
pia's pov was something out of d world, xceptionally well written⭐️⭐️
it was so natural, d way u wrote down her heart...it was wooowww
abhay's pov, best was when amber heard his thoughts..bt u knw abhay makes me feel , which is totally difficult to xplain, i mean its hard to say dt he is wrong coz he is nt...n u av defined his feelings, his pov so well...n then d final justification by amber took away all d confusions...dt pia is nt normal😉
no comments on jeh's pov, i need time to judge him also😕
i loathe dt gaurav, he is beep , beep beep beep ( mere paas iski tarif ke liye words nahi hai😡
aryan's pov where he hd few thoughts abt peehu dt was an amazing one, it clicked dt moment only n after dt, dt compulsion part was again a good one...😳
u knw i m feeling bad for pia's accident bt my thoughts r more in future than in present , so sry for dt😆
okay on serious note last aryan's pov was heart wrenching n plsss it was complete abhay's mistake so btr he doesn't utter a single word to aryan😡😡
n has guarav kidnapped amber?? hope aryan find her soon n it would b much btr dt amber kill dt b*****
nw cn't wait for d nxt update, i just don't want abhiya, i want aryan-pia also
luv u🤗
Edited by heena_mehta - 12 years ago
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