Originally posted by: vinit_rocks
thnx orangesoft 😛
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i love your avatar! pls! vinit_rocks! empty your PM inbox!
BTW anyone likes my avatar?😛
Dayeeta.. I cudn't see your avtaar :(
wher is it.
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😕 i think my avatar is alright!
ya got it..... it's of vineet n rahul vaidya right? its cool 😳
Originally posted by: adwarakanath
Thanks 😉
That isn't a sher. Rules for a sher are -
1) A sher must only consist of two lines.
2) The last word of both lines should be the same.
3) The meter must be same for both the lines - behr'
4) There should be a rythymic pattern...Kaafiya
5) There should be a rhyming refrain - Radif
Eg. - Hazaron khwahishein aisi, ke har khwahish pe dam nikle,
Bahut nikle mere armaan, par phir bhi kam nikle.
Ghalib 😉
But sometimes, the Matla...is missing. Those shers are called Gair Muraddaf shers.
Here's one beautiful one -
Jab bhi milti hai kehti hai kaise ho 'Shakil',
Isse aage koi baat hoti hi nahin! 😕
'Shakil' is the shayar's name...the word used is 'Maqta'.
Here's one adapted by Me -
Chamakte chaand ko toota hua tara bana dala,
Bhai bolke deewane ko bewda bana dala. 😆
gr8 ingo . thanx👏
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oops sorry yaar
i dint know my inbox was full😭
sorry once again
i deleted all da pms😛
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