NEWFF MAANEET MERE HUMSAFAR THRD 7 Upd pt69 pg127 - Page 4

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Thanks for the constant encouragement and support dear friends.
 
This update would be the end of this track and from the next update I am starting the new track. Guys the next track would be an emotional one but as usual there won't be any separation nor any misunderstanding between Maaneet.
 
The next track would be a test of their relationship and their relation will become more stronger with time. I hope u will enjoy the next track
 
love-Piya
 
PART 62
 
After some time the party gets over.
 
Maaneet return back to the hotel
 
Geet: Maan aaj Party mein bada maza aaya na?
 
Maan: Achha toh ye bataiye Madam party mein aapko sabse zyada kya achha laga?
 
Geet: Sabkuch achha tha ab aisa toh kuch special nahi hua party mein jo k mujhe choose karna pade
 
Maan comes and hugs her from behind and places his neck on her shoulder
 
Maan: Kuch special nahi hua, chalo main tumhe kuch options detha hoon tum unhe apni priority k hisaab se arrange karo
 
Geet: Thik hai boliye
 
Maan: Toh batau party ka arrangement, food, music aur dance inn mein se tumhe sabse zyada yaadgaar lamha kya laga
 
Geet: Arrangements kafi shaandar the...khana toh lajawab tha aur music toh dil ko chu lene wala tha bus ye sab shandaar the
 
Maan: Tumhe mere saath dance karke achha nahi laga wo toh tumhare priority list mein maujood hi nahi hai
 
He leaves her but Geet holds his hand and turns around
 
She places both his hands on her waist and she encircles her hand on his neck
 
Geet: Priority list mein toh wo saare cheeze mention ki hai jo k uss particular party ki khaasiyat thi maine ab tak unn lamho ka zikr kiya hi nahi jo mere dil ki dhadkano mein humesha k liye chap chuke hai
 
Maan looks into her eyes
 
Geet: Aapke saath bitaye hue har ek lamhe mein main apni zindagi ka sabse anmol khazana dekthi hoon
 
Geet: Jab aap mujhe yun pyar bhari nigahoon se dekhthe ho toh mujhe ye ehsaas hotha hai k main bhi khoobsurat hoon
 
Geet: Jab aap mujhpar apna haq jaatathe ho tab main anmol hoon iss baat ka gumha mujhe hotha hai
 
Geet: Jab aap mujhe chuthe (touch) ho toh tab apne pavitra hone ka yakeen ho jaata hai
 
Geet: Aap hi toh mere sab kuch ho aur aapke saath bitaye hue itne beshkimthi  lamhe ko main itne mamuli cheezo k saath kaise tol sakthi hoon
 
Geet hugs Maan
 
Geet: Aap hi toh meri daulat ho mera sabkuch ho aap ho toh sabkuch hai , iss zindagi mein mere paas aapke siwaye aur kuch bhi nahi hai aap hi se mera sukoon aur chain hai
 
Maan: Itna important hoon main tumhare liye?
 
Geet: Meri zindagi k kitaab k har ek panne par bus aaphika naam sajha hua hai Maan aapse badkar na hi mere liye koi tha aur naa hi kabhi koi ho saktha hai
 
Maan: Geet iss trip se hum aur bhi kareeb aa gaye haina?
 
Geet: Iss trip ko main kabhi nahi bhula paaungi Maan aur iss room ko toh kabhi bhi nahi kitne saari yaadein basi hai humari iss kamre mein haina?
 
He lifts her in his arms and goes and sits on a chair in the balcony. He places Geet on his lap
 
Geet rests her head on his shoulder
 
Maan: Iss kamre ko toh main bhi kabhi nahi bhula paaunga Geet yaad hai humne pehli baar bed share kiya tha iss room mein
 
Geet: Haan aur issi room mein aapne mera itna khayal rakha apni aakhon par patti baand kar meri help ki
 
Maan: Pehli baar hum ek saath chale bhi issi room mein the tumne apna pair mere pairo par rakha aur hum dono ne ek pyari se walk bhi ki
 
Geet: Aapne apne haatho se banaya hua soup bhi mujhe issi kamre mein pehli baar khilaya
 
Maan: (thinking) Tumhare liye apne pyar ka ehsaas bhi mujhe pehli baar yahi hua. I love u Geet
 
Geet: (thinking) Aapke naam ka sindoor maine apne maang mein yahi pehli baar dekha. I love u Maan
 
Geet: Iss room ko main bada miss karungi Maan
 
Maan: Main bhi
 
Geet: Maan ab mujhe neend aa rahi hai chaliyena ab so jaathe hai
 
Maan: Chalo
 
He carries her in his arms and Geet places her head on his cheast and both of them drift to sleep peacefully
 
Next Day
 
Maan wakes up and finds his angel besides him
 
Maan: Good Morning Geet
 
Geet: Maan aap utt gaye itne jaldi?
 
Maan: Geet yaad haina aaj hum Delhi wapas jaa rahe hai
 
Geet: Ji Maan par hum shaamko jaanewale haina
 
Maan: Haan kyun tumhe kuch kharedna tha?
 
Geet: Haan Maan humne Dadima, Annie, Dev Adi Sir inke liye kuch bhi nahi khareeda toh mujhe unke liye kuch gifts khareedne the aap mujhe shopping le chalogena
 
Maan: Aapka hukum main kaise taal saktha hoon? Tum ready ho jaau phir hum ikatha shopping ko bhi jaayenge aur uske baad ek movie bhi saath mein dekh lenge
 
Geet is very excited
 
Geet: Hum movie ko jayenge Maan
 
Maan: Ji
 
Geet: Wow chaliye main abhi taiyaar ho jaathi hoon
 
She tries to get up but Maan pulls her back
 
Maan: Sabke liye Gifts khareed rahi ho mujhe koi  gift nahi dogi?
 
Geet: Gift aapko gift chahiye hmm...ek gift hai mere paas par uske liye aapko apni aakhein bannd karni hogi
 
Maan: Thik hai to lo aakhein bannd kar di
 
He closes his eyes
 
Geet places a peck on his lips and runs away from there immediately. Maan could only smile at her cute antics.
 
After some time both of them get ready and go for shopping and later on for the movie date as well
 
Evening
 
Maan and Geet are ready to leave for Delhi
 
Just then Dadima calls Maan on his mobile
 
Maan: Ofho Dadima mar gaye yaha aane k baad ek baar bhi unse dang se baat nahi ki agar maine phone uthaya toh wo meri achhi kahbar le legi
 
Maan: Geet tum Dadima se baat karo tab tak main ye formalities complete karke bahar aata hoon
 
Geet: Ji
 
She answers the call but there was some network problem so she goes out
 
Here Maan sees the register where their name was enrolled as Mr.and Mrs. Khurana
 
Manager: Sir aap yaha sign kar dijiye aur phir aap checkout kar sakthe hai
 
Maan: Nahi Manager sahab hum check out nahi kar rahe infact main ye keh raha tha k aap ye room permanently issi naam se book kar dijiye aapko iss room ka rent mil jaayega
 
He removes his checkbook and enters a certain amount in it and gives it to the manager
 
Maan: Ye lijiye ek saal ka payment hai main chahtha hoon k ye room waise hi rahe jaise main aur meri Mrs. chodkar jaa rahe hai
 
Manager: Ji Sir waise ek baat kahu aap apni wife se bahut pyar karte hona?
 
Maan: Pyar k maaiyne mere liye meri wife hi hai yun keh lo k Geet iss Maan ki zindagi hai
 
Manager wishes them a safe journey
 
Here Geet was busy talking to Dadima
 
Geet: Nahi Dadima hum aapko kaise bhool sakthe hai?
 
Dadima: Achha wo sab chodiye Geet ye batiye Maan ne aapko tang toh nahi kiyana?
 
Geet: Nahi Dadima Maan toh mera bahut khayal rakhthe hai
 
By that time Maan comes out and hears their convo.
 
He places his head on her shoulders and kisses her softly
 
Geet: Maan...
 
Dadima: Kya hua Maan ko abhi toh aap keh rahi thi k wo aapka khayal rakthe hai
 
Geet: Ji Dadima wo mera bahut dhyan rakthe hai aur...
 
Maan was busy kissing her Geet was losing her senses slowly
 
Geet: ye lijiye Dadima Maan se baat kijiye
 
She gives the phone to Maan
 
Dadima: Maan koi kaam mein itna busy ho jaata hai kya aapko itna bhi khayal nahi raha k hume ek baar call karna chahiye
 
Maan: Dadima kuch sunaiy nahi de raha Delhi aakar baat karte hai bye
 
He cuts the call
 
Maan :Geet ye kya badmaashi thi Dadima se daat khilwadi na
 
Geet: Achhaji aur jo aap kar rahe the wo badmasshi nahi thi?
 
Maan: Tum mujhse panga le rahi ho MSK se?
 
Geet: Ji haan aapse panga le rahi hoon aur aap MSK ki Geet ko kuch kum mat samajiyega wo bhi aaphiki takkar ki hai
 
Maan :Achhaji ab batatha hoon iski saza toh tumhe zarur milegi MSK ki Geetji
 
Geet starts running and Maan tries to catch her and finally he is successful
 
Their eyes meet and without a moment of hesitation they lock their lips with each other
 
After a while they end the kiss
 
Maan :Ab chale
 
Geet: Ji
 
Maaneet sit in the car and leave
 
PRECAP: Geet in danger😭😭😭 but where is Maan😲😲😲
 
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Love-Piya 
 
 
Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
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m so so so happy...first to comment after a long time...
 
 

 


Well now coming to the update... 

m litteraly jumping...kitna cutely maan and geet ne apna time spend share kia...all those hesrt stealing moments were great...!!

 
 
or uske baad...maan ka vo room rent pe karana was was superb...just superb...
 
  
so finally they are heading towards Delhi...
 
wanna c hw it goes now...!!
 
Superb update...loved it...
 



Edited by minnie_tweetie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
WoWWW  Loved The Update👍🏼 ...It Was  

Bt Precap Is Scary.😲...Plz Do Con Soon😛
W8ing😍
Thanx 4 The PM😃
Edited by _mahi.ve_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
ossum dear
but again what is this twist
cant take more ...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
awsome 
precap scary
when maan is here nthg to fear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
 for new thread..👏
What new twist..
Update soon
Eagerly waiting 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Hey...last few sentences wer so sweet.so sensuous.But precap is so disturbing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
they are sooo cute...☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Awesome update...👏
Maaneet conversation superb⭐️
Geet dialogues are awesome..👍🏼
Maaneet nok-jhok cute..😳
Precap is scary😲..Where is maan?Why geet is in danger😲
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awesome part👏.
i loved it😊. 
precap is scary😭
continue soon