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Hi guys this OS may surprise you as no track has indicated this.. but people have been talking about viren's death or getting scared .. Nothing like this will happen. But this story idea came in my head of scenes.. If Viren was perceived dead...- this AFTER marriage something happens. BUT he comes back.. and thats when the intensity of Virika commences.. Confusion, love and longing in both of them. Here is my scenes.. - OK don't kill me lol..
Part 1-
Viren lies there lifeless as the guys run away.. Virat tries to get help crying.. but when he comes back Viren's body isn't there. What happened he thinks ..
As the family try to come to terms of what happened to viren and whether he is dead or Alive. Jeevika breaks down...- some are telling her he is dead but she doesn't want to believe that. In her heart she knows he isn't.
A year passes...- Dr manan comes to see them. Still garnering feelings for Jeevika but Jeevika looks away. Her face pale..- Manvi hugs Jeevika. 'Tum aise nahin re sakti di'.. Biji comes and says to Jeevika privately that she needs to start moving on in her life as Viren won't come back.
Jeevika looks at Biji angrily and walks in her room and shuts the door. -
Inside alone she looks at the wedding pictures of her and Viren and cries. 'Viren, tum mujhe chod kar kyun gaye'.. -
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A few months pass and virat says to them that the case is closed they think Viren is dead and no evidence of what happened. Biji looks down sad and Jeevika runs out the house... Manvi quickly follows her in worry. She finds Jeevika sitting near the gaath staring in the water lost.. - Manvi sits down next to her... 'Mujhe pata hai.. ke tum viren ke bina nahin jee sakti.. lekin tum tumhaara zindagi barbaad nahin karsakti' -- jeevika dismisses manvi ..' Mein teekh hoon jaisi hoon...- Manvi brings Jeevika's face towards her.. 'Tum abhi tak soye nahin... koi khushi nahin..Mein tumko aise nahin dekh sakti Jeevika.. tumhaara muskaan bhi nahin'.. she tears tearlfully. -
Jeevika: 'Kya kar sakti hoon main manvi'?
Manvi: Doosri shaadi? she says reluctantly
Jeevika looks at manvi shocked.. 'kya?!'
Jeevika: NAHIN.. mein nahin karongi!!
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A few months pass and biji continues to pressure Jeevika to marry dr manan...
Jeevika reluctantly agrees - on the engagement day. She looks in the mirror and remembers the times she was having the engagement with viren and the smile on his face. She cries. ...
As the preparations commence.. Jeevika keeps remembering Viren..
Main yahaan hoon plays and she sees viren next to her everywhere.. as if he is saying.. I haven't left you after all..
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8phfxmqQEtI[/YOUTUBE]
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The end twist... as the song ends we see Viren in a dark roon looking out into the light...as if the light is Jeevika. He is still alive...
(Should I continue or no?- The next part would be where Viren and Jeevika nearly meet.. )
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