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Anjali: engagement is on my head and no one is cooperating with me  

Khushi:Anjali ji kya huwa

Anjali: today they will deliver La dress but she is sitting in spa , i have tried to call her but she is not answering

Khushi: ask someone to collect it.

Anjali: khushi ji try bhi to karna na, and they designer is going abroad today

Khushi: aap kya kar sakta ha..

Nani: khushi betiya you go and try aap dono ka size aik he to ha,

Khushi: hum

Anjali: Nani you are great .. aap na tou prob solve kardiya ...

Khushi: per hum kaise 

Anjali: bus aap jai .. hum aik min mein aai.she just walk up stairs 


Arnav: as usual in bad mood ,and not willing to come down or talk to anyone... 

Anjali: chota 

Arnav: di i am busy

Arnjali: chota  please na na karo 

Arnav: kya di haar waqat tang karti ho ...

Anajli: chota aaj engagement dress ki delivery ha please ja kar collect karlo.

Arnav: ask LA 

Anajli: she is not here

Arnav: tou

Anajli: take Khushi she will try as their size is same..

Arnav: just thought for a min ,she was not talking to him and this is a great chance for him to talk to her.."thek ha "

Anajli: chota tum chalo hum aata ha 5 min mein..

Arnav: hmmm he walk down ..." now what will you do Khushi Kumari Gupta"

Khushi was sitting with nani talking she saw him coming ...she just turn her back towards him ...

Anjali : yeh lo chota yeh bhi try karlana  , dress ka saath jaraha ha yeh nahi. she gave him jeweler boxes 

Khushi:in shocked look at them

Anjali: jai Khushi ji

Khushi: just felt she just vanish  from the site...she got up and walk to wards the main door. 

Arnav: gave her  the boxes ... 

Khushi:look at him he just gave a smile  and walk out, "Anjali ji chala"

Anjali: nahi khushi ji bohot kam ha hum nahi ja sakta Chota ha na aap ka saath ..go..

Khushi: just felt she throw everything and run away . she walk out he was waiting  in car..she just seated and he suddenly move ahead and close the belt he just want to feel her , khushi just hold her breath as she was not at all expecting it.

Arnav smiled at himself and started car.. intentional he took long root . he was looking at her she was very tense playing with her dupptta.

they reached the shop ...

owner was not there her assistant was there.

Assistant :aap

Arnav: Arnav 

Assistant: oh ma'ma you come with me...

Khushi: look at him ..

Arnav: may i come too, he knew she will be uncomfortable with a guy

Assistant :sure sir you can help ma'am...smiled 

Aranv: walk with her 


Assistant took them in a room with mirror all around. Arnav look around he saw her all around him he just lost ..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M14W3QS9biI[/YOUTUBE]

.Gumsum chandni ho

Naazneen ho
Ya koi hoor ho


Assistant: ma'am this is your dress. 'i will be waiting out 

Khushi: looked at it

Arnav: change

Khushi: look at him 

Arnav: showed her trail room door .

Khushi picked up the dress and walk in"DM hum aaj kyun aai" 

Arnav: did yous said some thing to me .

Khushi: nahi she just close the door..she change the dress , the zip and the  dori was very low and her hand was not reaching .she just try many times but failed

Arnav: waited it was about 10 mins and he was feeling 10 hours hand passed he knocked the door

Khushi: roka na hum se band nahi horaha. 

Arnav: just open door 

Khushi: turn around 

Arnav walk ahead he could see her back in mirror ...

Khushi: hum kar laga 

Dilnasheen ho
Dilkasheen ho
Ya jannat ka noor ho 


Arnav: just move ahead and stand next to her , pull her from her waist .she just placed her hand on his shoulder ,he look in to her eyes and placed his hand on hers at her back he just turn her around so quickly that she didnot get time to react ,she just placed her hand on his on her waist and close her eyes  ..he just pull the zip up which was stuck in the clothes ...it closed , she could feel his breath on her neck. the he tied the dori... 

Arnav: Done..whisper

Khushi open her eyes 

Arnav trun her around look her in mirror 

Masha-Allah, Masha-Allah, Masha-Allah

Khushi : duppata 

Arnav: wait he open the jewelry box , and give her earring 

Khushi: dekha thek ha

Aranv; shhh just carefully taken off her earrings and made her wear the other . he just stare her in mirror 

Tum saba ho

Ya ghataa ho
Kehkashaa ho
Saaibaan ho

Khushi: bus

Arnav: picked up the necklace and placed in around her neck.tied it thread . it fit her neck .he just softly touch her neckline...

Khushi: just closed her eyes.

 Subah ki pehli kiran ke jaisi

Bebaat alhar pavan ke jaisi
Khushboowen tum lutati ho

Masti mein choor choor 
Arnav: placed the Dupatta on her " done" she open her eyes she was all lost as the dress and his eyes was making her nervous ..
Masha-Allah, Masha-Allah, Masha-Allah
Khushi: thek ha hum change karla
Arnav: hold her hand and  walk out of the trail room " sit her " made her sit on the sofa ..he called the guy..

Khushi was very nervous she was biting her lips. 
Assistant :walk in "beautiful" he one lights and the whole room lighten up .
Arnav look all around she was every where he just smiled .. 
Tum haya ho
Tum rida ho
Tum wafaa ho
Tum nasha ho
Assistant :Ma'am any problem
Arnav: yes its zip is broken he gave him the broken part of it ..
Khushi ab hum yeh khual ga kaisa..
Assistant: oh sorry ...please ma'am you get up and see your self if you fine some defect do tell me.
Arnav: just walk to her and give her his hand ..she hold it and got up ..
Assistant: oh bangles are missing ..let me bring...
Arnav: wait i have he just taken out maa kangan from his pocket and slide one one her each wrist .
Assistant ..smiled "perfect couple"
Khushi: just shyly look at him he just look deep in her eyes,
Assistant "sir if you dont mind can i take few snaps "
Arnav sure 
Khushi: feel like shouting at him but she doesnot want to make a scene..
Assistant : please stand like this Aranv holding her both hand in his ...both look in each other eyes. he capture.
Khamosh nazre sadaaon jaisi
Assistant: please ma'am you sit  
Arnav made her sit carefully he capture it too. ,he just slip and she just hold his hand in her tight
Tumhari baatein duaon jaisi
Arnav:look at her move her dress a side on which he had step ..and kneel in front of her to remove the threads which was stuck with his coat buttons 
Har nafas mein tum samayee ho
Assistant: perfect..capture...  smiled at them ... done
Khushi ; hum change kar la 
Arnav: just didnot reply as he wanted to play shadi shadi more.
Assistant: sir i am very sorry , our staff is not at the outlet you have to help ma'am 
Khushi: just closed her eyes as she knew it would be hard to control their feelings now.
Arnav: no problem .he waited for him to close the lights ,suddenly the room became again dark, as if their dream came to and end and they came back to reality .
Phir bhi ho itni door 

Khushi started walking towards the trial room he just took a deep breath and followed her , she was taking off the earrings she kept it in the box , she just removed the duppata a side taken off the necklace and kept back... waited him to come forward she look back he was standing and staring at the mirror ,
she took a step back so he can open ,he didnot response ,she took one more step back wards ... she was now close to him 
Khushi:just  make sound with the kangan to attract him
Arnav: maa he look at her she was rubbing it to each other...  he just suddenly wrap his arm around her waist and turn her around to him she lost her balance as she was not expecting she hold his both shoulder ,,, he didnot waited or look in her eyes just kissed her madly as if he will never get a chance ... she couldn't breath but could not object in front of his craziness. 
Masha-Allah, Masha-Allah, Masha-Allah
Arnav : just let her go and inhale  rested his forehead with her's she was trying to control her self ..he just hold her hands on his shoulders "dont take them off this is just for you just for you" kissed her both hands 
Khushi: look at him .
Arnav: you are made for me i make my own fate .now i will make our's kissed her back...

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come one guys grow up it is mashaAllah and i dont think there is any problem in it as i am Alhamdulillah Muslim practicing muslim 
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m just wowww...the end..so passionate..loved its every bit..loved this arnav..Edited by sarach - 12 years ago
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Awesome work .. really loved it :)
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Truly amazing... There r a many chances in the upcoming track that she may be alone with arnav i think so and ur os would be best to see.
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awesome work...loved it 
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this is so cute!! muah!! I love it 😍
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Originally posted by: sarach

m just wowww...the end..so passionate..loved its every bit..loved this arnav..

i just felt this song suit them ... and i wrote a OS ...glad you liked it 
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very nice
aweee so cute
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aww...even i wana play shaadi shaadi with ASR
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AWESOME DEAR...very passionate!!!!!
& d song was jus tooo gud...
enjoyed every line...

keep writing & thx for ur pm😊