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Posted: 12 years ago
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tanha tanha jeewan ke

kaise din guzaaray

sun lo sun sako to tum ko aansoo pukaaray

Khushi walk to living room to tell her she is going .

Anjali: nani pata nahi chota hum ko khush kyun nahi nazar aaraha .

Nani: thek hojai ga.

Khushi anjali ji hum jaraha ha ,she saw Arnav coming

Anjali: Khushi ji it is stormy wait let me ask Chota to drop you.

Khushi: nahi nahi um chal jai ga

Arnav: just walk to living room ,as while he was coming back to his room he found Khushi's ring , he picked it up, he wanted to give her back .

Anjali: chota please Khushi ji ko chor aao

Arnav: hmmm

Khushi: rahana da na

Arnav; chalo

chalte chalte sochain kion hai doori

jaaiyn gey kahan

khuwaahish to na ho gi poori

jaaiyn gey kahan jaaiyn gey kahan

jaaiyn gey kahan

LA: ASR why you are going i have to go to sam place as she hand invited me on dinner i will drop her ..

Khushi: took a deep breath  and saw Arnav face which has disappointment ... "kya huwa inn ko ab"

Arnav: just walk back to pool side

Khushi: look at him she knew he was hurt..she just walk out of RM

LA dropped her home .


Payal was in the room she was still dreaming about Akash , she didnot pay attention when Khushi came .

Buaji: aagai

Khushi: ji

Buaji: khatam hogaya kam

Khushi: nahi

Buaji: kyun

Khushi: hum ko abhi kuch aur din jana ha  she just walk to babuji .

Buaji: kal se nahi jao gai

Khushi: babuji  tell me they need my help should i not go..she just hold his hand

babuji : try to say you can .

Khushi: buaji dekha he also want me to go...

Buaji: sanka devi... walk out ,,

Khushi just change and she was restless..

Aamma: khushi khana kaho.

Khushi: maan nahi ..push the plate away and walk out sat on the steps look at the sky" ab bhi humari tarah saatro se poachta ha  faasla karna se pehla" she  had a flash back of his sad eyes full of emotions ... " hum aap ko jawab nahi da saka kyun ka hum ko khud nahi pata amma babuji khush ha ya nahi ... " she was feeling very restless...

Arnav was still sitting on his lawn chair  and staring at the sky...  " why i got weak in front of her" he just closed his eyes...


Khushi walk in as buaji scold her she just walk to room. and lay ... she was not in mood to  talk to any one. she just twist and turn ... time flies she was restless ...got up  and walk to the phone and called

Arnav: picked up he was laying on bed just think about her and his mother letter...he without look sense her ...

Khushi: just didnot said a word

Arnav: mein thek hoon. closed his eyes have a smile on his lips

Khushi: she cut the call and went back to bed and slept .

sun lo sun sako to

tum ko aanso pukaaray

tanha tanha jeewan ke

kaise din guzaaray

sun lo sun sako to

tum ko aansoo pukaaray


next day

buaji: sanka devi where is your ring?

Khushi: ring

Buaji: ha

Khushi: yeh ha ..showed her her bandage hand

Buaji: yeh shyam na di thi

Khushi just shake her head and look on the other hand.."oh yeh kahan gai .."

buaji: find it

Khushi: hunt but could not find it .

 Buaji kahan  ha?

Khushi shayad Rm mine ho i will go and find...she just left for RM ...as she enter she just bang in to Arnav" dekhe kar nahi chal sakta "

Arnav: mera ghar ha jaise mera maan kara ga chalo ga.

Khushi: ha hum janta ha aap ARS ha aap sorry nahi bola ga .she just walk straight to kitchen and started finding her ring ,

Anjali kya huwa

Khushi: meri ring

Anjali: shayad dinning hall mein ho.

Khushi and anjail search there but could not find it ...

Mami ji  phati sari tum ko pata ha yeh miss tiptap aur saso ma aik dosra se naraz nahi ha , yeh to sirf tum ko yahan rokana kaleya kar rahi ha.

Khushi: look at anjali and La" kya yeh sach ha "

LA: woh chamkali...

Khushi: bus hum ja raha ha ..she just picked up her bag and was about to go when Nani and LA started singing song for her Oh la la ...

Khushi could not hold her self she just smiled...

La now you will not go

Khushi: no

LA: till i get married you  will daily come as my friend

Khushi: ok..

Arnav: saw that..

Anjali: did you find the ring ?

Khushi: nahi...

Anjali : aap na pool side per dekhi ha

Khushi: recollected she went there to pick chill... Nhai hum dekhe kar aata ha..

OP: bhai is calling you

Khushi: hum ko

OP: ha..( as per sub taking this part from there)

Khushi: walk to his room she knocked .

Arnav: aao

Khushi: kya baat ha

Arnav: yeh chaiya ?

Khushi: aap ka paas ha humari ring ...

Arnav; hmmm

Khushi:da hum ko

Arnav: first say sorry..

Khushi: sorry..

Arnav: not like this hold your ears and say sorry ...

Khushi : just hold her ears , but he got up and hold her arm...

Arnav: shhh

Khushi sorry

Arnav: hold her both arms .. shhh bus ..

Khushi: da..

Arnav hold her hand and started placing it on her finger.

Khushi: yeh aap kya kar raha ha ,snatch back

Arnav: kya

Khushi: yeh humari maangni kai ring ha

Arnav: what ?tum na muhje ko kyun nahi bataya ...grab her from her arms

Khushi: aap ko kya fariq parta ha

Arnav just pull her more close  "ha muhje ko firaq parta ha Kuynka  Damit"

Khushi : kya

Arnav ; just left her and she just walk away she just turn back and look at him he was staring at her

SAATH DIL KE CHALE DIL KO ROKA NAHIN HUM NE

JO NA APNA THA USAY TOOT KE CHAAHA HUM NE

IK DHOKE MAIN KATI UMER HUMAARI SAARI

KIA BATAIN KISE KHOYA KISE PAYA HUM NE

Khushi : just walk out she just dont want to face anyone...

Op where are you going?

Khushi home

OP: the roads are block you cannot go

Khushi: hum dekhe la ga

Akash : khushi ji  you have to stay here tonight, all roads are block i am just coming from there.

Nani: kya huwa

Akash : told her everything.

LA:chamkali prob kya ha you call home and tell ..them

Nani: wait i will call and tell them ...

Khushi: just wanted to be alone but she was help less.she just sat.


Arnav : just feel like burning every thing around him ... he felt he had lost everything. he just walk to the pool side ,he had a flash back how  she had always be there with him. "he just felt he had lost everything today . "he just look at the sky it was very dark , " maa  today you are too leaving me alone "just sat on the chair and closed his eyes.

dheeray dheeray dil main koi chaahat baqi na rahi

jeenay ki koi bhi soorat baqi na rahi

baaqi na rahi baqi na rahi

Khushi: was sitting with La and anjali bust she was not there... "why he became so upset , kya firaq parta ha"

LA: chamkali after dinner we will watch movie ok

Khushi: ok

Anjali: khushi ji kya baat ha aap itni upset kyun ha

khushi: kuch nahi Anajli ji

Nani; chal khana ka time hogaya ha

Anjali: Akash zara chota ko tou dekho..

Akash: bhai is saying leave me alone ..

Anjali: kal se pata nahi kya hogaya ha chota ko ..

LA: kal se nahi di diwial ka baad se .. haar waqat ghusa karta ha ...

Anjali: baat karan mushkil kar diya ha ..

Khushi: just feel suffocated ... she wanted to run away but could not help .she just sat on table had few spoon of rice..

Nani: aap na tou khana kaiya nahi

Khushi: bus nani ji...she just got up as it was getting hard for her to control...she just walk to La room lock her self in wash room and cried..."why his eyes is bothering me "

sun lo sun sako to tum ko aansoo pukaaray

tanha tanha jeewan ke

kaise din guzaaray

sun lo sun sako to

tum ko aansoo pukaaray

LA: chamkli aao na

Khushi just walk out she sat with Anajli and LA they were watching and doing running commendatory.

Anjali lag raha ha khushi ji ko achi nahi lag rahi..

khushi: nahi aaise baat nahi  hum pani lakar aata ha ..she just walkout to kitchen,while she was coming back ...she saw someone standing at worship place..."yeh iss waqat kon ha "she walk to wards there.

Arnav: "i stop asking form you since i lost my maa , today i am here and asking you give me back Khushi as i feel i will stop breathing if she will go away from me, muhje ko bohot firq parta ha he just kneel down "

kache kache jo bhi daikhe sapne

aansoo hi to hain

zindagi ka haasil apne

aansoo hi tou hain

aansoo hi tou hain aansoo hi tou hain

Khushi: just shock look at Arnav she just walk ahead as she had heard every thing.."aap thek ha"

Arnav: just felt her presence he just though he was dreaming "nahi hoon mein thek,nahi hoon " he just collapses  

Khushi "Arnav ji" just hold him placed his head in her lap he was having fever ..."she just shouted on top of her voice to call everyone but no on hear her as La and Anjali was watching movie with full volume and mami and akash room was very far...pat his cheek"Arnav ji" aankhe khula na please sprinkle water on his face .Arnav open his eyes  look at her 

Khushi:utha help him to get up 

Arnav: khushi

Khushi: ha hum yahan ha  just hold his hand in her's

Arnav:tum he just touch her face to feel her as if she is real or he was dreaming 

Khushi: utha na hum aap ko aap ka kamra tak lajai 

Arnav: i am fine he just got up 

Khushi: roka hum di ko bolai

Arnav: nahi hold her hand 

Khushi: aap ko bokhar ha ,aap ko chaker aaiya tha 

Arnav: i am fine he started walking towards his room.. 

Khushi just followed him to make sure he reach safely

Arnav:turn back and look at her "tum yahan"

Khushi: woh road block ha iss leya 

Arnav: tum ko bhi firaq parta ha ...look in her eyes 

Khushi: just didnot reply as she was not in state to talk.." aap lata hum medicine lakar aata ha "

Arnav: nahi khani he just turn on other side ...she felt he had cried.

Khushi:hum di ko bolta ha phir

Arnav: just hold her hand .. "you stay i will be fine "

Khushi: just couldn't say a word.placed her hand on his forehead 

Arnav: taken out letter from his pocket "maa na tumara leya likha tha"

Khushi: humara leya 

Arnav: ha closed his eyes ,she knew i will not be able to say to you how much i paused

Khushi read the letter ...waise toh hum yeh kangan aapko khudh pehenayenge lekin raaz ki baat hai isiliye khat likh rahe hai...humare chotte ko sambhal ke rakhna...unki naak pe humesha ghussa lekin dil mein dherr saara pyaar rehta hai...unke ghusse ko sambhalna aur pyaar ko sut samet wapas karan.as she stop reading 

Arnav: maa knew me so well. she knew i will be in a fix to admit that to you how i feel for you so she just help me . tears drop from his eyes..."di thek bolti ha jab pyar hota ha to aap ki saas rok jati ha iss ko khona ka daar se ,jis tarah aaj meri roki,kya tumari bhi rokti ha "

Khushi just look at him


Anajli who waited for khushi for sometime, when she does not came back she excuses La and went out she saw Khushi following Arnav and her both arms was behind him as if she was supporting him as a mom does when her kid started walking .she just stop for a while and then follow them  ,right now she was in state of shock to hear all that .

Arnav: bolo his eyes has tears which was flowing down

Khushi: wipe it " ha"

Arnav: tou muhje se bola kyun nahi

Khushi: aap na tou bola tha ka aap ko firq nahi 

Arnav: jhoot bola tha ,sub jhoot bola tha . i am nothing without you .

Khushi: just cried as she was stopping that for very long...

Arnav: just hug her and let her wet his sweater 


Anjali: yeh kya kiya aap na chota ... she just walk back to La room ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Naddiya Di that was really beautiful!!👏👍🏼
❤️❤️ Keep up the great work!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shilparoxx

Naddiya Di that was really beautiful!!👏👍🏼
❤️❤️ Keep up the great work!!😉

thx dear last night i could not add the OS  Edited by naddiya26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awww...brilliant!!!!👏⭐️

Loved it!!!❤️
Edited by RiyaDutta - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was sooo beautiful
At least we get to read scenes like this in your OSs coz it's not going to happen in the story na...
stupid Arnav announces engagement na...
Thanks for this OS, it def was a mood lifter... I feel happy now :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

 

awesome...is all i can say👏

jhoot bola tha ,sub jhoot bola tha . i am nothing without you .--jus loved this❤️

keep writing...


& mny thks for ur PM😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
OOHHH loved it ❤️ .. loved it ❤️..loved it ❤️..  loved it ❤️..loved it ❤️..  loved it ❤️..loved it ❤️..  loved it ❤️..loved it ❤️..  loved it ❤️..loved it ❤️..  loved it ❤️..loved it ❤️..
 
don't know what to say ... you are awsome dear do you know that??
 
fantastic and fabulous story... love every line of it...
Thanks alot for the PM... 🤗 
and update your other stories too coz eagerly waiting to read them also 😃
Posted: 12 years ago
This was really sweet I wish something like this would happen but obviously it won't :(
Posted: 12 years ago
Great update..Continue writing... :-)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was so beautiful...i cried through and through...*sniffles* just beautifully written!!