OS-A New Beginning|Part 2-Pg 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
Heyyo!😊 I'm very much new to this DABH forum. I used to be an active member of India Forums but due to studies, I became inactive. Very recently, I started watching DABH and really like the concept. Plus, I love Suraj! 😳
 
So, I wrote an OS on Suraj and Sandhya. It has two parts. I'm posting the first part.😃
 
I hope you like it.😉 
 
Feel free to appreciate and criticize. 😊 
 
Please do LIKE and COMMENT. It makes me happy.😳😃😛😉😊
 
Part 1
 
'Bhabhi, out of all the sweets that Suraj bhaiyya makes, which one do you like the most?' Chottu asked her.
 
It was just very few days back that she even came to know that Suraj makes sweets. When she came to know that her husband is a halwai, it broke her heart into thousand little pieces. Ever since then, she was least interested in having sweets. She didn't even go to his shop.

'Tell, bhabhi.' Chottu pleaded.

Sandhya could feel Suraj's gaze on her. What would she tell?

When she was about to answer, she heard someone scream for help. She immediately looked back to see a house on fire. She could spot a lady with her daughter in her hands inside the house and crying for help. If she couldn't become an IPS officer, this was the least she could do-save someone's life. She moved forward to run into that house to save the woman. But someone held her hand.

'I will go. You please stay here.' Suraj said.

'Chottu, take care of bhabhi.' Chottu just shook his head and Suraj ran into the house.

This only infuriated Sandhya. She was capable of saving that lady and also taking care of herself. She was no kid.

The woman and her daughter soon came out. After that, the house gave a big fire blow. Sandhya stood there in shock. Where was Suraj?

'Chottu, you're Su..Suraj bhaiyya.' asked Sandhya with a questioning look on her face.

'Bhabhi, you stay here. I will go ask the people there what happened.' Having said that, Chottu ran.

In a minute, Chottu came running back.

'What happened Chottu? What happened?' Sandhya could hear her own impatience in her voice.

'That bhabhi, after that fire blow, no..no one else could es..escape.' Chottu started crying.

She bent down on her knees with her hands covering her face. This was it. No Suraj anymore? All that she could see now was Suraj's smiling face which was slowly fading away.

 
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey archu.nice One shot..superb.👏.
say what happened to suraj?😭
is he fine??😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushini

hey archu.nice One shot..superb.👏.

say what happened to suraj?😭
is he fine??😊

Thank You. I'm glad you liked it. 😃
Oh dear, you will have to wait to read the next part to know the answers.😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊 Welcome to the forum.
 
Hope he is fine.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arch.Archu

Thank You. I'm glad you liked it. 😃
Oh dear, you will have to wait to read the next part to know the answers.😛

😊..hmm..waiting to see him...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome to forum hon ...

Will read it shanti sae , and glad  we had a OS going on them 
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: b2011

😊 Welcome to the forum.
 
Hope he is fine.

Thank You 😃
 
Well, we all are hoping for that 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushini

😊..hmm..waiting to see him...😉

Hope he makes an appearance soon 😳
 
I see that you're a Naksh fan 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: JustJ

welcome to forum hon ...


Will read it shanti sae , and glad  we had a OS going on them 

Thanks for the warm welcome 😊
 
Hope you will like it 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
dont worry i will , anything about Surya, is cute and amazing