MAANEET FF-SAATHIYA-PT 12 PG 128 / THRD 1 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Thank you for new FF dear...
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PART 1

 

 

As he finish all his office work and entre his mansion. The mansion which seems to have no life. Everyone is so engrossed in their world. His mom always busy with her high class parties. His dadi who is not at all well and in any position to even step down from her bed. The only person to whom he can talk freely is dev. His younger brother. They both love each other's and are working on business together. He was about to enter his room when a maid come to him.

 
 
 
 
Sir,  bari ma'am Saab aap se milna chahti hai.He nods his head and went to his room. His dadima always call him to his room and talk to him for some time. Although he knows she is really very talkative and wants always someone to be there but he can only be there for her just for some minutes.

 

 

Changing his cloths he entre her room to find her sitting and looking at his grandfather picture. She looks up at him and smile telling him to come. He went and sat beside her. Aap ne bhulaya?  She keeps the frame on side table and look at him. Maan. Will you give me something which I want?

 

He smiles keeping his hand on her. Aap jo kahe main karunga dadima.

 

 

Beta. Aap ke dadaji ki aakhri kwaahish to. Unke aik dost hai. Inhone apni  aakhri Saans dete ke waqt aik chahat ki thi.

 

 

Kya dadima?

 

Aap ki aur unke dost ki poti ki shaadi.

 

He looks at her shock. Beta. I'm not forcing you. Bus aik baar dekhle.  He look down for some time. His dadima is wanting something so hard from him. This time when he wants to concentrate in his life. His career she wants him to get married and tie himself in a not or responsibility. 

 

 

Sighing he look up at her who was looking at him expectedly. Theek hai dadima. Jaisa aap chahe. She smile and hug him patting his back. jeete raho beta. Her eyes got Moist by remembering the last word of his husband to almost promise him to make Maan and his potion to be married. Hope Maan will like Ger and say yes for this marriage.

 

 

 

Maan come to his room thinking about his talk with dadi. He loves her very much and can do anything for her. But this is his career. His life. He doesn't want to ruin it for any marriage stuff. He will make sure his career won't get disturbed by this marriage. He will make it clear that his life comes first and he will not take any responsibility before that.

 

 

 

Savior sat in her bed and smile remembering the old time. When Balwant and survinder were childhood friend. They both were like soul of each others. But the new generation was not so interested or friendly which always made sad to both the friends. Balwant wished to get married both their grandchild with each others. This was his last wish. Later she came to know that survinder son and bahu died in some car accident. and now only his granddaughter and him glare there. She call him and tell him about maan.

 

 

 HERE THE SHORT BUT FIRST PART FOR YOU ALL..

HOPE YOU LIKE IT.

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Precap : survinder.

 

 NEXT  PART 2

 

 

Edited by zoha25 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi...CONGRATS FOR THE NEW FF...NICE START...CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

superb eagerly waiting for story to proceed further continue soon

Edited by sakshi04 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
wow!!!!!!!!!nice start Zoha...
seems interesting concept...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!woh geet hi hain na..
just waiting for her..