Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Romeo and Juliet!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
too gud yaar keep it up shirley πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 4

(The Montagues r having their dinner)

Shakuntala: romeo...tumhe aaj school main deer hogaye thi kya?
Romeo: nahin....itna late nahin tha........takes a sip from his coke)
Sujal: erm....shivz....mujhe voh....give me the paneer (shivz does so)
Shivz: daal mein kuch kaala hai......(arjun spits out his water he was drinking)
Baisa: Arjun.....yeh koi thareka hai...dining table phar?
Arjun: sorry baisa.....aur yeh shivangi bhi na....kaunse dahl mein kala hai....
Sujal: choro yaar.....hamare behen......
Pooja: arre let it go.....bas galti hogaye hai....aur aabh apna khana kao aur homework karo....
Romeo: Ok memsaab......mujhe badi hogaye ho.....

(Next scene....dinner at the Capulet House)

Diya: so...karan...how did u become frends wid marriyam?
Karan: erm....in the chemsitry class.....i needed a partner to work wid and marriyam teamed up wid me....
Diya: acha...acha....what a pehle nazar....(gives a funny luk 2 marriyam)
Marriyam: tum bhi na...diya
Diya: kya karo....
Tashu: ok...erm...ashmit do u want anything else?
Ashmit: erm...no thanx...
Juliet: so amal....where did u meet ashmit for the first time.....
Amal: erm...i met him in the school gardens where students take a walk.....
Juliet: kool.....
(Pakhi is lost in thoughts of Arjun...when they had lunch together....and when they first met)
Gauri: hey hello......(Pakhi breaks free of her day-dream)....where were u lost?
Pakhi: oh...erm...nowhere.....
Karan: ok everybody....we bets be going now...and thanx 4 the dinner marriyam
Ashmit: same here......thanx 4 the dinner
Amal & Marriyam: no problem
(Ashmit and karan leave)
Tulsi: ok bacho...time 4 bed....

Next day.....at school......

Arjun (humming a song): Hum dil de chuke sanam.....tere hogaye hain hum...tere kasam...(picks up the painting of pakhi).....hmm....i better a gud grade for this painting....
Pakhi: hey!!! (arjun gets scared)
Arjun: pakhi.....tumne tho mujhe daarar dya hai.....
Pakhi: ohh...come on...arjun...ek larka hone ki bavajuth bhi...tum phir bhi daarthi hoo.....very interesting.....
Arjun: oh....insaan tho zindagi mein koi tho kisi shaks sey daar tho lagta hai....jaise mein God sey darta hoo.....aur.....tigers sey bhi....
(Pakhi laughs)
Pakhi: tum tigers sey darta hoo (arjun nods).....mujhe tho buhut ache lagte hain...i luv them......and they luv me....
Arjun: it explains.....iss liye tumne mujhe bite kiya tha....jaise tigers karte hain....
Pakhi: uff....arjun...tum bhi na......aur tum ek chuyi ki tarha....
Arjun: hey.....
Pakhi: hey...relax just a joke....ok...main chalti hoon....

Next scene......Sujal-Tashu.......

Sujal: so...tashu....have u done yur physics homework?
Tashu: erm....no..i havent...really i needed a lot of help.....the questions r so complictaed...
Sujal: erm....u no....we can work on hlping u on yur homework during lunch....
Tashu: r u sure....that will be so helpful.....so sweet of u.....(smiles πŸ˜ƒ ..sujal smiles back)
Sujal: so...howz life?
Tashu; very stressful.....lots of work...and yaar i could go on forever....
Sujal: welcum 2 my world.....(smiles at her...tashu smiles back)
Tashu: ok...i got history now....i'll meet u at lunch...
Sujal: oh ok...c u then.....
(both go in opposite directions, but Tashu's dupatta gets stuck on sujal's watch)
Tashu: woah!!! (turns back)
Sujal: oh sorry....wonder how that happened...(takes the dupatta off)
Tashu: neva mind....(both luk into each other's eyes)
Sujal: ok...
(both leave)

Next scene......Romeo and Juliet

Romeo: so juliet....how r u?
Juliet: oh i'm fine.....what about u?
Romeo: so...erm....about the maths assignment we have...why dont we do it together?
Juliet: sure....sounds like a gud idea 2 me....
Romeo: ok....do u have a free session....now?
Juliet: yeah....so...shall we take a walk?
Romeo: yeah....
Juliet: how many brothers and sisters do u have?
Romeo: i have one sister.....3 brothers.....and i'm the oldest...
Juliet: what r their names? (both sit down on a bench)
Romeo: shivangi....zeeshan...arjun aur sujal...
Juliet: kool...(luks down...the wind begins 2 blow)
Romeo: u didnt tell me about yurself...
Juliet: myself....(juliet's hair keeps getting in her face....and tries 2 move it but keeps blowing in her face)
Romeo: here...i'll help u (helps her move her hair away)
(amal and ashmit come)
Amal: oohh-la-la....
Juliet: amal....and oh...hi ashmit...
Ashmit: hi juliet...and....hi romeo...
Romeo: hey....where r two going?
Amal: us two were going 2 the art class...
Juliet: u're late
Ashmit: i no...c u two.....
Romeo: hmm....so...shall we work on our assignment?
juliet: alrite...

Precap: Tashu feels cold, so Sujal wraps his jacket around her. In the chemistry class, Pakhi gets some acid on her hand, and Arjun gets tensed. Meanwhile, Romeo preserves the maple leaf he had taken out of juliet's hair in one of his books.

Howz dat, ppl?
pakhi joshi thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
so sweet n cute parts----------i love tigers???? πŸ˜†
plz post soon------- πŸ‘
sapna25 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
pretty romantic, huh?... good...chale chalo....likthe chalo.....
πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
great
i wonder when romeo will say the 3 magic words πŸ˜‰
Shirley thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 5

(Next day at school - Arjun and Pakhi r in their chemistry class)

Arjun: so..Pakhi...put the iodine..in there.....and here is the sulphuric acid...and miz it wid that...
Pakhi: oh ok....u r making me do most of the work...
Arjun: well...i have 2 record the results down...accurate..results...
Pakhi: uff...arjun.....(luks at him, and mixes the aic as well...and accidently gets the acid on her hand)
Pakhi: OMG......acid....oh....
Arjun (getting tensed): OMG.....here...put it under the water...rinse it wid water...(opens the tap, and rubs her hand gently wid water)
Pakhi: oh....my hand.....
Arjun: it'll be ok...pakhi....dont worry....
Pakhi: it's my fault...i shouldnt have been luking at u....i should have paid attention 2 my work
Arjun: u were luking me? probably u cant resist my gud luks.... πŸ˜‰ (bandging her hand)
Pakhi: oh really....yur gud luks? oh...even Frankenstein is more gud luking then u...Arjun Montague.
Arjun: what...mere insult kia tumne...frankenstein mujhse ziada haseen hai?
Pakhi: yes....
Arjun (breaks into laughter): hehehehehehehehe.......Pakhi.....ajeeb larki ho tum...
Pakhi: whateva....

Next scene: Sujal - Tashu.....

Sujal: so.....tashu...howz life?
Tashu: oh...not gud....but...some frends like u make it gud enough 2 live (luks at him)
Sujal: really....that is really sweet of u....
Tashu: ok..lets do our ICT Coursework....
Sujal: ok....but why dont we take a walk first...u no...to get a little rest?
Tashu: yeah sure...(both go out..)
Sujal: it's so nice 2 hang out...isn;t it?
Tashu: hmm...i luv it...
Sujal: hey...u want 2 listen 2 music? (takes his I-POD out..)
Tashu: sure....what songs u got on there?
Sujal: erm...romantic ones....like aashiq banaye aapne...aapke pyar mein and all that....
Tashu: romantic songs.....very interesting....
Sujal: tashu...it's not what u r thinking....i just happen 2 like romantic songs....
Tashu: rite...(shivers)
Sujal: oh....u're feeling cold...here...take my jacket..
Tashu: nah yaar....no need
Sujal: come on...u need it (sits closer and wraps the jacket around her)
Tashu: so...erm...do u watch Kavyanjali?
Sujal: oh yeah...pammi...hate her so much...
Tashu: hmm...same here....my sister gauri hates her a lot....(suddenly, the wind blows and Tashu's laal dupatta blows on Sujal)
Sujal: hey u go...u need 2 handle yur dupatta....
Tashu: ok...but u can keep it...
Sujal (smiling more): really.....u can kep my jacket...
Tashu; hehehe....alrite

Next scene: Romeo and Juliet......

Romeo: oh..i'm glad that maths was over and done wid...
Juliet: i no...i wonder how the test went and wid all that homework we got...
Romeo: dont worry......(bell rings)...it is lunch time...
Juliet: ok...lets go.....(go out 2 the shops 2 buy lunch, and are now coming back)
Romeo: here....u know what i do wid my brothers...
Juliet: what?
Romeo: well i drink coke, sujal drinks 7up, arjun drinks thums up, and zeeshan drinks fanta...and we all mix these four drinks and drink it up
Juliet: woah....u lot r funny....
Romeo: here....coke versus 7up
Juliet: ok...(mix their drinks 2gether)....i liked that actually.....yum-yum...
Romeo: told u so.....
(both go back 2 school, and are on the gardens)
Romeo: u no what, shirley, after eating all this junk food....why dont u get..get...
Juliet: get what? hang on....r u calling me fat...?
Romeo: no...i just wondered how can u manage junk food...and so much of it....
Juliet (puts her food on the bench and starts running after romeo): hey...
(both r running around, and Juliet's laal dupatta flies far away....)
Juliet: oh....my dupatta....
Romeo: i'll go and get it....(is about 2 go)
Juliet: really? (pushes him 2 the ground)
Romeo: argh....that hurts...(pulls her down0
Juliet: ow....what did u do that for?
(the laal dupatta flies back and lands on the two lovers' faces, Juliet pulls it off)
Romeo: juliet...u need 2 handle that dupatta of yurs...it keeps flying everywhere...like Prern's dupatta of KZK does....
Juliet: sorry....i shouldnt have pushes u down like that...
Romeo: it's ok yaar....it happens....

Precap: Sujal preserves Tashu's dupatta in his room, and Tashu puts Sujal's jacket away safely. Romeo and Juliet remember flashbacks of what happened at school, and Arjun and Pakhi remember each other.

Howz dat, ppl?
tunna thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 πŸ‘
now i know i'm not wrong in saying that u write gr8
sapna25 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
hmmmm.. so i guess aapke ff mein pyaar ❀️ ka mausam chaya hua hainn...?!!!!!? lovely love stories... keep d love always in ur ff.....


love:
sapna 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
πŸ˜† oh boy i lubd it shirley .... πŸ‘ tooo gud yaar plz cnt soon 😊
Shirley thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 6

(The six indivduals reach home...Sujal keeps Tashu's dupatta in his special box...and smiles 2 himself...Arjun remembers the times when he bandaged Pakhi's hand...and gets lost into his thoughts...Romeo remebers the incident at lunch wid Juliet...suddenly shivz comes in)

Shivz: hey...kya sapne dekh rahe hoo?
Romeo: koi sapne nahin dekh raha hoo....main tho aapna kaan kar raha tha...
Sujal (opening his books): aur mein bhi...
Shivz; ha...jaab mein indaar aaye thi..phir parna shoro kya tum logo nai....varna tum tho sub aapna kaam karte nahin...
Arjun: jo bhi ho...baqwaas ko baand karo shivangi...
shivangi: acha...papa....mummy.....arjun ni kaha ki mein baqwaas keh rahe hoon....
Romeo: gaya....tum tho gaye...arjun...
sujal: koi baat nahin...hum dono tumhara umthiam sanskar kar lege...yur last rites...
arjun: shut up...
(shaku comes wid siddarth)
shaku: arjun...?
arjun: yes mama?
shaku: yeh shivangi kya keh rahe hai...?
arjun: voh...baar baar bolti rahete hai.....kabhi bhi chup nahin karte hai...
shaku: next time...aapne behen ko baqwaas maath kehna ok?
arjun: ok...(shivangi is making faces at arjun behind siddarth and shaku's back..arjun is gettign angry..shaku and siddarth leave)
shivangi: ha ha...mama nai tum phar gussa kya...hehehe...
arjun (mimicking shivz): hehehehe.....kaunse badi baat hai.....iss shivangi ko main nahin choroga....
shivangi: MAMA!!!! arjun hpirse mere kilaaf shoro hogaya hai...
arjun: uff!!!
sujal: arjun....bas karo...yeh kya kar raha ho tum?
romeo: God Bless shivz and u arjun...
(shaku comes in again..)
arjun: mama maine kuch nahin kiya...
shaku: tum...(points 2 arjun)...upar chalo....isse waqt...now!!!!
(arjun goes upstairs)
shaku: aur tum dono (to sujal and romeo)...tum mera chehra kyun dekh rahe ho....mein koi aishwarya rai ho...chalo upar chalo...sab bacho nai mera jeena haram kiya hai...
(sujal and romeo leave)
sujal: uff...yeh mama ko kya hogaya hai?
romeo: yeh sab shivangi ki vagesi hua hai....uff...aise behen kyun mile hume?
shivangi: MAMA!!!! romeo nai mere kilaaf kuch kaha
shaku: ROMEO!!!! mein tumhe nahin chorogi....(runs upstairs)
Romeo: ARGH!!!! oh god...(goes in his room and locks the door).....uff...yeh mera ghar hai ki koi pagal khana? πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
(next scene: capulet house)
pakhi (thinking about arjun): aise mujhe kyun mesoos ho raha hai...kyun mein har waqt arjun ki baari mein sochti hoo....?
tashu (holding sujal's jacket): aise kashish maine aaj thak nahin mesoos ki....such attraction....
Juliet (thinking about the lucnhtime incident): so sweet of him...aur maine usse push kiya tha...uff..how lame of me...
(Pakhi puts a blanket around herself as she is feeling cold...but sees someone's arms around her and turns around and sees arjun putting his arms around her...)
pakhi: arre arjun...tum yahan?
arjun: ha...main yahan...tumhare sapne mein...tumhare dil mein...(comes close and pakhi closes her eyes and opens them and sees arjun gone)
Pakhi; arre mein bhi na...
(Tashu feels tired and puts her folders 2 one side of the table, turns off the music and lies down on her bed...she turns around 2 the other side...she sees sujal in front of her)
Tashu: sujal...tum yahan...chalo..jaao...agar kisi ni tumhe dekh liya tho?
sujal (coming close and sits next 2 her): relax...bas...yeh zaroori yeh ki tum yahan hoo...aur mein bhi yahan hoon.....aur kuch nahin important hai...(hugs her and tashu closes her eyes..opens them...and finds sujal gone and sees she is hugging her pillow)
Tashu: oh....sapna tha...phew....!!!!
(Juliet is doing her homework and puts the books aside and takes a deep sigh...suddenly sum1's arm is gently pulling her head 2 her lap...and sees that romeo is resting his head in her lap)
Romeo; hey juliet...
Juliet: romeo...tum yahan....aur aise..
Roemo: it doesnt matter...(pulls her closer..juliet closes her eyes and opens them and sees her pillow in her lap)
Juliet: uff...mein bhi na...spane dekhte rahe thi hoo..
(Next scene: cezzane is working...madiha is sitting next 2 him)
Madiha: cezzu....kaam hogaya hai kya?
Cezzane: nahin madhu...abhi thak baaqi hai..
Madiha (luking upset): acha....tum karo...mein soni jaa rahe hoo...ok? (is about 2 go but Cezzane grabs her hand)
Cezzane: arre madhu main tho joke kar raha tha...tum serious hogaye....aao sit down wid me...
(madiha sits down and cezzane puts his arm around her)
cezzane: mein tho jok kar raha tha...tho phir tum react kaise karogi..lekin..tum bhi na..
madiha: kya karo...tumhare madiha aise hai...
cezzane: iss baat mein koi shaq nahin hai...(pulls her cheeks as a joke)
madiha: chalo..dinner ka time hai....chalo..
Cezzane: acha...chalo....(puts his arms around her)
madiha: kya hai...stop it...
cezzane: kya...wife ki saath ho...aur tum bhi na...
madiha: ha...mein bhi na...(laughs and cezzane hugs her)

Precap: The girls try and tell their frends (sujal-arjun and romeo) about their dreams, but dont have the courage to do.

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