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What a mind blowing piece of a verse composition...👏
Loved each line to bits...😃
Terrific portrayal of a strong affiliation between the two...
Indeed a perfect interpretation of the bond...😳
These lines were brilliant..👏👏
In the line of duty, you shall never see me flinch
Nor shall I uphold anything over my duty's call
But when it comes to those I love, then in a pinch
My entire being collapses like a brittle wall
Nor shall I uphold anything over my duty's call
But when it comes to those I love, then in a pinch
My entire being collapses like a brittle wall
These were heart warming...😳
know you taught us the importance of sacrifice
The spectre of death leaving doubt if we'll survive
I care not about myself, but feel chills cold as ice
For I cannot even think of my family not being alive
The spectre of death leaving doubt if we'll survive
I care not about myself, but feel chills cold as ice
For I cannot even think of my family not being alive
Bro, you are blessed with an adroit pursuit, a whole lot grip on poetry👏👏👏
This was beyond any reproach...😃
Thanks a ton...🤗
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